DISCLAIMER:
I am not Christy Hui therefore I do not own Xiaolin Showdown or any of these characters :(
Okay everyone, this is my first fanfiction story, but I don't quite like how the characters looked in the actual T.V. show. So, I searched around until I stumbled onto this pretty little picture :) Four_Dragons_by_liline_by_Xiaolin_
So instead of picturing these little preteens you can picture: Omi as 16; Kimiko as 17; Raimundo and Jack as 18; Clay as 19
This is usually how I picture the monks when I read a FanFic anyways! Oh, and also I want Jack to actually be evil, I hate how he was a pansy in the show :PSo now he's pretty hot, evil and dark. This is my first fic so I really have no clue on how to write a "Summary" but I only want to put the first few paragraphs up until I get a review. I need you to tell me if its worth finishing and I would love ideas and constructive criticism :) please and thank you!
P.S. I have edited :D again... This is a really short chapter sorry /=
Fluttering her eyes open to her phone's vibrating alarm, Kimiko hopped out of bed and grabbed her shower bag to rush to the nearest bathroom around her room [cubicle]. She stumbled down the narrow hall, paved with marble tiles, and slipped into a large metal door with intricate dark bronzed-colored designs. It was early morning, Saturday, February 14, 2009 at 4 A.M. Honestly, this wasn't a daily thing for her. She wanted, no; needed, to see if she really screwed up as badly as she thought she had.
She stepped inside the large, luxurious, but tranquil bathroom lavished in red and gold drapes, with fine soaps and silk robes, a large glass shower was on the eastern wall and a hot-tub-sized bathing tub was on the western wall. The monks had been awarded this fine bathroom three months after Raimundo had become leader. The low, warm lighting made it easy for her eyes to adjust as she paced toward the gold colored vanity table with a little gold seat and gold framed oval mirror.
The temple was fun, but the young monks got in trouble a lot. This time the trouble was pretty big, obviously more than she could handle. The Xiaolin Temple had a lot of rules and regulations, but having relations with other teammates wasn't advised. Having an intimate relationship was not tolerated. These teenaged dragons were told to keep sex for marriage. They were meant to be monks, not teenagers but monks. They needed to take their job seriously and when they messed up, they were punished. Usually punishment meant cleaning some part of the temple or having to do extra training but the varied depending on what the dragons were being punished for.
She fumbled through her purple shower bag with tiny yellow hearts and a yellow heart chain on the zipper. All she was wearing was a tiny pair of dark blue soffee shorts, and a white wife beater with some white flip flops. Her raven black hair was half way up in a messy bun and half was trickling down her back. Her hands were shaking but she managed to pull out a long, pink/metallic package with the words 'First Response' on it. Even though she had never used a pregnancy test before, she was pretty certain on the general idea.
She walked over to the clean porcelain seat and tore open the package...
That's all I got for now P.S. please review!
(:thank you so much Maggie and xXWindxFireXx by the way sorry for the cliff hangers! I don't think its much of a cliff hanger though:)
Love&Rockets, =] Alex! [=