Run,run,run was the only thing that I thought. The fire raining down upon me, Knives in my skin, blood everywhere. But I knew I could never stop. If I wanted to live I knew I had to keep on going on. The screams of rage, the pain I felt. Suddenly it all stopped and all I knew was darkness. I saw myself there, my body. Being kicked at and burned, even when I was dead. All I thought was why me, I did nothing I just wanted to eat, breathe, live a happy life. Why was that to hard, why couldn't I live a peaceful life. Then I felt anger, anger at the villagers for doing this to me. Angry at the pink haired woman for leading this crowd. My anger rose up like magma in a volcano. I screamed in rage, a bloodlust in my eyes. But then I heard metal scrapping, my anger dissipated and fear once again returned, adrenalin pumped through my veins I looked franticly for an exit or a place to hide but sadly it was too late. "Look what we have here the demon brat tried to run off" a woman with a green vest said. My eyes widened and my breathing grew erratic. The woman said "Well time to finish the thing off". I closed my eyes waiting for my end but then.

please tell me on how I did, like if I left anything out or if I was inconsistent. Any feedback is greatly appreciated. and pls remember this is only a test to see if I will continue this.