Hello everyone… me here again with a new story….based on brother sister relation theirs love and the problems of love and the tragedies which came into their lives….is love create a rift between brother sister's relation ? just want to know read my story…
Story is….
She is standing near window tears are rolling down on her cheeks her heart pain clearly seen on her face a cool wind blow touch her body and make her shiver… she remembers
She was just 8 years old when their parents were died in a car accident and her brother was 20 years old…..
Mother: (breathing heavily)beta meri bachi ka khyal rakhna …..
Boy: (teary eyes)ha maa mai iska pura khyal rakhoga…..
Mother: wada karo mujse ki tu isse iski zindgi ki sari khushia dega… osse har hal mai khush rakhega
Boy: (in tears) ha maa …. Mai wada karta ho
In between these she took her last breath
Boy shakes her Doctors declared her dead
She and her brother were in tears
But from day he always consider her sister cum daughter he always fulfill her all wishes if she said I want this he immediately provide her everything which she wanted
If she said
"Bhaia mujhe yeh chayiea"
And he always replied in love
"meri gudia ko jo chayiea mai tujhe sab donga"
And he always gave her that thing which she wanted
Time passed like this
She grown up with time
And now she was in 16 year
When her brother told her
You will going to delhi for completing your further study but she was not interested she didn't want to far away from her loving brother but after a some time she agreed ….so she went delhi
And after four years her brother got married and after one year she got a nephew and she decided his name "aarav"
In between these she also seems her interest in cid and she asked about this to her brother and he agreed
After completing her graduation she went to pune for cid training
She was on training for two years
And on training she met with a dashing handsome boy and after sometime both were falling in love…..
It was few hours ago when her brother came back to home from bureau
person: mujhe tumse bahut zarrori bat karni hai zara idhar ana
Girl:bhai bs 2 mns mai atti ho
Person: nahi pehle yaha auo aur meri bat suno…. Har roz kissi na kissi wajah se meri tum se bat nahi ho patti iss matter pai
Girl: bhai itni bhi kya important bat hai
Person: important hai isliye toh bol raha ho
Girl came to him and sat beside him
Girl: ha abb boliye
Person: (holding her hands) dekho mai jo bhi bolne ja raha ho meri bat ko dhyan se sunna aur samjana
Girl: (little tensed) aisi kya bat hai bhai jo app aisa bol rahe hai
Person: (putting his hand on her cheek) tension wali koi bat nahi hai….
Girl: toh phir
Person: main tumhari shadi ke bare mai soch raha ho
Girl: (shocked) kya
Person: ha
Girl: (made a face)mujhe abi koi shadi wadi nahi karni….. aur agar app ne socha bhi hai toh abb osse apni soch tak he rakhiye implement karne ki koshish mat kijiye
Person: mujhe malom tha ki tum kuch aisa he kahogi,,,,,,isliye maine tumse pehle he kaha tha ki meri bat ko ache se samjna
Girl: (irritating)bhai please…mujhe aap se dur nahi jana hai
Person: tujhe kya laga ki mai tere bina reh pauonga…. Bilkul nahi isliye maine tumhare liye aisa ladka dhonda hai ki tum hamesha meri nazron ke samne he rahogi…
Girl: (with shocked) ladka….. (stammering) b…bhai app ne mere liye ladka bhi dhoond liya
Person: ha
Girl: mujhe se pooche bina he
Person: puche bina kaha abi pooch toh raha ho…. magar tumhari shadi tabi hogi jab tum osse pasand karogi,…..wase ladka acha hai mujhe umeed hai ki tum osse nah nahi bol paogi
Girl: magar
Person: abb agar magar kuch nahi
And he was about to go when she said
Girl: aur agar maine apne liye kissi ko pasand kiya ho toh?
Person turns and said
"kya kaha tumne"
She lowers her gaze
"I am sorry bhai"
Person: sorry kis liye
Girl: maine app se bina poche pyar kiya aur phir app ko btaya bhi nahi
Person: (with love) pyar kiya nahi jata apne app ho jata hai … magar ha tumhe mujhe btana chayiea tha yeh sab… kab se tum osse janti ho… aur kon hai woh?
Girl: bhai woh
Person: magar ek bat mai pehle he bol deta ho ki bat tabi agge badegi jab ladka mujhe acha lagega… achi job ache sankar aur sabse important bat jab woh ek acha insan hoga
Purvi: (in happiness) phir toh woh apko zaror pasand ayega kyuki yeh sab qualities os mai hai app osse nah bol he nahi paoge
Person: acha kon hai name btao
Girl: app osse jante hai
Person: tumhare friend circle mai se hai koi?
Girl: nahi
Person: toh
Girl: bureau mai hamre sath kam karta hai
Person: (with excitement and happily) wahoo kon..
Girl: *****
After hearing his name the very next second his face expression changed his eyes became red due to anger and he stands with a jerk
Person: nahi yeh nahi ho sakta
Girl: (confused) bhai kya hua…..
Person: zindgi bhar tumhari shadi na karna mujhe manzor hai magar oske sath kabi nahi
Girl: (!) yeh app kya keh rahe hai…. Woh bahut acha hai… app toh jante hai na osse(shaking him ) bhai boliye
Person: (in rough tone) ha janta ho osse ache se isliye toh yeh sab bol raha ho…
Girl:(in tears) bhai mai osse bahut pyar karti ho
He holds her from her arms
Person: (in anger) toh bhool jao osse….
His words made her shocked
Person: maine tum sai pehle he kaha tha ki ladka mujhe pasand ana chayiea…..
Girl: yeh meri zindgi ka sawal hai
Person: ha yeh meri behen ki zindgi ka sawal hai aur isliye mai iss rishte ke liye kabi ha nahi karonga.,….. woh insan kissi ke layak nahi hai aur meri behan ke toh bilkul bhi nahi…
She is in tears
Girl:bhai mai
Person: (in anger) yeh mera akhri faisla hai jo kabi badlega nahi aur tum kabi koshish bhi mat karna…..tumhare liye yehi behtar hai ki tum osse bhool jao
Saying this he went from there
She sat on the floor with tears…. Because she never expect such type of behavior from him and this type of reaction from him she never imagine ….she cant understand what's wrong in this relationship…. Usually they worked together in bureau her brother is senior from him and her love is junior of him but senior of her… everything was fine in the bureau and than what was the matter behind this
Flashback end:
In first chapter characters are there but without names so you suggest me from which names I can continue my story…..
For girl there is no option it must be "purvi" my favorite
For bhai- "abhijit or daya"
For our hero who came in next chapters-"rajat, sachin, kavin, dushyant"
Guys I Can continue it according to your reviews and pm…..so keep reviewing….. till then by by and tc!
