I thought in this story, I would explain (or making up) how the Chamber worked.

The Chamber's secret.

Prologue

Chamber's POV

'I feel the doom fate for this youngling, so, I show him what his fate is, that's all! That's all I did, now, he is dead. People blame it on me, but I truly did nothing at all, nothing…'

Ten years later in Kel's POV

The chamber killed again this year, took the life of another heir of Stone Mountain. It was strange and mysterious how the chamber works. Yet, I wanted to know what was happening.

Slowly, I made my way down to the Ordeal; I hadn't entered the room since my last visit. That was almost ten years ago, yet the memories burnt deeper than anything in my short life.

I was married to Dom in an Aug. night, almost seven years ago. I couldn't believe how careful he was with me, and how many times he smoothed my temper with the children we had and replace it with hopes and excitement. I treasured every bit of it at that time. Yet, I still remembered.

I sighed; Dom had been away all week. He was allowed to stay in the Owns. Now, he was on his way back from the northern part of Tortall. I am glad, every time he left me, I felt as if everything was my fault, if he got hurt, I will never forgive myself.

The Chamber was very dark. I lit a candle and reached toward the door. When my hand touched the door, a booming sound sounded in my mind.

'You again!'

What do you think? The next Chapter will be longer, meanwhile, I would love to hear some responses for me to continue.

Thanks,

Sorceress Shadow Rain