Hello, minna! I know, I know, =.=; the previous chapter are badly written plus many grammatical error and typo. So, I present you with the edited chapter 1. Comment, critique and compliment are appreciated.
*******OURAN HIGH SCHOOL HOST CLUB*******
" Irashaimasen!" All seven hosts greeted the clients that had long been waiting. The host club activities are officially started. Today's theme is slumber party. Kyoya choose this theme because its correspondence with today business hour. Usually they open the store during morning and afternoon but today they also open it in the evening because there will be held camping activities starting 8pm. So they took this chance to open the store before camping start.
For today event, the third music room is divided into five sections. The first section is of course Tamaki's section. It seems that a few girls had fainted and the others had nosebleed. You guess it right! Tamaki is doing his prince charming character as usual. He was wearing a quite transparent pyjama while lying on the new bed they had bought just now.
Right now, a girl from year two is trying to wake Tamaki from his pretends sleep. Tamaki 'romantically' open his eyes and said: "Oh, my love! Finally you come to accompany me!" Tamaki hug her afterwards and the girl's face turn as red as tomato. The second popular section is the twin's section. Both of them only wearing trousers and lying on the sofa.
Kaoru was lying under Hikaru while Hikaru is caressing Kaoru's chest slowly and gently. "Kaoru, don't be shy. Mom not here so we are free to satisfy our feeling of need." Hearing Hikaru said provocative statement, Kaoru blushed. Then, Kaoru said: "Then, my body is yours, Hikaru!" Hearing this, all clients that are watching have a really massive nosebleed.
Next is Mori's and Honey's section. Here, Mori are reading story for Honey that is lying on bed hugging Usa-chan. All Mori's fan sighed happily because they fall in love with Mori's masculine voice. While Honey's fan busy chewing their finger to avoid touching Honey's cute sleepy face. And if you walk a little further to the back, you can found two more quite sections.
The first section is Haruhi's section. This is where Haruhi give treatment to her client. Now, Haruhi is massaging a first year girl. Usually, the girl face looks older than her age. But today, her face seems younger. You could hear pleasure moan coming out of the girl when Haruhi massage her shoulder. "How is it, Ayumi-san? Did your stress lighten up?" The said girl only nods. Last section is Kyoya's section.
Oddly enough, there is no one else except Kyoya that are busy writing something in his black mysterious book. Kyoya close his book and walk towards window. His black pyjama made of silk contrasts beautifully with the sunset. Kyoya turn around when he heard footsteps from behind. Kyoya smile his host smile and pushed the "play" button on the DVD player next to him.
A song with soft jazz genre began to reverberate. Kyoya offer his hand to Renge and she took it gladly with a blushing face. They began to dance according to the rhythm. In the midst of dancing, Kyoya suddenly kiss Renge head gently. Renge was shocked but Kyoya lead her again when she stop dancing.
No one saw them dancing because the place had been block by the fitting room. But Haruhi saw them when she was taking tea for her guest. "So that's why Kyoya refuse others appointment," thought Haruhi.
After two hours of serving, all hosts were exhausted because they work three shift today and the evening client number is triple than usual. Kyoya can be seen busy writing on his black book. He most probably is scheming for a new theme that could increase the club profit. Meanwhile, Haruhi approach Kaoru (only she knows which one) and said: "Thank you for the cloth."
Kaoru only shrugged while Hikaru said: "No prob! Beside this cloth is only sample. You can choose and take whatever you want." Hikaru showed a wardrobe full of sparkly cloth. Haruhi rolled her eyes mentally. "Typical rich people," thought Haruhi but she still choose some decent boyish cloth for her to wear at the camping activities. She really can't help it because her dad repacks her baggage with girly cloth.
Luckily she checked before the club open and Kaoru lend her some guy pyjama. Out of nowhere, Tamaki showed himself and said, "Oh, my daughter! Why don't you borrow oto-san cloth? Oto-san has plenty of nice pyjama and expensive cloth." Tamaki said while opening a secret wardrobe full of expensive cloth.
