This is my first story so comments and constructive criticism would be great.
Disclaimer - I do not own FAKE nor any of the characters which belong to it and it's creator.
Dee smiled at Ryo it was the end of the day and he was looking forward to leaving. After spending the day looking at the disturbing pictures of the victims of the latest sting of murders he was more than ready to go home and spending what was left of his day sleeping. 'If only,' he thought solemnly to himself.
Ryo looked over at Dee who was looking worse for wear. There were large black circles, obviously from sleep deprivation, under his eyes. His black hair was akin to a birds nest and when he came in to work his shirt hadn't even been buttoned up correctly. Ryo was worried about his partner to say the least. As a result Ryo had told Dee to go home early and that he would take a look at the crime area by himself. At first Dee had been strongly opposed but after a long argument Dee finally backed off and agreed to go home.
"You sure you're going to be okay by yourself?" Dee asked, worry clearly evident in his strong voice. "I mean the killer could still be around those parts if you run into him..." Dee paused for a moment, "I just don't want to have to look at a snap shot of you on one of those victim reports."
"Don't worry so much Dee; I'm sure I'll be fine." Ryo gave Dee a warm smile. Truthfully he was a little worried but someone had to go out there. There was a forecast for rain at anytime during the next few days and the Chief didn't want any evidence to go missing due to that.
"Alright, but just remember..." Dee trailed off before pulling Ryo close to him and kissing him softly but not without passion on the lips. Ryo's mind went into over drive as it so often did when Dee kissed him, once again unable to find any willpower left within his grasp to push him away. Dee released Ryo from his kiss but continued to hold him. "Be careful."
Then he left.
Dark thoughts clouded Ryo's mind as he walked down an ally in the downtown district of New York. A recent string of brutal murders had been assigned to the staff of the 27th precinct, more specifically to himself and his partner, Dee. They had been working together for just over a year now and while it had been a bumpy road the two were rather close now. 'Good friends,'Ryo told himself.
'Snap'
Ryo snapped around the way he had just walked unsure of where and what that sound had been. He had been looking around the streets surrounding the ally he was currently in, due to a good majority of the recent murders taking place close to here. Yet to find any evidence and due to deep brooding Ryo found himself at a dead end. Feeling suddenly anxious and alone he quickened his pace backtracking the way he had already come. How he wished right at this moment that Dee was with him to back him up. Sure Ryo was quite capable of looking after himself, but backed into a corner with an extremely capable and violent killer on the loose, this was not exactly the kind of place Ryo wanted to be.
The murders looked more animalistic then human. Flesh torn and clawed upon, looking positively chewed up. If it had not been for the gunshot wounds a great deal of the victims exhibited they would have classed them as an animal attack. It sickened him at the thought of what some humans were capable of. Ryo thought he had a right to be slightly nervous as he continued to make his escape from the blocked of ally. Suddenly Ryo's head shot up as he heard the sound of footsteps coming from above him.
Sorry it's so short I thought I would just see what people think of it before I continue
