This is my first story i'm not really good with plot's or battle scene but i deceided to give it a go.
chapter 1
Konoha October 10
"Get back here you demon!" Cried a civillian man. 4 year old naruto was running for his life. "Leave me alone I didn't do any thing to you wo!" Little naruto tripped over a tree stump in a training feild surrounded by civillians and being hit with bat's, stabbed with broken bottles and soon became unconssians the civillians dragged the unconssians boy 30 miles away from konoha dangelling him by his hands, and with that the villagers leaft him to die from blood loss. But minutes after the attack an unknown group of Iwa anbu that came to spy on the villiage came across the attack. "Hey Bird isn't that konoha's jinchuriki that one of our spies told us about?" said a chuby man wearing a squirrel mask.
"Yeah squirrel that's him his looks match the discription." said the slim female leader of the group wearing a bird mask. That's him alright he look's like konoha's yellow flash it must be his kid. Let's kill him then if he is that basterd's son then we should finish what those stupid villager's started, this is the perfect oppertunite. said man wearing a racoon mask. No racoon. We're going to take him back to Iwa and bring him to lord tsuchikage he could use him. Fine then I have a bag big enough to put him in.
meanwhile at the hokage tower
The oldage hokage was sitting at his desk saying that he was angry was a very big understatement he was pissed it had been an hour after a chunin reported about the villager's chaseing nartuo with bat's and broken bottles. When he heard this he called some anbu to find the villager's that were apart of the attack to be exacuted and to find naruto. But so far they had no luck he was becoming very anxious with each passing minute, he wanted to go and look for the younge blond but couldn't with all the paper work sitting on his desk.
Soon after two hours the group of anbu anlong side Haiyata reported and brought what looked like a dead corpes of naruto at the sight before him the old hokage felt a wave of saddness and shame wash over him the son of minato and kushina as well as the decendent of nidaime hokage, yes tobirama senju the old hokage's sensei.
Haiyata give the boy a proper buiral. "Hai" lord hokage. replayed the young chunin as he and the anbu leaft the office. Five minutes after the door closed the old hokage slammed his fist on the desk. How? How could the people of this village do this to a 4 year old boy and the last male senju and clan member of the uzumaki's the grandson of the nidaime uzukage even if they didn't know his heritage he was just a 4 year old.
The hokage was snapped from his thought when he heard poeple cheering saying that the demon fox was finally dead.
Perhapes it is time that the village finally knew who it was that they abused and killed. While the hokage was decideing on when and how he would reveal naruto's heritage to not only to the council but to the whole village as well.
Root HQ
Danzo was mentaly cursing to himself. Dammit the village's strongest weppon is gone now those stupied villager's without the power of the nine tail demon fox we might not stand a chance against the other hidden villages more likely Iwa or cloud. Perhap's we could kidnap the six tailed slug from the hidden mist, with the civil war going on there they won't notice the disapperance of there jinchuriki. But who to send ah I got it they haven't let me down before. Fuu, Shini, subo! Immediately a Yakama, Aburama and an Hyuga appeared in front of danzo.
Hai! lord danzo they replied. I want the three of you to bring the six tails jinchuriki here failier will result in 3 month's inprisonment and tourter am i understood? Hai! lord danzo. Exalient. I'll expect you to return here in two weeks
2 weeks after the attack Iwa anbu
Man this kid is heavier than he look's. the man grunted. Don't worry racoon we're 3 days away from the gate's we'll be back home soon. Yeah can you believe those fool's actuly fail for our body clone technique. Even though it had a perfect resemblance they should have detected chakra surrounding the corps not that I complaining or anything. Even though it may squirrel we should be greatful that non of them did notice. We're almost there just a little while longer. It's good thing that the kid hasn't woken up yet. Yeah! I can agree with you on that racoon it's much easier with out having to deal with kid trying to struggling to get free.
Enough! We are still days away from the village and it is getting dark we'll stop here for now. I'll send a message to lord tsuchikage squirrel you go get some firewood, racoon make sure the boy is secured. Hai! The two men responded and went to do there job they were given.
2 hours later the tsuchikage tower
Onoki had just finished the paper work for the day and was about to turn in for the night when his secretary Ryoko Kazumi she had dark brown hair green eyes and tan skin she wore the standered secretary outfit. What is it Ryoko? As he accpected it to be more paper work.
Sir a message from one of your anbu who were sent to spy on konoha has sent you a scroll.
Really now bring it here. Hai! Lord tsuchikage. As she brought the scroll over to Onoki and left the office. Onoki opened the scroll and was surpriesed of the news that one of his best anbu leader bird had sent him saying that her team was bring the nine tail's jinchuriki to Iwa. Onoki was astounded at the news and what another thing that shocked him was that they claimed that he was also the son of konoha's yellow flash and that they were just a few day's away from the village, and that she would tell everything she found out.
Well thing's are finally starting to look up now. The son of the yellow flash is right out side the villiage and he is also the nine tail's jinchuriki. hmm. Maybe we could use him to get back to are full strength. Well I better rest up and ponder this later I wonder how my son and granddaughter are doing. As he was about to get up and leave his office his secretary Ryoko came with more paperwork. Lord tsuchikage there are few new document's that need your attention. Soon onoki was confronted by a mounten of paper work.
Oh dear kami why do you curse me with such bane in my excestence? Why! And with that onoki went on with the one thing that he hates even more then the yellow flash and that was paperwork.
Okay that is the end of the first chapter I know it wasn't very long but like I said i'm new at this.
Please review any idea's you would like to give to help improve this story is appreacted. I'll update as soon as I can.
