Summary: Fang only found out he had a sister when he was twelve, and was already out of the School. But his sister never knew she had a brother. When she finally escapes from the Schoolm what'll happen when she accidently bumps into the flock in the woods? Will Fang remember? Crimson was always used to being rejected. Will Fang accept his sister? How will Crimson react if she gets rejected from her own brother? Heck how does the flock react from the new? With all that, throw in Erasers, White Coats, and a whole bunch of other stuff.
Doesn't really have a real setting. Angel and Fang never happened. Max still doesn't know who her parents are. Let's just say, right after they get Angel back. Max still has the chip in her arm.
Okay this is my first REAL Maximum Ride Fic, so please no flames for now. If you did see my other MR Fic, I don't know if I'm continuing that one. But please leave feedback on how you think this story is going so far.
Disclaimer: I do N0T own the Maximum Ride series, just the plot and my own character.
Crimson POV
I stayed there. On the mass green carpet of the woods. All alone here in the woods in some unknown place, but that's not what I cared about. What i cared about is that I had finally escaped from that prison. That place where monsters thinks that they could just anything to innocent poeple! They don't let them have a life, or let them continue their life.
But that place - sadly - is only known to those that work there, or come from there. It's called the School. But I like to call it, the Hellhole. It's located somewhere around or in - I don't really care - Death Valley in California. That's all I know about it. Trust me, I know more about what's in it than where it even is. And that's something you don't ever want to find out.
Innocent people are brought there and get experimented on. They're run through tests; obsticales. The people that work there are called White Coats, since they all wear white coats. They have these 'pets' called Erasers. They were mutated humans with muzzles, fur all over there body, making them look like a demonic wolf on rabies.
But they look like the total opposite in their human forms. They look like models, that deserve to be on magazines, or movies, or at least T.V. But hey, looks can be decieving. They treat us like lab rats, because that's what we are to them; lab rats. Some of us actually do get turned into lab rats. But not me.
I'm 98% human, and the rest is avian DNA. That's what they injected into me. And that's what they tested me on too. They tested my speed, agility, eye sight, stregth, everything. Everyone of those things were quad times better than any human's. But not every human has thirteen feet long, pitch black bird wings. Not every human can fly either.
The enchanced everythings are a plus. But there's also the downs. Like, you're not 100% human, you can't go to the beach without someone noticing your wings, and lastly,you had to have come from the School. But another up; you get these cool powers. Well... it just really depends on what your power is. You can get more than one. Me, I could manipulate fire, electricity, and I can blend into my surroundings if I concentrate enough.
I got one side effect from all of those. When I had developed the electricity power, something went wrong. All I remember is me blacking out, then waking up and my eyes were icy blue. They had such intensity, it sometimes reminded me of a snake's eye. But they still looked human, it was just the color.
I originally have straight black hair - which you barley get to see straight at all, with all the things they put me through - and olive skin color. The female White Coats would accassioanly take slight pity on you. So one of them gave me a hair cut. It was layered - tons of layers - making it look like a rocker type of hair cut. And the icy blue eyes just adds to the intensity. I'm 5'7, with a slim body - for some strange reason they made sure i was quite fit - and with what I heard, I'm 13 years old.
I never heard if I had any family. But all i knew was that my 'mother' had me when she was still in her teen years. Also that she was an addict. I don't know if I have a brother or sister. I never heard anything about my 'father'. So basically, I'm all alone.
Stars stared down at me. The night sky holding them together. The full moon's light shimmered above everything. It was realxing and peaceful out here. A wolf would accassionaly howl, and I knew they weren't Eraser howls. Their howls are way more... girgly. I knew I had to take watch, but it was too realxing. I had to just take a short nap.
My name's Crimson, I'm thirteen. I was kidnapped when i was an infant and was brought to a Hellhole. I was experimented on, and was injected with avian DNA, and have weird but awesome powers. i recenlty just exscaped, and have no idea where's my next stop. So let the adventure begain.
Wanna tell me how the story's going on so far? Review? Thanx.