Writers words: this is my first story so dont talk shit just give a review.
Story:
One day Ichigo Kudasaki was walking when he noticed everything was growing strangly dark. He looked around to see if anyone else noticed how dark it was getting but before he could tell he had fallen to the ground. A young women named Rukia was walking and noticed him lying on the sidewalk. She reconized him from her chemistry class and she rushed over to see what was wrong with him. She relized he was passed out and she franticly for someone to help but there was no one. So she grabbed him by the shoulders and started dragging him to her appartment. When they got there she laid him on the couch and she went to bed. When she awoke she stumbled into the living room, still in her night cloths, and saw that Ichigo was still resting. She stared at him for a few minutes then smiled. Soon after she went into the kitchen and pulled some eggs, sasage, and bacon out of the refrigerater. As she cook the aroma of the food filled the apartment. Ichigo finally awoke when he inhaled a large gasp of the foods aroma."Oww, my head," he said. " Where am I." Thats when he walked into the kitchen and say his hearts desire cooking. " Rukia," he said in utter cunfusion." Yes," she said." How did I get here,"he asked." I dragged you all the way here from town because you were passed out on the sidewalk," she replied." Well may I ask you something," he said." Sure," she said." Why did you not just take me to a hospital," he asked in a demanding voice." Well I could have but were would you rather be, in a hospital or in my apartment," she said in a harsh yet flirty tone. He was struken with a slight fear by her reaction. He turns back around and turnes the tv onto the news." Today in the news, local billionaire, Mitsuraki Chan, has offered a reward for the capture of the infamous killer, Yoshinobu Akita. The amount of the reward has not yet been announced," said the newscaster. "Well looks like i have something to do in the next few days," Ichigo thought. The sound of Rukia's voice made him snapback to reality. "Breakfast is served," she said.
writers word: look for chapter 2 if you liked this one.
