Second Chances


Algún dia también en Español (Someday also in Spanish)

Hello everyone, this is my first story, you should know that my English is not quite perfect, so I could make some more or less serious mistakes, but at least you should understand what I mean.

I made the cover myself, I know, it's pretty simple.

The story is rated M because of its language, violence and highly rated scenes (you know).

The character, plot, places and stuff original from FNAF, belongs to their creator, Scott Cawthon.

This story takes place during the decade of the 80s, the technology has been way more developed, especially robotics, as the economy didn't collapse on the 70s. So the animatronics appearance will be more human shaped and their technology will be better that means, better parts and components, no visible endoskeleton, no visible metal joints or stuff. They will still have their animal and robotic features, such as their fur, ears, metal teeth, etc. And yes, they will have sexual organs. They also eat, feel, sleep...

I wanted to thank whitewolf1707 for his inspiration and help reading this chapter before its release. Go on and check his story!

That being said, I hope you enjoy this first chapter.

(updated to correct mistakes )


Chapter 1: Animatronic


"A magical place for kids and grown-ups alike, where fantasy and fun come to life".

Sometime during the late 1970s, an establishment called "FredBear's Family Dinner" opens its doors, the place's popularity grew astronomical among the children and their families thanks to their mascot, an animatronic bear called Freddy. In a short period of time, the owner gathered a considerable amount of money and three new animatronics were built.

The horrible murdering of a child outside the building, during a party, made the place infamous, leading to serious economic problems that forced the owner to stop the creation of a completely new animatronic design and close the dinner for good. But then, a turnover of ownership and rights happen, the name as well as the animatronics, including the incomplete one, were sold to an entertainment company.

The opening of the new "Freddy Fazbear's Pizzeria" on 1983 was a success, the animatronics and their new partner were successfully introduced and FazFun Entertainment was satisfied. On 1985, the animatronics had a lot problems and malfunctions due to their age and had be replaced. Kid friendlier versions of the original four took their posts. But, something dark was going on, unnoticed, behind the laughs.

Various missing children reports were concealed from the public, which cost a great amount of money to the company, and, as the police was on the case, the pizzeria had to lay low for a while, closing on December of 1985, but the owners had plans for the future. They were going remodel and expand the building, however, their biggest investment was set in the animatronics. The Toy models and the original four were send to the other side of the world, to be repaired and updated with the latest technology.

-O-

Unknown Location.

The cold leaves and there's only darkness, I can't feel anything, but then one voice breaks the silence. "…aaand, he's activated, Paul, hand me those cables..." After a short pause, it continues, "Damn, look at these guys, the foxes are far the worst ones, especially her, how could she get so mangled by the kids?" His voice sounds concerned, a second one replies. "I heard they called her The Mangle, back at the pizzeria. Don't worry, dude, their critical systems are fine, just shut those things down. Come on, the other engineers will take care of their new bodies, later. We'll come back in a week." He doesn't seem as concerned as the one called Jeremy. "Yeah, fine. What are you going to do?" He asks. "I guess I will visit the great wall", the second one replies. "Really, Paul? That's on China. you fool!" Silence again.

"…that's it!" "Good, finally, are you done with the Bonnies? Paul, hey. PAUL!" "What?!" "The Bonnies?" "Which one." "The old one." "What about it?" "ARE YOU DONE WITH HER?!" "Oh, yes, emm, almost!" "And the Toy?" "He's ready, man." "Good, I'm done with the foxes. Hey Paul." "Jeremy?" "Are you sure the company wants them to have these servos? They could crush a truck." "I'd pay to see that, and yes, I already told you so, it's on their schemes" "Do those schemes include deadly sharp metal claws and fangs?" "I think so…" "AND WHY DON'T WE JUST GIVE POWERS, MACHINE GUNS AND KATANAS?!" "Hey, that would be awesome, dude!" "Paul, are you kidding me?!" "Sorry. Look, I think the company wants to spare as many guards as they can. Look at these guys, they are big and they can defend themselves, the children and the pizzeria." "Paul, they could easily kill a man, they are dangerous!" "But they are so cool! They could hold a bullet, and they are only dangerous for thieves, and criminals and and..." "I get it, Paul!" "Oh, and they are linked to the police criminal database." "And you forgot to tell me." "Sorry, Jeremy."...

