Hello everyone. Im back for now. I know I have said this over and over again but I was reading comment and messages for you and I think I have new ideas on where I want this story to go. Im rewriting this and will try to keep It updated the best I can. So thank you for you support.
Chapter 1
It was a warm sunny day at dual academy. The over all mood at the school was happy with the thought of the summer months starting. There were a few students who were not looking forward to the this time. One of them was a teenage boy, with brown hair, named Jaden. Who was not looking forward to having to spend the brake with his family.
"Are you sure you wont join us Jaden?" A small teenage boy with blue hair said walking along side his friends.
"Yeah Syrus. I wish I could join your family but my parents want me home" Jaden said looking down at his friend with a sad smile.
"It's to bad Jaden I bet you would have had fun and kept Syrus busy and out of trouble." I tall man with dark blue hair said.
"Come on Zane we are going to miss our boat" Syrus said blushing, " Bye Jaden we will see you later." and the boys ran off to catch there boat.
"I hope so Syrus, I hope so" Jaden said fallowing after them to catch his boat home.
~One month later~
Syrus walked down the side walk, lost. He had taken a wrong turn trying to get back to his hotel. He has wondered around in circles for hours. He turned into an ally way. He head something behind him. When he turned around his world went black.
~with Jaden~
Jaden was walking home from the store when he heard something hit the ground in a ally he had just walked by. Turning around and walking down the ally he saw a figure standing over the limp form of his best friend. As he was got closer the figure ran off.
"Syrus! come on Syrus open your eyes" Jaden yelled. Falling to his knees next to his friend. The small teen groaned and didn't open his eyes. Jaden picked up his friend and took him to his home and laid him down on his bed and ran out of the room and brought back a first-aid kit and got to work cleaning and fixing up Syrus cut. After is was clean he started stitching the cut when Syrus started to stir.
"What. . .Where am I" Syrus stuttered as he woke up.
"hold still Sy Im almost done" Jaden said trying to get Syrus to set still.
"Jaden?" Syrus said moving his hand to touch his head.
"Syrus don't move!" he said loudly, "you have a bad cut on your head and I need to finish it up." Jaden continued stitching the cut. When he was done he move away from him.
"why does my head hurt? Jaden why am I here. . . Where is here?" Syrus said
Slow done Sy you took a nasty hit to the head," Jaden said putting thing away and cleaning up everything. "I was coming back from the store with food for dinner. I head something in the ally as I passed. I walked down the ally and saw you on the ground and a man standing over you. I freaked and brought you here. This is my home." Jaden explained. Walking around the room.
" How long was I o..." Syrus started when the door to the room opened and a little girl walked in freezing looking at him.
"Jaden do you have a death wish" she said, "do you know what dad-" Jaden stopped her.
"Shut up. He doesn't need to know anything about 'Him'" Jaden hissed at the girl, "Will you take care of him while I go make dinner." Jaden said walking out the door. The girl looked at him. Syrus saw fear on the girls face.
" umm Hi i'm Syrus whats your name?" Syrus asked trying to brake
" My name is Natsumi" was all the girl said. She turned and sat on a chair that was at a desk. Syrus was thinking about saying something when there was a loud crash and muffled yelling.
"stay quit all you will do is make it worse" Natsumi said looking at the door worried. there was another crash and everything was quit. It was about 20 more minutes and the door opened and in walked Jaden.
"Hey sorry it took so long, Mom cam home and wanted me to make her something before she left for her date with Kiako" he said handing Syrus a plate. "Sumi your plate is on the table in the kitchen eat before it gets cold" He said taking her seat when she got up.
"was that your sister?" Syrus asked
"Yeah. She is going to come to school with us this year" Jaden said happily. " so it will take a week for you to be able to leave. My Mother and Father shouldn't be home dad is away on business and mom usually isn't here. After that you need to leave okay?" Jaden said getting up. " I will be right back I need to clean back up the kitchen. When your done sit the plate on the floor and try and sleep okay." Jaden got up and walked out of the room. He went over to the room right across from his and knocked on the door.
"Come in Jaden." a voice said and he walked in going straight to the bed and sat down. "Are you okay Nii-chan?" Natsumi asked looking at her older brother.
"Ya. I will be so glad when I get you out of this house and away from them. Its hell when I'm here. I can even imagine how it is with you when I'm away at school and they don't have me to vent on." Jaden said. "oh well everything will be better as long as you win the dual in 2 weeks" Jaden laid back on the bed.
" Where are you going to sleep tonight? You gave Syrus your bed." Natsumi said looking at her brother.
" I will sleep in the den. as long as mom doesn't bring Kiako home tonight it should be fine just sleep with your door locked okay?" Jaden said getting up and leaving the room not waiting for an answer. Jaden went into the den and fell asleep as soon as his head hit the pillow. The last thought he had was that this was going to be a long week.
~ One week later~
Syrus was moving around great now his head had finally stopped hurting he was just happy he didn't have anything worse then he head ache. He was now nearing the time he had to leave his friends house.
" Im sorry you cant stay longer Sy its just I really don't want you to meet my dad he is a jerk most of the time. A least we get to see each other next week right" Jaden said with a smile.
"Thats true" Syrus said as they were walking back to his hotel where is family was staying. They reached the door to the hotel and they said there good byes and Jaden turned and started towards home. He felt like every step brought him closer to hell. When he walked up to his home he saw that his dads car was parked out front. He was suddenly happy that he sent Natsumi to stay with one of her friends. Jaden opened the door and walked in knowing the man behind the door had the worst planned for him.
Please tell me how I did with the first chapter rewrite. I will start the second one tomarrow should have it up after I get off of work. Hope it hasn't been to long and I still have some readers. please keep reading, because i'm back and I WILL write more and post my stories I write and not keep then in my folder away from everyone. Hope I'm am getting better at writing anything you see that I need to work on please point out. This will also help me in real life. please Review, fallow and favorite. :)
