hi guys!!
that's the prologue of price of freedom... it's just a idea.. if you like it, tell me and i'll continue... if you don't, i'll stop^^
so it's up to you
oh, and i'm sorry if i made (m)any mistakes, i'm not that good at english
Slowly, I stood up and looked behind me. You were still there. You smiled and took my hand.
"Can you see the birds?"
I nodded.
"They are free. It must be a wonderful feeling."
I nodded.
"We'll escape that cage around us. We'll be like the birds" You whispered that sentences right into my ear. You kissed my neck.
I nodded.
"We will be free like the birds above us."
Again, you kissed me. On the cheek. It felt so good.
"There will be no chains. We can go anywhere we want to"
I nodded.
"No rules. Nobody to tell us what to do"
I nodded.
"No work. Our life will be just for ourselves."
I nodded.
"We'll be able to smell the aroma of the flower you always look at. The blue one."
"The red one, too?"
"Yes. Even the yellow one. Do you remember? You said it looked like the sun."
I nodded."
"Do you know what to do?"
I nodded.
"Do you know why?"
I nodded.
"Will you do it? For us?"
I nodded.
You kissed my right eye. "Does it feel good?"
I nodded.
"You want more?"
I nodded.
"Then do it."
I nodded.
"Now. Hurry."
I nodded. Your hand tightened the grasp around mine. I felt your breath in my neck.
You where here. With me. And you would stay. Forever.
My hands trembled. I closed my eyes and pulled the trigger. I didn't feel the pain in my right shoulder, all I heard was the incredible loud noise, that nearly killed my eardrum.
At the time I opened my eyes, my father was dead. And I was alone.
sooo.... like it... review
don't like it: do whatever you want^^
as i said, it's something i'll continue if i'm asked to... i really don't have time to write a story that noone'll read^^ maybe that sounds arrogant, but i'm writing on over 5 story's right now, i have school and many other things to do...
sternenhagel