The rewritten version of my KFP Story. The story of a lost human.

Grammar might be kind of bad because I'm Dutch.

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Fire, smoke and ash. Everywhere around me. I saw Monkey, Crane, Viper and Mantis lying unconscious on the floor. They didn't move, they we're paralyzed. Chi -blocked actually. I then stood on my feet, but almost fell over because my legs we're just way too damaged. "What have I done…?" I thought to myself and looked around me, I couldn't believe that I did this.

Then I looked up and looked at him, straight into his face. I heard his ice-cold laugh and just glared at him before he spoke. "Are you ready to give up little girl? There is nothing you can do now! Your friends, defeated. And look at you, you're all alone!" I just kept glaring at him, yes he was right one way. But I would never give up.

"I would rather die…" I said and he chuckled. "Foolish girl… you just lost everything… EVERYTHING! And you would give up you're precious life, just for that?" I looked at the ground, he's right. I just couldn't believe it but he really is right. Why am I doing this? Everyone is hurt and… no one cares about me now…

I closed my crystal blue eyes and I let one tear go through them, I'm ready to die… "Very well… Let's finish this, shall we? Take aim!" I heard the cannon take its position and I took a deep breath before I heard a shot and I knew I am going to die today…

Oh WAIT WAIT! This is WAAAAAY too soon. Before I can tell you how I died you need to know the story of how I came there, how I lost anything and how it began.

It all began when I was just heading home after a long, very long day of school. I hate it there, so, so much! Why? Because they all treat me like I'm so good for nothing no buddy loser while they all have fun with each other and do things they actually shouldn't do! Yes! I'm talking about you know what! Anyway… I hate school. When I got home I was almost EXPLODING! Why? Because of all the shit I just had in school.

But the thing is, I never let my anger get out. I just keep letting it in and in… It just needs to come out! So then I thought about something, Kung Fu! I heard it's good to control your anger! So I just put on my laptop, searched for a Kung Fu dojo that can help me and I signed me in!

And after a week I stood in front of the Dojo and looked at it. It looked so big and so peaceful. I went inside the huge building and looked around. No one was there? But why is the door open? Then I came into a room with one huge mirror standing in the middle of the room. I walked to the mirror but when I looked in it I didn't saw myself.

"Strange…" I then put my hand on the mirror and touched it, but then I saw my hand go through it and my eyes got wide. "What the?" I then took a deep breath before putting my foot inside the mirror and going through it myself. Then I saw something I can never forget again in my life! I saw a city, old buildings but instead of people, I saw animals walking around.

I saw that the old buildings must come from China or something like that, was I in a weird kind of China? Anyway, it was rather peaceful actually. Well until I heard a woman scream and I walked to the scream. "Just give me the money lady!" A… big huge crocodile said to an old goat that looked like a woman. "I-I don't have any money…" She said rather scared and I saw that the Crocodile started to get mad. "I'm warning you! MONEY NOW!" I knew he wanted to hurt her so I just walked to them.

"Hey! Let the lady go!" I yelled to the crocodile but I actually wish I didn't do that because the crocodile wasn't alone, he was with a group. "GET HER!" The big crocodile said and they we're going after me and I just ran away as fast as I could. I ran through the streets and I hided someplace with a lot of people. Animals actually. The crocs we're gone and I turned around to see every animal looking at me. It was pretty weird actually.

"Hey…" I said and waved quite awkward to them and they just stared at me. " What animal is that?!" "A… shaved monkey?" "What happened to her paws?" "Why is she so… furless?!" They all asked questions and I just backed off before running up a huge stairs. I walked up, and up… and up… and… up... Then when I was there I just laid down on the ground and closed my eyes, I was exhausted. Then when I opened them again I saw a panda looking at me and I blinked.

"Hey… can I help you?" He asked me and I looked at him before sitting up and looking at him. It actually was the first friendly face I've seen. "Uh yes… I'm kind of lost and I need to find a place… where I can stay for the night… " He looked weird at me… I think it was because I looked so strange to them. "Oh well… I think you can stay here…" He said to me before giving me a weird face again.

"Can I ask you a question?" I just nodded. "Well… What animal are you? You look pretty weird…" I should have known he was going to ask me this. "I'm a human… and this may sound strange but I was going to learn Kung Fu at a Dojo but when I got inside I saw I mirror but, surprise! It wasn't a mirror… I walked through it and it brought me here!" He just gave me the weird look again and I sighed. "Please believe me…" He just kept staring at me and I sat down on the stairs.

"It's kind of weird to explain where I come from… of who I am… I don't even know if this is a dream or not… I understand if you think I'm crazy and not let me stay anymore… Just go…" I sighed and rested my elbows on my knees, but as a surprise to me he sat down next to me and smiled at me. "I'm not judging you! Come, let's go inside… I'll ask my master if you can stay." I smiled back at him and I stood up and followed him inside.

When I was there I looked around. It was beautiful. So wonderful and amazing! "Welcoem to the Jade palace… uh… What's your name actually, you know if humans have a name…" The panda said to me. "Susan, but you can call me Sue." Oh yeah! I didn't introduce myself to you guys! We'll like I said! I'm Sue! "Well Sue, my name is Po…" The panda said and I smiled.

"PANDA!" I heard someone yell and I turned around and saw a little red panda. "Master Shifu!" He bowed to him and I blinked before looking at him. "Master, this is my new friend. Sue." He said to the red panda, apparently his name was Shifu, Master Shifu. He looked at me and I saw him thinking. "What kind of animal are you, Sue?" He asked me, again the same question they always ask me.

"I-I am a human… Master Shifu…" Then I saw his little eyes get wide and he just looked at the ground. "That's impossible… Oogway was right again… but… how?" "Uhm, master Shifu? What's going on?" But Shifu just walked away before he stood still and looked at me and Po. "Po, give our guest a room to stay… I'll be gone for meditation …do not disturb me!" He then walked away and left me and Po behind.

"What's wrong with him?" I asked Po and he looked at me. "I have no idea. I think we will find out later I guess. Anyway, follow me. I'm going to bring you to your room." He started walking and I just followed him. Oh well… I don't know what's going on here… But I'll find out later I guess.