This is the first chapter/ prologue of my story. Please review and tell me if you like it and i will carry on. I started this story as i have given up on my last as i never got any reviews. Please read it and tell me your honest opinion and things i can do better.

Thanks. Pixi.x

Alice was bouncing on her seat with Rose and Bella laughing beside her. Their younger sisters were sat on the opposite side of the limo.

Bella pov.

There's six of us Swan's in total. The oldest Rosalie is 19, and then me (Bella) and Alice are twins at 17. Alyssa is 14, Vienna is 10 and Aspen is 5. Rose has long blonde hair like mom; Alice has short black hair that was brown like dads but dyed. Mine is long and brown with blonde streaks. Alyssa's hair is a blonde bob. Vienna's is long and strawberry blonde. Aspens hair is exactly like mine.

Mom is a major actress and dad's lead guitarist for a band called The Killers. It's the summer and our folks are away so were off to summer camp.

"BELLA! Were here! Get Aspen!" Alice screamed. I laughed and Aspen climbed onto my hip. "Come on let's get out. Another limo pulled up behind." I smiled and Rose got out. As I got out I saw the limo beside us was full of firkin hot boys. I recognised three, Emmett, Jasper and Edward – the Cullens. "Alyssa! Move your bloody ass you know I have Aspen." I laughed and pushed her through the door. As I jumped out I caught eyes with Edward and he held my gaze I shook it away.

Edward pov.

I climbed out our hummer with my ten mates. We were so famous. There were paparazzi all over us. I saw a white limo beside us. Two girls hopped out. One was small and energetic with short black hair. She was in a metallic purple frill dress. (An All pics on profile.). The other girl had long blonde hair and was in a silver sparkling play suit with a diamond belt. The next girl was young only about 10 and had long strawberry hair she was in a tight black dress that was just plain. The supposedly last girl was tallish and looked about 14/15. She had a short blonde bob. Clearly bleached she was in a fitting metallic blue dress with a puffed skirt and straps. "The older ones are fit!" Emmett laughed nudging me. I only noticed the last two as we were heading through the crowd. Someone shouted "Alyssa move your bloody ass you know I have Aspen!" The 14year old jumped from the limo and a tall brunette girl with long legs and eyes you could get lost in climbed out. She was in a tight blue dress with light blue sides. She was carrying a girl with almost the same hair and was asleep on her. She only looked five and was in a little spotty dress. I caught the brunette's eye and she looked at me then looked away as I was pushed into our cabin.

Bella pov.

"Bell! Alyssa's looking after the little ones while we can go explore the camp." Alice called and I laughed and grabbed my coat and walked down the stairs. Rose and Alice were waiting at the bottom by the door and linked with me and we walked out the wooden door. Outside were the group of about 11 guys. Edward, Emmett and Jasper were there.

"Excuse me!" Rose called walking over to them. I whispered to Alice "What the hell is she doing?" She shrugged and replied "Beats me." We laughed and watched Rose walk up to the boys and the tall Emmett guy was grinning and flirting with her. "Let's go." I laughed; Alice and me walked over and stood beside Rose. "Emmett, Jasper, Edward. These are my sisters Alice and Bella." Rose smiled.

"Nice to meet you. Rose we're going to be late for diner." Alice smiled and took her arm. "Oh ok. Bye." Rose smiled and we walked off about a few steps and realised we had know idea where the dining room was. I sighed and jogged back to the guys. "Excuse me?" I asked tapping on ones shoulder. "Yeh?" He asked. He had golden hair and beautiful emerald eyes. "I and my sisters were wondering if you could show us where the café is. Were kind of lost." I smiled. He laughed.

"Sure beautiful." He smiled and grabbed his mates and walked with me back to Rose and Alice. "They said they would." I smiled.

"It's this way lady." Jasper smiled. Alice skipped up and linked arms with him. Emmett walked beside Rose and Edward draped his arm over my shoulder. I shrugged it off and looked at him. "Hands off." I told him.

"Sorry." He smiled and we reached the Café.

"You want to eat with us?" Alice asked.

"No thanks we already ate. Have a nice night." Emmett smiled and they all walked off while we went and got our food.

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