Kyoya that already moved to his computer said, "Baka! Most your pyjama is half transparent. If she wears it, doesn't it will show her body?" Tamaki think Kyoya word for awhile before his face turning red (must be perverted thought). Hikaru suddenly thought a mischievous idea had an evil glint in his eyes. Kaoru being his twins caught the glint and smirk evilly.
They were just catching Haruhi when Mori picked Haruhi bridal style and let her sit beside Honey. "Arigatou, Mori-senpai! No wonder I suddenly feel goose bumps all over." Honey that already wide awake and was enjoying some cake said, "Ne, Haru-chan! Don't worry, Mori is quite reliable when sensing danger." Mori nod and the twins pout because they could not force Haruhi to where Tamaki's pyjama not when Mori intently watching Haruhi.
Out of the blue, the third music room door open and Kasanoda appear. All head turn around waiting for the human blizzard to talk. "Headmistress is asking us to gather at the hall." Haruhi smile to Kasanoda as her thanks for the info. Kasanoda turns red and quickly run to somewhere else. Kyoya close his laptop and said, "It's time!" All hosts go out from the room and Tamaki closed the door and together they walk towards the hall.
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"Benibara-sama, where are they going?" asked Chizuru with a hushed tone. "Hmmm… They all go the same direction. Maybe we should follow them," said Benio more to herself. Suddenly, a group of boys walked really closed to the bushes where the three 's students are hiding. Hinako reflexes made her to cover both her friend mouth to avoid any noise come out as they tend to curse if there is any boy near them. After awhile, Hinako finally released her hand when the boys is far.
"Yosh! I made up my mind! We should follow them. Thanks to your brilliant idea of wearing Ouran uniform, Hineko, we could slip into the crowd." They slip perfectly and no one notice the three addition student. The crowd of students are unusually noisy for the always composed rich kids. But today activities excite them and made them out of character.
A few minute later, the three 's students arrived at Ouran school hall. One can say the place is really huge and can fit 10,000 people in one time. Unfortunately, Kyoya caught the sight of Chizuru and the gang and was going to call the twins when Shizue came up the stage. The noisy hall instantly turns silent. She took the microphone and watch intently all the students.
"Ladies and gentlemen, all of you will be separated into a group regardless of your age or family status. Your group list is already paste to the wall and you may see it after this. Don't worry! All group is done by voting in a fair and square manner," said Shizue with confident. "BUT, if any undesired thing happened, I will not hesitate to expel you from Ouran." All students showed horror expression at the word 'expel'.
Haruhi observe her left and right and was wondering what trigger the fear of these rich kids. Just like that, Shizue speech end and the students were busy looking for their names. Somehow, all host ended up at the same group. Tamaki was happy and was glowing all over while Kyoya can only sigh annoyingly. Each group consists of 20 students and will be guarded by 2 senior teachers.
The hall was in an uproar when students scattered to find their group. Naturally, the host club group was the fastest to gather their member as they attract quite a lot of attention. Since Kyoya beside her, Haruhi decided to ask him about the expel thing. When Haruhi confront him with the position, Kyoya gives her a knowing looked.
"We know Ouran is a prestigious school that recognize by world. When you expel from here, no school will want you. Not even commoners' school. Then, you will disowned by family and kick out from the rich society to become beggar." Haruhi raised her eyebrows to display her shock. She never knew that rich people also face some problem. Kyoya pushed his glass and said, "Don't assume that by being rich means free from problem."
When their group assigned teacher had arrived, the group are given small briefing about the activities and meeting places. After appointed the head and assistant for the group, all students are to be gathered at the field. The first activity is obstacle race with blindfolded eyes. At first, the activity receive a lot of complain especially from the girls students be cause they scared of the dark and gotten dirty. But the complaint dissipated when Shizue showed herself.
