I've been reading Breaking Dawn again and I wasn't really that satisfied with the ending. Good thing there is fanfiction, I will make an alternative one! BWAHAHA!
Disclaimer! I do not own twilight but the plot in this story is ALL mine!!
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PROLOGUE:
I choked the vampire in front of me. How dare he defy me? I am his queen, the supreme being of the vampires?
He disgusts me with tales unheard of and naturally unacceptable? He tells me that I am his wife and we have a child. This man is my husband and we have a child. Despicable! I am a vampire and it is common sense to know that creatures like us couldn't conceive! How could I be pregnant and bore his child? It is impossible to imagine. If it really did happen, I should still be pregnant because female vampires cannot change nor mature in order to adapt to a human woman's cycle.
I smirked when he said he loved me. I do not even know this man. I made up my mind and I am going to stop this foolishness once and for all. I will kill him.
I will make his death more painful than normal. I am not going to use any sort of my special ability to kill him. I will only use my strength. This will give him a chance to gain his saneness and repent. I am a kind queen and I will forgive whenever one asks nicely.
I heard my Volturri guards come to my throne room. I never let my golden eyes away from the pitch dark pupils of my prey. If humans could sweat, I am positive that he could've been soaked and drenched already.
I sneered at his fear. Why wouldn't he fight back? I know he is one of the best vampires in the world and he could've been a threat if he fights back. He could've gotten his chance. How stupid of him.
"Queen Isabella! Please don't hurt him" A man escorted by Aro shouted. His hair was blond, familiar. What is the name that they call him? Carlisle, is it?
I cackled without lightening my grip unto the man that I was holding. "Why should I follow a command of a lowly commoner?"
"Bella, please." He pleaded. He sounds so desperate that I enjoy it.
I glanced at Aro who didn't show emotion at all but I could see a glint of begging for mercy of this young man.
"Bella, love… I love you…" The man whispered under his choked neck. I got angry at his remark at the same time, something in my chest tugged. My heart? I have no heart.
I let go of his neck and punched the wall. "Absurd! Stop speaking of such insaness."
I am so angry I could've killed him right there, right now.
"I'm sorry. It's my fault." The voice croaked. I felt pity and I shouldn't be feeling this way. That man is trying to wrap me around his finger. I am not that soft and easy to persuade.
I took a glimpse on the doorway. I see that my audience has grown. Every vampire that is important is here. A man that was big as a bear was there, a small girl who had spiky hair, a younger man with blond hair, a woman whose beauty and features were gentle and caring, a girl who had blond hair and beautiful compared to the other vampires and all the others.
I felt fury burning inside me. Why are they here? Why do they care to this idiotic man who always declare his love and that he knows me?
I hate it. I felt my control has taken its snap. I looked back at the man who had copper hair and glared. He was lifted up from the ground by an unseen force that was controlled according to my desire.
I chucked grimly. He is close to his death now.
"Any last wishes Edward, my dear?" I mocked him. I am amused by his pain.
"I just want you to forgive me love. I'm sorry. I love you more than my own existence." With that he closed his eyes and embraced his fate.
Involuntarily, I closed my eyes too.
Edward.
Love.
Death.
Goodbye.
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