This is my second time making a story! Constructive criticism and reviews would be helpful… Thanks!


"Avast!" We found it! The missing item!" Pikachu said.

"Hurray!" Eevee said.

"Alright! Let's get back, before it gets too dark outside…" Victini exclaimed.

"Yeah! Let's go!" Jirachi agreed.

These 4 brave Pokémon are best friends, all in an exploration team; Team Hopeful.

"Is everyone okay?" Victini asked.

Everyone was out of breath.

"I guess you guys are. Hah."

They all started walking back to town… The storyline of Victini and Jirachi start here, partially Pikachu and Eevee.