This is the fixed version of Perfect-G although I didn't fix much
DISCLAIMER: I do not own any parts of Perfect Dark or Extreme-G.
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Deafening Voices: Jo! WAKE UP!
Elvis (The Alien): The Extreme-G race is gonna start in 3 minutes!
::Silence::
::Cassandra De Vries takes out a shotgun and fires it at her closet revealing Joanna's "dirty magazines"::
Jo: AAAAAAHHHH! OK OK I'M UP! Hey, Mr. Blonde, take your eyes off those magazines!
Mr. Blonde: What!? No, no I was looking at…those….um…(Don't say magazines! Don't say magazines!)….uh…magazines.
::Everyone looks at him and raises their eyebrow::
Carrington: Hurry up everyone it's gonna start soon!
Cassandra: Trent, help get Mr. Blonde away from those magazines and into his bike.
Trent: But I d-
Cassandra: DO IT!
Trent: Well…well…you're mean!
::Folds his arms and starts crying::
::Everyone leaves except Mr. Blonde::
::He runs into the room and takes a magazine then folds it into his pocket::
Velvet: C'mon! I wanna go!
::Mr. Blonde immediately runs in his bike and starts the engine::
Mr. Blonde: WELL I GOT A HEAD START SO I'M GONNA BEAT YOU! HAHA SUCKAS!
::Mr. Blonde crashes into hangar door since it obviously isn't open yet::
Elvis: Hurry up and get in!
::Everyone gets into a bike except Mr. Carrington::
Elvis: Carrington! What are you waiting for!
Carrington: I can't fit! I can't fit!
Voice in the background: 3
Voice in the background: 2
Voice in the background: 1
Voice in the background: GO!
::Everyone rushes out of the hangar::
Carrington: Nnnnooooooooo!!!!!!
::Cassandra De Vries runs him over::
::She laughs in evil pleasure::
Velvet: Hey! That's not fair! My engine wont start!
::All sigh::
Velvet: Maybe I have to press this button…
::A large explosion fills the hangar::
Jo: Haha! Velvet is such an idi-!
::Joanna falls asleep and runs herself off a cliff::
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Meanwhile at the front of the race:::::Elvis tries to bump Trent so he would fall off the edge::
Trent: Gha! You idiot! You'll pay for that!
::He presses the button to open the windshield/door::
Trent: I'll kill you hand-to-hand!
::Trent stands up and gets blown off the cliff::
::His bike makes a sharp turn and heads almost directly into Cassandra::
Cassandra: Aaaaaahhh! His bike almost hit me!
::Cassandra takes out a shotgun and shoots at Elvis' bike through a hole she just made, but the pellets just fly back and hit her tires::
::She runs off the cliff::
Elvis: Oh yea, I'm good, uh-huh, I'm the best.
::Jonathan tries to do a stunt to get into the race by ramping his bike onto the track…but misses and falls off the cliff::
Elvis: Haha! Jon is such an idi-!
::He lets go of the steering wheel to point at his falling bike::
::Elvis also drives himself off the cliff::
::Hey what the! He's levitating back up!::
::A magical finger comes down from the sky and pushes him back down::
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At the bottom of the cliff:::::Trent, still alive by landing on a piece of Carrington, wakes up::
Trent: Aww! Stupid shields!
::He kicks the side of the cliff::
Unknown Voice: Is that you Joanna? Is it safe to come out now?
Trent: Umm…yes.
::A secret door opens and Dr. Caroll comes out::
Dr. Caroll: Very professionally done my dea-…AAAAAAAAAHHH!
Trent: Haha! I've found your secret hiding place!
::Trent sticks his head in and Dr. Caroll smashes it repeatedly with the door::
Trent: Gha! Ow! Argh!
::Trent sees Dr. Caroll's bike, the Neon and grabs Dr. Caroll. He throws it out and stomps on it with it swearing the whole time::
Trent: Be quiet you!
::He gets on the Neon and runs Dr. Caroll over, making it explode::
Trent: Hehe…This bike is so shiny! Cool! This thing can levitate!
::A magical finger comes down from the sky and…burns from the bright reflection of the Neon::
Trent: Heh. Stupid finger.
::Trent levitates up the cliff and drives past the finish line. Then he claimed his Golden "1"::
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Well, there's a little more of an ending since the un-edited version.
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