Hermione sat on the broom thinking how stupid she was..."why would i take a bet about quiditch if I've never really been on a broom?" she thought angrily...Draco and harry were circling each other on the opposite end of the field. Hermione held on to the broom with dear life and saw harry go down to the other quiditch players standing around talking. Draco kept going around and around the goals apparently bored and stopped and looked over to me "oy!..you ok over there Granger?" he yelled. i noticed i was swaying a little to fast and i thought i was about to fall, i panicked and tryed to make the broom still but i leaned a little to far right and started to fall 50 feet...i was gone for good. i was sure. the last thing i heard was ""NO!"...but that was it.

DRACOS POV: i stopped going around the goal and watched grangers broom shake a little to fastly "oy!..you ok over there granger?" i yelled over to her,i didn't want to call her mudblood cause she was so high and if she fell and i would get another "talk"...and suddenly she tryed to steady herself but started to fall...suddenly something happened to me "NO!" i yelled and zoomed as fast as i could to her falling body and i reached out and pulled her towards me but all she did was hit my broom and i heard a crack ("OH CRAP!" i thought) she kept falling...i jumped from my broom and grabbed her and turned her to where i was facing the ground and held her tight to my chest "sorry granger!" was all i could yell before we hit the ground.

i opened my eyes to a blinding pain in the entire backside of my body, i thought about Granger

and what had happened...i snapped my head up and saw Hermione besides me,harry and the rest of

the quiditch team were around her and myself. i sat up slowly and felt a pain with every movement,

Granger was unconscious. i slowly stood up and stretched the tinest bit...and noticed a huge cut

on grangers forehead,i pointed my wand at it "Episkey" i said and it healed...i looked at

potter,throwing daggers at him with my glare "WHAT THE HELL WERE YOU THINKING,POTTER?" i

yelled furiously at him. (he looked suprised at me for my actions) "w..what?" he asked a little

scared. "POTTER! DID YOU JUST SEE WHAT HAPPENED?" i yelled at him then i looked at Hermione

she looked horrible...i put my wand in my pocket and kneeled down and picked her up slowly as i

could but she still groaned in pain, i looked at harry and said "numb her", "i don't have my

wand" he mumbled, i felt i was about to tear his head off!, "use mine" i said through clenched teeth and moved my robe back with my elbow as best as i could with out moving Granger much. he quickly slipped it out of my pocket and pointed it at her and muttered the spell under his breath. and he slipped the wand back in my pocket. i started to walk,ignoring the blinding pain i felt and tryed to focus on just walking and getting Granger to the hospital wing.

"MY DEAR BOY!" ...madam pomfrey came running to me..."what happened!" she

asked. "we were at quidditch practice and she fell...i saved her", i layed Hermione on the hospital bed,..."she hit my broom and i heard a crack...i think she may have broken a rib or something"...Draco said,trying to hide the worry...

...ok...thats my first fanfic...should i continue it?