Hello guys. I had a perfect epiphany for a new story. It just seems too perfect for me to keep it all in so I'm putting it out there. Hope you guys like it! Here's the trailer of it.
Bold- Names
Regular- Dialogue
Italics- Actions
Italic Underline- Narrator
Plays Daddy Yankee's Impacto in background.
Shows the city of Miami.
In the city of Miami...
Shows people revving up motorcycles and cars.
Shows girls in short skirts and halter tops walk down the sidewalk
Shows the beach and everyone on it.
There's always been a ladder of classes.
Shows the different people in town.
At the bottom, is the people who don't do well or the criminals/gang members
Shows people who live in a small neighborhood but crowded
Shows guys walking down the block, gang like.
At the top, is the people who are at the top of their game or the very successful people
Shows two men shaking their hands across a table
Shows people working in a office
There were only 2 people in all of Miami who was superior on their game
"Hello, I'm here to see Harold Danforth for breast implants," a lady says at the front desk.
"..and in other news Jerry McKessie wins yet another great case in court today..." the newscaster said on TV.
Those guys were the best of the best...
Shows Harold getting ready for surgery
Shows Jerry pleading his case to the jury.
And they were best friends as well.
Shows both guys hanging out at home, watching a game on TV.
A white flash shows up on the screen.
Until now
"Jerry, what happened between you two?" Meg McKessie asked her husband in the room.
"We grew apart," he lied, "I don't even want to talk about him anymore,"
Scene grows dark, then flashes white.
Shows two houses
Plays Sexyback by Justin Timberlake
Enter in the next generation of Danforths and McKessies
"Alan, give me back my shirt!" Chad yells to his younger brother as they race downstairs.
"Not until you give me back my basketball," Alan replies back before running into his older sister Dominique.
"Ok, break it up. Now turn it back in at the same time," Dominique told her brothers. The boys sigh and trade.
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"Hey Taylor, I'm going over to Chris's," Kyle told his older sister.
"Fine, but don't come back dirty," Taylor told her brother as she carries her baby brother to his crib.
"Fine," Kyle smiled. He slips on his shoes and goes out the door.
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They're achievers, following in their parent's footsteps.
"Man, just think about it. When I become a plastic surgeon, I'll be working on women and fucking them too," Chad said to his best friend Troy as they walked past different women at his father's party.
"Yeah, talk about Nip/Tuck man," Troy replied, smirking.
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"I can't believe your dad just covered that case with Britney and K-Fed," Gabriella squealed.
"I know right. One day, I'll be doing a case for a celebrity too," Taylor said, dreamily.
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But what happens when one child of each generation meets up...
Chad opens the door and sees Taylor in only a towel. He can't help but stare at her and how the towel fits her body perfectly.
"Um...hi," Taylor says.
"Oh yeah, hi," Chad said, looking back up at her.
and fall in love?
"Chad, we shouldn't be doing this. Our families are rivals," Taylor explains.
"Does it look like I care? I don't care what they think. All I care about is you," Chad tells her.
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"I've never felt this way before," Taylor whispers as it continues to rain on the two.
"Me neither, but I'm glad I feel this way with you," Chad whispers back before he passionately kisses her. She kisses him back and pulls him closer to her.
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What happens when their parents find out about it?
Taylor and Chad were taking off each others clothes very slowly until her dad burst into the room.
"Taylor Monique Hilary McKessie!" her father roared. The couple pulls apart and Taylor gasps.
"Daddy, don't. Please.." Taylor begs.
"What have I told you about the Danforths?" Jerry yelled.
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"Son, you disobeyed my rules. You are to never see her again," Chad's father told him.
"But why? I love her!" Chad exclaims before his father slaps her.
"You love her that whore bag?" his father says.
"Don't you dare call her that?" Chad growls.
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Plays Go the Distance by Lucas Grabeel
Will they tear down the family rival walls...
"Please daddy. Just talk to him again. You know you want to," Taylor pleads to her dad
or will it get higher in flames?
"We can run away Taylor. If they don't want us together, why should we stay here?" Chad explains.
"I love you, but is it worth the risk?" Taylor asks.
"For love, it's never a risk," Chad says as he takes her hands.
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When it comes to love...
"I want to be with him, father," Taylor begs.
"Stay away from him!" Jerry yells.
What can stand in your way?
Shows Chad standing in between Taylor and a gun.
"If you kill her...then you have to go through me," Chad says.
"Chad don't!" Taylor pleads.
Scene goes black and a gun shot rings out.
Flashes to Taylor falls to the ground crying.
Flashes to Chad being put in an ambulance.
Starring Monique Coleman
"Did I ever tell you how perfect you are?" Taylor asks Chad as he drives.
Corbin Bleu
"Well for the 100th time yeah," Chad smiles back.
Vanessa Hudgens
"Is this really want you want?" Gabriella asks Taylor
Zac Efron
"Dude, I wish I could help you out but you're dealing with your dad's rival's daughter," Troy explains, sitting in Chad's desk chair.
Jamie Foxx
"Taylor, you know that I want the best for you," Jerry McKessie tells Taylor, touching her cheek.
And David Reivers
"Chad, son, the reason Taylor's father and I don't get along is..." Harold Danforth says to Chad.
In a modern Romeo and Juliet tale of true rival love...
Shows Taylor and Chad on her balcony.
"You know, I had a good feeling about my birthday," Taylor smiled.
"What?" Chad asked.
"On that day,I felt that I would start something new," Taylor said, "and it all started with meeting you,"
Chad smiles back at her as they interlocked fingers.
"Well, happy belated Sweet Sixteen," Chad tells her before he kisses her.
A South Beach Love Story
Shows Taylor running up to Chad. She jumps in his arms as he spins her around.
"Promise me you'll never do that again," Taylor tells him as they hug.
"If someone doesn't want to hurt you then yeah," Chad jokes.
Coming Soon
Ok tell me what you think of it. It was 5 pages long b/c there's a lot to this story. So..tell me if you like it or not. The first chapter of East High on the East Coast comes out this week. I have school on August 13th so I'll hopefully update all of my stories before that day. Thanks for everything guys!
QueenChaylor2010
