Hola, it's Tori. :)
Well, this story is also written by Jess too. So, yeah. She has the same story on her profile (though she has a different author's note and her own personal touchs LOL). xD
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Anyhow, here is the story . . .
Can I Transform You?
Bella Point of View: BPOV
My name's Bella. I've been seventeen for over a century. I'm a blood sucking monster who drinks for innocent humans, well the not so innocent ones. Now I'm in the rainy town of Forks, Washington searching for my next victim. There's a good one. She looked to be a senior, and a slut. She was a bottle blonde and was currently rubbing herself up against a blonde-haired, blue eyed boy.
"Oh em gee! Its so effing cold! Mikey! Hold me tighter!" Her high, grating voice had me almost to the point of covering my sensitive ears. The look on 'Mikey's face said he was only with her for one thing. That slut is definitely my next target. The world could do with one less whore.
Now, how do I get her away from blondie? Sit and wait? Maybe he'll leave. Finally, he went to his car, about two blocks away. The slut had murmured something about 'alone time' and Blondie had immediately gotten up with a huge grin on his face.
The boy was taking his time getting to his car. There is a dark alley behind the slut, she is too busy texting to notice anything at the moment. Perfect. She looked to the side, to glance at the boy. I ran into the alley in a second, passing by the side where the girl wasn't looking. I hid behind a door frame. Show time . . .
"Baby!" I called, imitating the boy's voice. The girl looked up and I heard her giggle. She hopped up from her perch on the bench she had been sitting at and bounded back towards me. I stepped out from the shadows as she looked around.
"Like, who are you?" She asked condescendingly.
I grinned, ominously at her. Her eyes widened. "I'm you're worst nightmare," I answered using the line from Mulan, before leaping at her. Her head hit the concrete floor as I bite her neck. Her blood flowing into my throat, soothing the dry, burning.
"OH EM GEE!! YOU'RE GETTING BLOOD IN MY HAIR!" The girl screeched. I covered her mouth and removed my teeth from her neck.
"You have got to be joking! I'm killing you and you're worried about the blood in your hair?!" I retorted. I'm getting 'Punk'd' aren't I? She nodded, not saying a word. "Whatever," I sighed before biting her again.
"So, you're like a vampire? Yay! I get to be a vampire! I'll be sexy and immortal and guys will never be able to resist my charm!" She cried in delight and pain. This brat was getting on my nerves. Never once removing my teeth, I reached up and snapped her neck. The world would be a dark place if she was turned. I did everyone a favor.
The sound of the slut's heart beat disappeared quickly. I let go of her neck and stood up from the ground. Little puddles of blood lay around her body. The dry burning in my throat gone. I licked my lips. That was a good dinner . . .
I decided I wanted more, as I didn't feel satisfied enough. I raced across town emerging from an alley that connected two streets. There was a boy going the opposite way across the street. His eyes were a golden color and his hair was a beautiful bronze. Problem: he had no heartbeat. He was an immortal like me.
Not noticing my presence, he walked into the misty forest. His shadow following him. Maybe I should follow him. I ran into the forest, hiding behind a tree watching the bronze haired vampire. Another vampire appeared. He was much more muscular than the bronze hair boy. However, both of them had the same topaz eyes.
What caused the unusual color? Were they a coven? They muscular boy called to the bronze.
"Edward! Where have you been? Alice is looking for you! Says its very important you go hunting in this area, now," The muscular boy said. Hunting? Now? Here? There are no humans in the woods! Edward nodded before running deep into the forest. The other vampire ran off into a different direction.
I decided to continue following Edward. Hm . . . that name is sexy. There may be a chance that he will see me, so I need to transform. This is one of the advantages to having the power to transform into a husky.
After changing into my sleek black and white body, I took off at unnatural pace after the bronze haired vampire. I found him drinking from the neck of a deer. Drinking from an animal? Disgusting, and I didn't believe it possible. I was so involved in my thoughts I tripped over a thick root and let out a hair raising yelp. Edward looked up from his kill. I'd fallen out of the cover of undergrowth and he was looking at me. Oh crap.
He walked towards me, his eyes darker. I walked backwards into a tree. I'm dead, I am SO dead. He growled, showing off his pearl white teeth that has drops of blood on it. His facial features sharp as glass. I whimpered and covered my eyes with my paw. Just get it over with! I expected him to bite me, but what he did surprised me . . .