As usual, Tamaki could not stand still and was jumping up and down, walking here and there because he was excited to play this commoners game. On the other hand, Kyoya seem composed as ever (as in nothing worries him) but slowly his face changed to a more annoyed expression when Tamaki keep bothering him.
Meanwhile, Honey is busy stuffing himself up with cake that could feed the entire platoon of army and Mori was sitting beside Honey while holding a glass of juice that had been offered by Honey. As for the twin, they are teasing Kazukiyo Soga (Haruhi and the twins' class president) about his fear of dark.
When Shizue notice a lot of commotion at Tamaki's group (only she label that group Tamaki's group), she immediately approached them and the atmosphere turn stiff. All the uproar mysteriously disappears. She gave each of the host club members a cold glare before walked towards the audience sit with a 'hummphh'. Then the stiff atmosphere was gone as quick as it comes.
Finally the game start and a lot of squel and laughter could be heard. This game require students to be blindfolded while holding onto the person in front and never let go until the end of the game. The students that missed from his/her group will be punished. When the current activity is carried out, all sort of etiquette vanished.
What you can see are students in panic of holding each other's shoulder while running through various obstacles. One could say it's a funny sight when seeing this rich kids acting like commoners. Although it's the first time experienced for the students, it is an enjoyable activity for them because you could see them laughing happily while trying to keep up with the game.
Haruhi has experienced this from previous school, but it is the first time that she was playing with rich brat and she really loved it. Even Shizue could let herself to smile while watching at the scene. That night, Ouran High is filled with real laughter of the Ouran resident.
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Benibara-sama, what is that noise?" asked Chizuru while trying to tiptoed so she could see clearer. They finally manage to slip out from the crowd when the students come out from the hall and hid in one of the bushes. Benio pushed back Chizuru head and tried to stand without attracting any unwanted attention. She see a glimpsed of blindfolded Ouran students that are busy running and laughing happily.
The three of them wait until the game is over, which is almost two hours when they change they hiding place to the Ouran primary area to get some rest. They decided to kidnap Haruhi tomorrow during the explore race game as they will be playing individually.
"Why wouldn't you sleep at the middle of us?" ask Hikaru with puppy eyes and innocent smile. Kaoru imitate Hikaru expression and nod his head vigorously. Haruhi change her place more at the corner to avoid the twins slip between her. She took her while said, "I can't trust both of you to behave when I sleep there."
"You are no fun at all," said Kaoru pretending to sulk but didn't bother her anymore when Haruhi pull her blanket to cover all her body. Precisely 11 o'clock, all Ouran occupant included the three intruder had slip into the realm of dream. All occupants sleep like a log because exhausted by the the game they played earlier. Ouran Academy once more became quiet and peaceful.
******* OURAN HIGH SCHOOL HOST CLUB *******
At approximately 5 o'clock in the morning, one figure rose up and walked out from the classroom towards the room of Black Magic Club. The figure slowly walked to one of the bookcase and took out a black and heavy untitled book. At the same time, moonlight illuminated the room for awhile and you could get a glimpse of a guy silhouette wearing black cloak and had a Belzenef doll attached to his hand.
He took the book and put it on the podium that is located at the centre of room. The man started to recite some kind of incantation from the book in a loud voice. When he is done reciting, he immediately slump to the floor and a little snore could be heard from him indicating that he is asleep.
10 minutes later, Ouran high school building began to shake itself violently. The occupant doesn't notice the commotion because the building had a mechanism that could absorb the shake making people inside the building unaware of the shaking. But the building no doubt shake and rise itself from the ground before disappearing with a 'ping' sound. Hinako woke up from her sleep when hearing the weird sound and was shocked when she discovered that Ouran High building had disappeared.
She instantly woke her two sleeping friends. While Chizuru and Hinako is standing still because of the shock, Benio is busy running here and there as if trying to find a person in a hide and seek game but to no avail. Chizuru and Hinko finally woke from their trance and they look Benio with puzzled look etched to the face. Only one question playing in their mind. Where in the world is Ouran High School!?
