Alas, the long awaited re-write of my story CPR.
Same story, just rewritten with more detail and a little…I guess 'deleted scene' type action. Reading over the old version, I noticed things I left open or unexplained...just trying to make more sense of it. I really hope y'all like it!
Not too much is new about the prologue…just edited and dotted up.
Hope y'all like it!
Flamers and Praise welcome!
XOXOXOXOXOX
'Oh my god, Oh my god!' was my first thought as I began gasping for the air I was gravely deprived of. I felt his limp body pressed against mine, hanging over my shoulder like a rag doll and looked around for help, but my vision was blurred, eyes viciously stinging.
I continued to violently pant, trying to grasp something firm and sturdy for support. My energy was slipping from me, my gaze was glossing over...and that's about when I started to worry that we were both done for.
'Kori! Kori, over here!' the voices sounded...like a light in the dark of night.
Desperate, I followed them, my senses mildly clearing with the realization of hope. I saw the large wooden platform and paddled towards it, making sure that his head was level with mine. I held on to the worn edge of the broad surface, as one of the people on it pulled him up.
I continued to gasp and flail, as another voice came,
'Kori. Grab my hand.' it said. It must've seemed obvious to them that I was losing all of my strength.
...
So yeah, maybe I should clarify.
To answer the question I assume is bouncing around your head...that girl they're calling to?
That's me.
Kori Anderson.
A girl of sixteen who has a lot on her mind, and many friends, and many more secrets…but I only have one enemy...
Richard Grayson.
He was heir to the Wayne fortune. The young playboy...a superficial prick, who wasn't worth the time of day.
And I hated everything he was.
Of course, that being said;
Yeah, he was Richard Grayson...
He was lying in my arms, unconscious...
And he was not breathing.
XOXOXOXOX
Yeah, okay, it was a little rougher than I'd hoped for it to be. But I wanted to keep it close to the original, so...hope it wasn't too horrid lol.
Either way, please tell me what y'all thought of it.
There'll be more soon:)