"Finally, oh god, I'm so tired. Hey Paul, I'm ready with the oldies AIs. PAUL? Really, Paul?" "Uh? What? Oh, come on, man, let me sleep for a while." "Are you done with their AIs?" "No no, but, please, Jeremy, that vixen is the only one left." "Dude, they are sending them back to the US, tomorrow." "Pleeeease, I'm begging you, I'm finished with the others." "FINE, I'll finish her AI and programming myself, but YOU have to take them to the truck." "Jeremy, that's impossible, THEY WEIGH LIKE A FUCKING TON!" "Ok, I'll help you, BUT YOU OWE ME A FAVOR! I can't fucking believ…"

"...unfffff, OH GOD, WHY ARE THEY SO FUCKING HEAVY? JEREMY, YOU SAID THEY WEREN'T SO HEAVY" "Shut up Paul, don't exaggerate, and I'm helping you, so don't complain… Ahh, that's the last of them, go and tell your boss we're done here" "Yes sir…" "Oh, fuck you, Paul" "I'm goin', I'm goin'…" "Ah, well me ol' matey, I guess this be farewell, hehe. Good luck with the children, I bet they will love you... Just as I did…"

-O-

I can't escape from darkness, it is everywhere, and when the cold and the pain, the desperation, the regret and the sadness fades away, there's nothing left, but emptiness, sorrow, and, eventually, anger.

Foxy's Pov . Parts and Service Room.

The pain on my head wakes me up and, as my vision adapts itself to the dark, I try to move, with no results, I try to shout, I can't. "Something's wrong, why can't I move? Aw, my head, what is this place?" I can barely think as I'm looking around. It's a room filled with parts and tools, the door is closed. I'm sitting on the ground against a wall. "There are no lights, but I can see very well... Calm down, you have to remember something. Come on! Who am I?!... This hurts so much, aw, my head." The pain grows insupportable, I can hear my teeth creak, and then I fall to a side over my snout" Everything goes black.

"…don't touch him, Bon, just leave him alone, he's dangerous. And he has to wake up by himself, he can't stay like this forever." "But we have to help him, Freddy, he's one of us, the originals. That vixen hasn't awoken neither and it's been already a week!" "I know, Bon, but something is not right with them…" "I know it worries you but…" "Oh, come on! That can't be a coincidence, two animatronics do not wake up, and both of them are foxes, but what can we actually do? The engineers are coming in a week. Do YOU know how to fix an animatronic?" "No but…" "You see? Bon, listen, we can't mess with each other's systems, come on, we can't do anything but hope he gets up, eventually." "Freddy, wait. I could swear he wasn't like this last time. Foxy, wake up!" … "If he moved, he could get up soon." "I hope so." "Don't worry, he will. Let's go, ladies first." "Thanks, bye."

Finally, the crimson fox recovered his consciousness and as his thoughts began to flow without pain, he realized something, he felt sad, something was wrong inside of him, the coldness of the polished floor remembered him that feeling. "I have to find someone, I need answers. What's wrong with you, Foxy…" He analyzed that one thought. "So that's how I'm called." He sat against the wall, touched his pointy ears and looked at himself, noticing his sharpened claws and feeling his fangs, they were cold. He formed an almost imperceptible grin on his face as he heard two pairs of furry feet sneaking trough the main hall, his senses were really acute.


I won't lie to you, it was hard to write this. If you didn't understand some things, don't worry, you will, eventually.

Spanish, that's my main language. I know, it sounds weird, I can already hear someone saying, "Why didn't you write it first on Spanish then, you fool?" Well, I wrote it on English first because it is harder for me to translate from Spanish to English.

I still have school until July, so I'm not sure when am I going to write the next chapter, maybe next weekend, hopefully.

Tell me what do you think about my first fanfic.