Hey ppl it's me again. I'm writing a new story, I don't know how well it will turn out but I hope you like it and I'm sorry I demanded to have reviews on my other story but it helps me to improve that's all.
Disclamer I don't own any of the characters I may add some later but I don't know here goes.
Ch.1 To The Palace
Alanna sighed, staring wistfully out the carriage window. She was on her way to the palace to see her brother and unfortunately to look for a husband.
Why did Thom have to chicken out on me? He could have become a great sorcerer and I could have been a knight. He's got it coming!
Smiling and thinking of ways to torture her brother she noticed that they were coming to a halt. Wonderful. We're here already!
Stepping out of the carriage, Alanna looked around at the many faces in the courtyard. She saw a flash of red hair and turned to look into the purple eyes of her twin.
"Hello sister dear, you look lovely." Thom hugged his sister.
Scowling Alanna hugged her brother back. "You'll pay for that later, brother."
"Still at your tricks, Alanna?" Thom held her at arms length to look at her.
Alanna, noticing Thom's gaze, blushed, and turned her attention to the people in the courtyard. A tall young man with coal black hair and sapphire eyes stepped forward and tapped Thom's shoulder, bringing him to the present.
"Thom, who is this lovely Lady?" Alanna blushed at the man's words. It could only have been Prince Jonathan of Conté.
"Oh Jon, this is Lady Alanna of Trebond, my sister. Alanna, His Highness Prince Jonathan of Conté."
Alanna curtsied "Highness. It's a pleasure to meet you."
"It's nice too meet you to Lady Alanna." Jon bowed.
"Please, just call me Alanna. None of this 'Lady' business." Alanna hated being called "Lady".
Jon was surpried. Most woman would be mad if they weren't addressed properly but on the other hand he understood her. He hated being called "Highness" or "Prince".
"Only if you call me Jon."
"Fair enough, Jon." Alanna turned to her brother.
"Well brother dear are you still bad at fencing or have you improved?" Smirking Alanna stared at her twin for an answer.
"You insult me, sister. I've improved greatly."
Jon laughed at this "If by improved you mean he can lift a sword, yes, but use one properly, no."
That's all it took for Alanna to go into bouts of laughter while Thom scowled at her antics.
"As much as I'd love to stay and laugh at my brothers expense I would like a tour."
"Well Alanna, where do you want to go?" Thom regretted his question for he already knew the answer.
"I would like to see your practice courts and stables I need to check on my mount to make sure he got here alright."
"You want to see the practice courts?" Jon was surprised
"Yes I do. Is something wrong?"
"Well no, but most ladies usually want to see the gardens."
"Ah but I'm not your typical Lady and I find the gardens most boring compared to the practice of weaponry."
"Well then Alanna, shall we go?" Jon asked.
Alanna curtsied and took the arm Jon offered her and they started towards the practice courts chatting like old friends.
Ok tell me if you like it and if I should continue to write it because this is all I have. Please Review?
Disclamer I don't own any of the characters I may add some later but I don't know here goes.
Ch.1 To The Palace
Alanna sighed, staring wistfully out the carriage window. She was on her way to the palace to see her brother and unfortunately to look for a husband.
Why did Thom have to chicken out on me? He could have become a great sorcerer and I could have been a knight. He's got it coming!
Smiling and thinking of ways to torture her brother she noticed that they were coming to a halt. Wonderful. We're here already!
Stepping out of the carriage, Alanna looked around at the many faces in the courtyard. She saw a flash of red hair and turned to look into the purple eyes of her twin.
"Hello sister dear, you look lovely." Thom hugged his sister.
Scowling Alanna hugged her brother back. "You'll pay for that later, brother."
"Still at your tricks, Alanna?" Thom held her at arms length to look at her.
Alanna, noticing Thom's gaze, blushed, and turned her attention to the people in the courtyard. A tall young man with coal black hair and sapphire eyes stepped forward and tapped Thom's shoulder, bringing him to the present.
"Thom, who is this lovely Lady?" Alanna blushed at the man's words. It could only have been Prince Jonathan of Conté.
"Oh Jon, this is Lady Alanna of Trebond, my sister. Alanna, His Highness Prince Jonathan of Conté."
Alanna curtsied "Highness. It's a pleasure to meet you."
"It's nice too meet you to Lady Alanna." Jon bowed.
"Please, just call me Alanna. None of this 'Lady' business." Alanna hated being called "Lady".
Jon was surpried. Most woman would be mad if they weren't addressed properly but on the other hand he understood her. He hated being called "Highness" or "Prince".
"Only if you call me Jon."
"Fair enough, Jon." Alanna turned to her brother.
"Well brother dear are you still bad at fencing or have you improved?" Smirking Alanna stared at her twin for an answer.
"You insult me, sister. I've improved greatly."
Jon laughed at this "If by improved you mean he can lift a sword, yes, but use one properly, no."
That's all it took for Alanna to go into bouts of laughter while Thom scowled at her antics.
"As much as I'd love to stay and laugh at my brothers expense I would like a tour."
"Well Alanna, where do you want to go?" Thom regretted his question for he already knew the answer.
"I would like to see your practice courts and stables I need to check on my mount to make sure he got here alright."
"You want to see the practice courts?" Jon was surprised
"Yes I do. Is something wrong?"
"Well no, but most ladies usually want to see the gardens."
"Ah but I'm not your typical Lady and I find the gardens most boring compared to the practice of weaponry."
"Well then Alanna, shall we go?" Jon asked.
Alanna curtsied and took the arm Jon offered her and they started towards the practice courts chatting like old friends.
Ok tell me if you like it and if I should continue to write it because this is all I have. Please Review?