"Hello sweetheart. You're a cute little dog, aren't you?" he said and ran over to me. I looked at him. He started petting my head and massaging behind my ears. I smiled and licked his face. Ha, I just kissed him. He smiled at me. Oh yeah, he liked it. I lay down on the ground, hoping he would rub my belly. Dogs do that right?
"Come on. Lets get you home and see if we can't find you're owner," He said to me. I stood up and stretched. It was easy pretending to be a dog. My eyes were blue and green when I was a dog, so his coven would never suspect anything. I wonder what the other two in his coven would be like. He picked me up in his arms and shot through the forest. He was very fast. We arrived at a large house that was bordering on mansion size.
"Hello?" Edward called. I snuggled my head into his soft chest. He smells amazing.
"Hello, Edward. What's this?" a woman walked into the room. She has caramel hair and a heart shaped face. She also has golden eyes. Back off, girl. He's mine.
"Oh, I found her while hunting. I think she is lost," Edward answered. She smiled at me. My ears pricked up as I heard more vampires. Just how many are there in this coven? The muscley boy from before came down the stairs followed by a beautiful blonde woman, a tall, lean blonde man covered in battle scars, a black haired pixie like girl, and a tall, golden-haired man who oozed leadership.
"I cannot believe you! Why on Earth would you bring a dog to this house?!" the blonde woman snarled at Edward. I growled at her quietly. Edward chuckled at me, giving me a crooked smile.
"She's lost and adorable," Edward answered.
"Oh great, because you can't find a mate you have to get a dog? Are you going to become like one of those old women with a bunch of cats?" the muscular vampire commented. I bite my tongue trying not to laugh. Edward narrowed his eyes at him.
"Emmett stop," the caramel haired woman warned him. So Muscle head's name is Emmett? He could be fun to mess with. "Edward? Does she have a name?"
He touched his fingers lightly to my neck searching for a collar. He shook his head and his ghostly fingers left my neck fur. Edward set me down and I padded over to the pixie-like girl. She leaned down and whispered at vampire volumes.
"Hello Isabella. My name is Alice. If you try to prank me your secret will be blown," Alice threatened. How did she know?
"Edward? Why doesn't she have a heart beat?" the blonde hair guy asked. The room fell silent. I whimpered, hoping they would forget that little detail.
"I don't know . . ." Edward said confused.
"Oh! I know!" Emmett said. Everyone looked at him. "She must be from the Pet Cemetery!" Everyone, including me let out a sigh. They all looked at me and laughed.
"Even Bella notices how stupid Emmett is!" Alice giggled. Blonde boy looked at her.
"Alice dear, she's not ours. You can't name her," He sighed wearily. I looked at him with puppy dog eyes.
"She doesn't have an owner! I've looked into the future and she'll be with us until she dies!" Alice retorted. I die? Edward picked me up and brought me to a room upstairs that was golden in everything, the walls, the carpet, all the luscious shade of his eyes. Edward kneeled onto the floor, releasing his grip around me.
Aw man. I was just getting comfy. I stood on all fours and looked around the room. "All right. This is going to be your room for now. Rest, sweetie," he told me. I licked his face and smiled. He smiled back and exited the room. I sighed. This is going to be a long night, especially with the pixie around . . .
"Bella! Come here sweetheart!" Alice called to me. I turned away from the beautiful room and trotted down to where I smelled Alice. She shut the door and knelt down before me. "Esme is going to offer you some food soon. You can't eat it so I'll cover for you. We'll be going hunting soon, you're still full, but as soon as you're not please try our eating habits." she whispered to me. The caramel haired one, Esme, called me downstairs. She had a bowl of dog food in her hand and set it down in front of me.
"Esme! Bella's shy. She won't eat with us watching her," Alice told Esme knowingly. I nodded at her. If I were to disobey her, she would expose my secret. I'm so screwed!
XD I hoped you enjoyed that. Jess and I have been working on it for quiet a while, I hope you review in return. xD
This story is also on Jess' profile, so you could check it out there if you want. xD Her penname being 'There r voices in my head'. I LOVE that penname. It is my favorite. xD
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~Tori~