The Tale of a Renegade of Fire

" Words"

"Thoughts"

" Fire/Anger/Sorrow"

...A renegade...I had no chance for survival. Outcasted and sent from my native land, left for dead. I am Dan, a Fire Bender outcast from the Fire Nation. Unlike Prince Zuko, I was not givin a scar to show I was outcasted, but given a much worse punishment... but for you to be able to understand my situation, understand and comprehend my pain, I will go ahead and tell you what happened before i was outcasted...

"Mom! Myuki is picking on me again!" I shouted. "Make her stop!"
"Myuki" Mother said in her usual, calm, reasurring voice."Leave your older brother alone."
"Alright, alright. I'll leave the big baby alone." My younger sister Myuki, who was at age 8 and myself was 12.
"Keep working on your forms Dan, and you too Myuki." Mother said. "You will both have to show your worth to the Fire Lord."
"Who cares about Fire lord Sozen? Whats so great about him?" Myuki said in a disrespectful tone. "Im tired of proving my worth for a stupid, power-hungry old man."
Mother glared at her with a fury like i've never seen before. Mother has been upset with my sister and I in the past, but this was beyond her normal kind of anger. "Get back outside and practice your Fire bending or ELSE Myuki!" Mom said in a ferocious tone.
"Yes...ma'am..." Myuki replied in a hushed, saddened volume.

After Myuki got in trouble for insulting the Fire lord, we both went outside to practice our bending, fearing the fact that we would suffer consiquences if we did not do as told.
I tried several times to keep my formations as close to perfect as possible, but alas, I failed.
"huh...huh...darn...huh...it" I said gasping for air after losing my concentration."Why do we have to keep doing this?" I asked my sister. "I'm terrible at Fire bending...unlike you."
"Its to prove our worth so we can fight in the war" Myuki said in a soft tone that was a suprise to hear from her.
"Whats the matter?" I asked. "Your usually a loud-mouth and getting on my nerves."
"...one of us...is going to be banished if we do not do well tomarrow in front of Sozen." Myuki said almost crying. " I don't want to be banished!"
"Here" i said. "I'll help you with your bending, or atleast what im good at..."

That Night...IT Happened...
"...m-mom..." I said half-asleep. "W-where are you?"
No one answered. I crept around the corner and found a note with a blade dug into the ground to keep the paper still. I picked it up and slowly read over it. It said:

"The woman living here is now my prisoner. If you ever want to see her again, bring 100 gold pieces to this location."

On the back was a map, and what supprised me was the region of where this perpitraitor is located...inside my own nation...the nation of Fire...

thats all for the first chapter, hope everyone enjoyed my avatar story's begining!