Hiten's point of view

Hiten returned home with a succubus demon he had encountered earlier, when he heard his brother Monten scurrying upstairs. He went to investigate. When he entered the room, he found Monten brewing some sort of potion, not that he cared. As he was about to leave, he saw the most beautiful mortal girl that he had seen in all his years of being a demon. Even though she was in the most skimpiest outfit he had looked upon, it made her look more appealing than that succubus. Knowing that she followed him upstairs, he turned to her with his hand faced to her. With a blast of lightning from his hand, her body burned to a crisp. ' Now I don't have to deal with her.' he thought to himself , turning away from the burnt corpse. As he looked at the unconscious girl, he wondered why Monten needed her. " Monten, what do you need the human girl for?" He asked out of the blue. Monten jumped, not knowing his older brother had stepped in. He said slowly " Brother, I needed the girl for a hair growth potion" with a worried voice. Feeling angered with his brother's stupidity, he grabbed the unconscious girl and left the room, ignoring his brother's pleas to return the girl.
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