my first fanfic *giggles uncontrollably* and i want all your comments. don't be afraid to tell me what you think.
Disclamer: You would know if i owned it. trust me.
Olivia's POV
I felt tears come to my eyes as my attacker grabbed me. "Come on baby. We're going to take a little ride." Think Olivia think! I can't just let the mother fucker take me but fighting won't do any good. A thought crossed my mind. "Can I at least write them a letter to tell them not to look for me? I don't want them dragged into this. You want me right? I go without a fight if you let me." I begged. He thought a moment. "Fine, make it quick. I am going to read it." I nodded. If this worked he could read it all he wants.
He got me some paper seeing how I was tied up at the moment. He untied my hands and handed me the paper. As I grabbed it I purposely let it slice his finger. "Damn it!" he shouted. "I'm sorry; there are band aids in the bathroom. I'll be done when you come back." He nodded and I smiled slightly as I saw that he used his cut hand to open the door. I wrote Elliott a letter. A tear blurred his name at the bottom of the page. I took a deep breath and folded it. I stuck it under the bed after the creep came back and read it. I secretly hid my phone in my shoe. I dearly hope Elliott gets the message.
Elliott's POV
Panic settled into every pore in my body. Olivia was gone. My whole life depended on that woman. She was the reason I was calm at work, the reason I haven't killed half of the men we got, and she was the reason I got up in the morning. What was I going to do?
The rest of the team searched the rest of the apartment while I looked at her bedroom. I noticed a small piece of paper under her bed. The paper was folded and said "El" on the front. I knew that means that she only wants me to read it.
Elliott,
I have been kidnapped. The attacker is masked. I can't tell you the exact time but it is around 6 at night. I can hear his feet. On my tall shelf in the closet there is a note with little picture of me. Keep it, I feel a little blue but not scared. I can't make this too long because I can feel his eyes on my back. Look, I miss you. Don't let your emotions show infront of the others. I'll be back at the job really soon I hope. Time is running out. You can handle this. Don't try and find me. I'm not so scared El so just please don't try to find me. I'll miss you.
Love
Olivia (but you already knew that)
P.S.my phone is not with me. So don't track it.
I was so confused. Why would I need another picture of her? My house has more pictures of Olivia than Kathy (much to Kathy's displeasure and jealousy), besides she doesn't have a closet, and since when does she "feel blue"? I guess if I was about to be kidnaped and have to tell my best friend (AKA Olivia) one thing I would be a little crazy too. Still though, it's not like her to give up so easy. I read and reread the letter tree times before I got it. A few of the words were slightly darker. Not noticeably dark. You had to study it for a while to get it. I got a piece of paper and wrote down the real note.
Elliott,
The attacker is 6 feet tall with blue eyes. Look on the bathroom handle. Find me. I am so scared El. Just please find me. I love you.
P.S. my phone is with me. Track it
I walked over to the bathroom to see a bloody print on the handle. I looked at the note. There was a corner with blood on it. I smiled. She is a genus. I could almost see her "accidentally" giving the man a paper cut and telling him the band aids were in the bathroom.
I smiled and looked at the second half of the note. She was scared and… she loved me. Wait, what? That can't be right. I'm a married man. I looked at both notes again. Yep, I wrote it down right. Oh my god. Olivia Benson just told me she loves me in a secret note. If you think about it, it really is just like us. Only Liv would say what I've felt for years, if I was honest with myself, in a secret note, and only I would need to have my best friend to be kidnapped to see what an idiot I've been. I, Elliott Stabler, am in love with Olivia Benson. That didn't even cover it. I have no word to say about how I feel. I loved Kathy but I've never been in love with Kathy. I have to find Olivia to tell her that I love her.
What do you think? this was sort of a maby thing. if i don't get some reviews i'll stop writing. because i'll think you don't like it. i'll take any reviews at all. even bad ones. i need to know where i fail. but no one tell me i suck and not say why. i can only fix it if i know what it is.