DISCLAIMER: IF I OWNED MAXIMUM RIDE I WOULD NOT HAVE BROKEN STAIRS AND WOULD LIVE IN MY HAPPY PLACE.

Here is a story that me and my friend are writing so please comment and review.

thoughts

"speech"

"voice"

Gunmetal's pov

I stood on a dune the warm desert wind towsling my hair as i looked down on the smoldering rubble of what had once been fire storm. I felt no remorse of the lives i had taken for my freedom. I opened a pair of crimson wings and began to rise towards the endless blue sanctuary.

Fang's pov

We were all just sitting there. Max was eating, Nudge, talking, Gazzy was just playing with some bombs Iggy was helping him. Angel had dissappeared. I had'nt seen her in a while. I tapped Max on the shoulder and she looked up. "Yes?" she asked. I gave her a look which said, where's angel?

Angel's pov

I was lost and the rest of the flock was gone. I was alone. That is when i saw something flying towards me. I slowed down and looked straight ahead. I saw a tall man with red hair. As he came closer i saw that he was wearing absolutely nothing.

Gunmetal's pov

I stared wide eyed at the small person in front of me her facial expression made her look like a pelican about to swallow a large amount of sea water in hopes of finding fish. I decided to make her aware of that fact by saying " do you know you look like a pelican right now."

Angel's pov

I stood there dumbstruck. I was completely confused. This man looked like Gazzy and Iggy's test dummies. "w-who are y-you." The man look at me and replied "I do not know."

Fang's pov

We scoured the area looking for angel before we took to the skies. We flew around aimlessly still not finding anything. Then i saw something in the distance. Not something- someone. I called max over. "Do you think that's her?" She asked. Instead of responding i just looked closer and then took off in that direction. Max caught up with me quickly. She has some amazing flying skills. Once we got close enough i slowed and eventually stopped. Now i could see that it wasn't a somebody it was two somebody's. One of them didn't have any clothes and the other was angel. The strange one without any clothes was just hovering there...using his wings! He had wings! I thought we were the only surviving escapists from the school. Or maybe he wasn't from the school. I don't remember seeing any others with wings while we were at the school and he looked about our age. "Who are you?" I demanded, wanting an answer. "I do not know." He replied. I looked at him, angered. I figured he was playing dumb and i was about done with it.

Max pov

I was mad. I cant believe that he wouldn't tell us who he was and it looked as though fang was filling with anger too.

Angel's pov

I just read fang's mind and i got the feeling something bad was about to take place here.

Gunmetal's pov

The one with black wings had a very strange expression he seemed to be constipated so I decided that i would make sure he was not ill before leaving to find some food "are you okay?" I asked. This only seemed to make things worse as his face twisted into an even uglier expression before he yelled and dove at me. People who yell before attacking are idiots and this person learned that quickly when I grabbed his head and slammed it against my knee before sending him downward with at vicious kick to the gut.

Max's pov

Oh crap. I dropped as fast as possible trying to catch up with the fang that was plummeting to earth. I reached his height and caught him but only barely considering the fact that he weighs like 200 pounds! I slowly brought him to the ground. Once there, i laid him down softly and flew back up to where the psychotic flying freak was. "WHAT THE HELL WAS THAT FOR?!?" I screamed trying to grasp hold of whatever saneness was left in this situation. "People who yell before attacking are idiots." He replied in a rather calm manner considering what just took place.

Fang's pov

I opened my eyes but my stomach and head hurt. A lot. I wondered how i got on the ground uninjured from the fall. I looked up and saw with my inhanced vision that max, angel, and the psycho were all still up in the air. I could hear max yelling and partially see the psycho's face move when he talked. I could tell max was angry. I sat up but it was hard with the pain in my side. I couldn't fly, i was in too much pain. When i looked up i saw and heard max still yelling at the other guy and i could tell by his expression that he was about done listening. Before i could do anything else he flew away at almost the speed max can.

hope you enjoyed the first chapter of Gunmetal, please review