I unfortunately don't own Maximum Ride. I do own my OC (who is the main character) and the plot. Please review and have a lovely day!
I was running over the sharp, pointy things called rocks. I was running away for my life, for my existence. I couldn't, wouldn't go back to that place. I could hear the Erasers running behind me. Their cat calls only bade me to go faster. If you're asking what an Eraser is, imagine handsome young men, give them wolf DNA and attitude, them let them loose on a two-mile property, and they die six years later.
Oh wait; you don't know what I'm talking about. Let me put it to you gently, they have wolf DNA. They are genetic experiments like me. I escaped the place, called the School. The School is a place where they take human infants who are scientifically engineered with animal DNA, and are tortured for the rest of their lives.
Most of us die in infancy or soon after. The unlucky 'successes 'who don't are tortured, experimented, and held captive for the rest of their lives. Usually those die of experimentation within their teen years. Currently the average life of an experiment who survives infancy is fifteen years old.
Obviously, I'm alive and running. I escaped the School and am now currently running through some sandy place called, I don't know a desert? So now the Erasers are after me. I didn't really think this far ahead. I didn't really plan on getting this far. What spurred this escape are rumors.
According to the whitecoats, there was another group of experiments who escaped, years before me. There were six of them, avian- human hybrids. Apparently they have a very successful efficiency as a group, and they call themselves the Flock. They even broke Subject 10 out of the School, after three of them got captured.
Hopefully they'll accept me into their group. Though that might be a problem if I don't make it out of wherever I am and to a place called Colorado. That reminds me, I'm currently running for my life! Idiot brain of mine. I've been sprinting for the past two miles, leaping over rocks, cacti, and these weird looking animals that look like rocks.
I can hear the Erasers getting closer, and closer. It sounds like they're right behind me; I know that's not true. They're ahead of me.
I braced my self for impact, as the first Eraser popped from behind a crevice of rocks. I slowed down my 20 mph sprint and tried to skid around him. He latched onto my shoulder with his claws. I let out a yelp, as his scalpel sharp claws cut into my skin. I leapt away, and the scarlet red of blood swelled down the torn skin.
'Here, kitty, kitty' he called. I staggered and tried to run. He slashed at me again and recut my already sliced shoulder. It probably looked like the dissected carcass of the squirrel hybrid that died of a heart attack a couple of years ago. Don't ask.
I was doomed; I couldn't fight only run, not even now. I just decided to give in. I sank to my knees, closed my eyes like the coward I was, and waited for the end to come. I was slowly losing consciousness due to blood loss. I felt another red- hot cut on my other shoulder. This was the end.
I sank to my side and briefly opened my eyes. At least I got to see the Endless Expanse before I died. I thought I saw some weird bird shapes, before the world went black.
Okay so how was that. Please cut the main character some slack. She's never been outside the School, so she doesn't know what most things are called. She doesn't even know what the sky is so she made up a name a while back, the Endless Expanse. Please guess what kind of mutant she is, and it's not avian. Also I'll give you a hint on what her name is. It's four letters and is a genre of music. Please review!
