A/N: This was my first story wrote but I decided to revise it just a little so they'll be a little different because I decided just to have one person's point of view per chapter.

Summery: Spencer lives in a abusive household where her parents beat her because they think it's her fault that her older brother Glen died in a car accident 2 years ago because she got drunk at a party and called him to come get her. She wishes she was never born at times. That is until she meets Ashley Davies her own personal concrete angel. Spencer finally feels loved. But is it enough to save Spencer? Or will her parents beat her to death? Find out in Concrete Angel.

Spencer's POV

My name is Spencer Carlin and I live in an abusive household. It's been like this for two years since my older brother Glen's death in a fatal car accident. My parents still say it's my fault that he died but it wasn't my fault a stupid drunk driver ran into him. At least I was smart enough to call a DD.

"Spencer where are you!" my mom shouted up at me. "You better come out from where your hiding or you'll get it worse than last night!" She shouted.

God I hope she doesn't mean that last nights beating was terrible. I hope she doesn't because I start at King High School tomorrow I'm a junior now and we just moved to LA a month ago for my parents new jobs as surgeons here.

I've been abused for two years now since my older brother died in a fatal car accident. I had another brother named Clay but he died in a drive by shooting at prom last year. He was the only one who protected me whenever things got terrible the first year Glen was gone. Now I'm alone with no one to love me, protect me, or car for me at all. I'd rather be dad right now than living like this. Maybe I'll meet someone here and they'll care for me. My life would be so much easier. I just need love in my life here.

My new neighbors are Raife and Christine Davies and there daughter Ashley. They invited us to dinner tonight. The said that Ashley is going to school at King High too so I'll know someone there at least but I haven't met her year because her parents said that she was with her friends some club.

"Spencer lets go!" my dad shouted up at me.

"Ok I'm coming!" I say.

I walk out of the house when my parents leave.

"Finally, what took you so long?" My dad asks.

"I was just putting my hair up." I lied to him.

"Ok well let's get this over with. Remember we're a perfect family with no problems." My mom said.

That's such a lie we're not a perfect family we're a broken one.

"Hey guys come on in!" Christine said once my mom knocked on the door. "So Spencer what classes are you taking?" She asks me.

"Uh…I think Algebra 2, Anatomy, foods, Art 1, and Leadership." I said hoping got it true.

"Wow, you almost in all of the same classes as Ashley." Raife said. "She should be here any minute now." He said after that I heard the door open and close.

Ashley walks into the room we're in. She has chestnut colored brown hair and chocolate brown eyes. She is really beautiful. Wait? What?

"Spencer this is are daughter Ashley." Raife said.

"It's really good to meet you Spencer." Ashley said. She sticks her hand out for me to shake.

"It's really good to meat you to Ashley." I said.

When I shake Ashley's hand I feel this electric shock go through me. I'm pretty sure Ashley noticed did to because she is staring at her hand strangely

I can't help but notice that Ashley is looking at me strangely like she is trying to figure out why I'm looking down all the time.

"So Spencer you're a junior?" She asks me.

"Yeah I am." I said looking down.

"So where did you guys move here from again?" Raife asks us.

"Cleveland, Ohio." My mom says.

"Wow, that's far away from here. What brings you to LaLa land?" Ashley asks.

LaLa land really Ashley?

"Well Arthur and I got jobs as surgeons here." My mom said.

"So are you adjusting well?" Raife asks.

"Yeah we have. Everyone has been really great since we moved here." My mom said.

We stayed at the Davies house for a couple of hours. Ashley and I get along great but she kept on giving me these strange looks like she saw one of my bruises but I hop she didn't. Well right now I'm standing by the bottom of the stars waiting for my dad to move.

"Dad will you please move?" I ask.

"No, I need to talk to you!" He says with anger in his voice.

"Oh, and what do you have to say oh let me guess 'It's all you fault Glen and Clay are dead!' I shout.

"It is your fault! You cursed this family for what you are!" My dad shouted.

"I didn't curse this family because I'm gay!" I shout. "There is no logical reason I could have!" I shout.

I start running up the stairs but my dad grabbed my leg and pulled me back down.

"You better pray that you'll be alive tomorrow." He shouts at me.

That's the last thing he said to me before he started punching me and kicking me where the bruises wouldn't show.

"No dad please stop!" I screamed loudly.

I guess I must have passed out because when I woke up in the morning I was still on the floor. I try to get up by my ribs are screaming for me to stay down. I pull my shirt up to see the damage and I have bruises from my ribs to the bottom of my stomach. I feel the tears roll down my face as I get up from the spot I'm at.

I put on sweats, did my makeup, and put my hair in a messy ponytail as soon as I got into my room. I ride the bus to school. I really hope no one stares at me like I'm crazy.

I walk across the quad and walk to the locker the principle assigned me when I registered here in July. I spot Ashley and I can see the worried look on her face when she sees me.

"Hey Spencer." She said once she got to my locker.

"Hi Ashley." I said back at her.

"So how do you like it here so far?" She asks me.

"It's good. This school is way bigger than my last one." I said.

"That's good." She said. "So what's your first class?" She asks.

"I have Anatomy." I say.

"Really, me too." She said. "Wan to walk with me so you know where it is?" She asks.

"Sure" I said.

We walked together to are 1st hour and it turns out we have 2nd, 3rd, and 4th hour together. We also have the same lunch period. She let me sit with her and her friends Aiden, Sherry, and Madison. I don't think Madison and Sherry like me very much but oh well.

"So Spencer do you have a ride home today?" Ashley asks me.

"No my parents are working." I said.

"Can I give you a ride since we're neighbors?" She asks.

"I don't know my parents told me to ride the bus." I say.

"Come on they'll never know and I really want to talk to you." She said.

"Ok I'll ride home with you." I say.

It's now the last period and I'm starring at the clock hoping it would slow down. I really don't want to go home tonight because if my parents are stressed at work the beatings are way worse but if they have a really good day they don't do anything to me. I pray that it was a good day.

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A/N I hope you enjoyed the first chapter of Concrete Angel revised. The next chapter will be Ashley's POV, Just tell me what you think.