ok well this is my first ever fanfic. i started writing this a long time ago and i just never felt like typing and posting it cause i didnt think it was all too good but what ever. after reading the part where squirreltpaw got stuck in the bush and brambleclaw helpd her out and firestar came and started pms'ing at them, i started thinking about what if squirrelpaw just snapped and lashed out at him? so i thought about what she would do and there you go, this is what i came up with
i guess this is kinda like a drabble/two-shot.. im not too sure but yah read, review and enjoy!!
Disclaimer: If I really owned "Warriors" Ashfur would die, Feathertail would come to life, and Jaypaw wouldnt be blind... I mean how could they do that to a kit?? So no i DONT own Warriors.
What If?
Squirrelpaw was shocked and angry, no furious! She couldn't believe what Firestar just said! Them not fit to be warriors?
What the hell is his problem lately? She thought, he's acting like his furs being rubbed the wrong way. Every time I'm near Brambleclaw he's snaps at us. I'm sick of it!
"You," Firestar went on crisply, flicking his tail at Squirrelpaw, "take that vole of Graystripe's to the elders and carry on hunting for them." He looks at Brambleclaw and was about to speak when interrupts.
"No!" Squirrelpaw spat.
He snaps his head to her. "What did you say? You will obey you leader's orders whether you like it or not!" Firestar yowled
"Yea? Well I don't have to." Squirrelpaw said haughtily, flicking her tail dismissively and looking to the side..
"And why not?" Firestar asked.
"Because," she turns her head, looking intently at him, "YOU are not my leader anymore! I'm leaving the clan. I can't stand this anymore and why should I stay in a clan whose leader, who is also my FATHER, claims that I'm not fit to be a warrior? Good bye Firestar."
Squirrelpaw padded up to Graystripe and put her muzzle to his flank. "Good bye Graystripe, you were always like a father to me."
She padded to Brambleclaw and nuzzled her nose to his muzzle affectionately. Out loud she said "Good bye Brambleclaw" and quietly said "Sorry for being so mean, I love you Brambleclaw, I always have" and walked away.
Brambleclaw stared at her, astonished and dismayed. He padded after to her and whispered "Squirrelpaw think about what your doing, please don't leave. I want you to stay…." Brambleclaw paused for a moment, "I want you to stay with me" he stated twining his tail with hers..
Squirrelpaw stared deeply into Brambleclaw's amber eyes and said "Oh, Brambleclaw….. I….-"
gasp whats squirrelpaw gonna do? is she gonna stay and be with brambleclaw or is she gonna leave? you'll find out soon when i update
okay so how did i do? was it good or bad for my first try? give me a review and tell me how i did. I dont care if i get flames cause i would love to know my mistakes so i could write better
