I'M BACKKKKKKKKKK!*Cue screaming and hissing from audience . I decided I was going to completely redo this story from the beginning with longer chapters and better dialogue to. So yea if anyone has any ideas just pm me or review. I'll try to incorporate as many as possible. I may be a freshman but I still gots time to do this. I also accept flames because it will help me learn. I will try to update once every other week. So now on with the story each chapter will be from one person's point of view only. After whatever stories last in HoO and nevermore.
MAX
I just woke up from a fabulous and dreamless sleep and found myself surprisingly happy and full of energy. Today's going to be a good day I thought to myself. I got up and decided to wear all black with jeans not leather. I put on my steel toe combat boots. I grabbed my hunting knife and slipped it in my boot and started down the stairs. First thing I hard was talking from an unknown figure. I immediately got in a quiet position and hid behind a wall. I looked over and didn't understand what I saw. I mean the flock was all right there and ready Iggy, Gazzy, Nudge, Angel, and fang. Despite the current situation my heart skipped a beat when I saw him. I quickly snapped out of it and decided to focus on what was going on. I looked over at the speaker and silently cringed at his voice. It was like nails on a chalkboard. He easily towered over my 5'8 (An not sure how tall she is haven't read maximum ride in awhile) He stood at an impressive 6'8 and had a pure black assassins creed type thing on. I couldn't see his face but only his eyes which were a pure gold color. (Cookies to who can guess it is) When I look at his feet I almost gasped but I'm not stupid. Never mind back to the point, where his feet should be there was nothing. It was almost like he was a shade. His voice was a hiss. So what is your choice mortals, would you stay in hiding or would you join me and help overthrow the gods! "We will help but there is a problem my lord", Angel said. Tell me what this problem is immediately! "Max she will not help us she is a fool who believes war is wrong even if it's for a greater cause and if you don't believe me ask her she is hiding behind the wall." I suddenly felt a pull and found myself facing the door an invisible force holding me in place. I believe this child so now little maximum I must kill you as I am feeling merciful right now, any last words? "Yea just that I don't know what's going on or who these Gods are but if you're starting a war against someone who is good than know that that side will always have a greater force than you!" I practically spat in his face. Wise words and such stamina it is a shame I have to kill you but you forget I am time I am KRO… Before he had a chance to finish a silver arrow flew in out of nowhere and hit the ground in front of me. It exploded in a blinding light and I took my chance while they were all stunned and flew east as fast as could and could tell it was well over 300 mph. I suddenly saw a mountain after a couple of hours and it was over the empire state building. I was too tired to comprehend what was going on and instead crashed through a set of golden doors into a black haired boy who surprisingly caught me and only flew back a couple feet landing in front of a giant with electric blue eyes and then I passed out.