A/N I have some people from Sparky Dearly's website reviewed my stories and gave negative feedback. Now I was about to rant about how 90% of the readers that reviewed Dave's Worst Nightmare were positive and spurred me on, but now that I think about it, 90% of you didn't give me any feedback or anything negative that I could correct and this left me carrying on blind not knowing if my story was going to accomplish anything. Now reading it all the way through I clearly ran dry on ideas and everything was a mess and I wasn't thinking about what the sequel was going to be about I just wrote because I felt the story was on a cliff hanger, but it wasn't really finished or written in great depth. Yeah ok Luisa you did kick me up the backside and you OddBall.

So a question to those 78 or so reviews that told me to carry on.

What did you really think of it?

Oh and Marsha, my review I posted last night was ill mannered and inappropriate. I was upset at the fact you were shown to be targeting me, but I just didn't see that you were trying to help by telling me my story was awful and you know what you're right it is awful, there I admit it. I have read better stories. I clearly lost my way on the point of the story, I read it all again trying to piece it together, and it didn't really establish a plot and a sequel therefore wasn't necessary. I can't delete the review now that I have posted it and I shouldn't have and I'm offering you my deepest and sincere apologies for everything. After I posted chapter 4 I fell asleep thinking 'Damn I'm really not establishing any plot whatsoever' so consider this an apology and a thank you to you critics for opening my eyes and actually to be honest I hadn't read what I posted. I was too full of myself and now I won't post anymore bad chapters, I'm going to do what I should've done a long time ago. Re-educate myself in writing a successful story. I'm going to start again now.

Post your honest reviews on this note,

What you ACTUALLY thought of Dave's Worst Nightmare?

Except for , OddBall and Luisa, I already have your opinion and I agree on that now.