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Scotty was walking down the hallway of his school. The bell to go to his next class rang. So he started for science.

He sat down with his lab group. There was Jessie, he was one of those guys who knew every one and was nice to every one.

Then there was Jenny, she was the quiet type she is really smart though. She knows almost every thing.

And lastly there was Angel; she was very popular with the people she knew. She was a real tough cookie as well.

Scotty was the clueless person of the group. He's not dumb, he just doesn't think about what could happen before he dose something.

"Ok class," Started the teacher, "Today we are taking a small field trip to the woods."

"Yah, it's not a field trip if it's next door." One of the students with that teenager attitude said.

"Would you rather stay in here and take a pop quiz? I have some with me right now." He said walking over to his stack of his papers.

"NO!" She said pointing him to the spot where he was standing before. "A, fieldtrip will be nice."

"Ok then." He said pulling up the back screen. "You will be going in to the woods to find some rocks." He said pointing to a picture of a rock.

"Each member in a group is going to have to find a type of rock. There are four types of rock and there are four of you in each group. What you guys want to find is up to you."

He walked over to the other side of the bored. "There is a rock that has been broke down by water erosion, that will be one of the hardest one to find, there's is a rock that has been broke down by wind witch will be a little less herd to find, one that has been created by fire, witch will be a little less herd to find, and the last one will be the easiest to find, it's a fossil rock, it has a simple fossil on it." He walked around the class giving each group a packet.

"Go ahead and choose witch rock you want to find, you have five minuets." He said. He walked over to his desk and got his coat.

"I totally call water." Scotty said automatically.

"I guess I will look for wind." Angel said.

"I want fire." Called out Jessie.

"You guys are seriously leaving me with the easy one?" Jenny said annoyed.

"Hey, I figured that you deserved a break from doing most work on the previous projects. Plus I just love water," Scotty said with a big grin.

Opening the packet and handing out each one for the right person she said, "Yeah, Yeah."

"Ok everybody, let's get going." The teacher said walking over to the door. Everyone fallowed him all the way to the woods.


"Do you think it will work?" A voice in the woods said.

"I hope so; I have hid the gems in impassable places. The only kids that will be able to find them are the chosen ones, I know that they are in this class." Another voice said.

"And once they are near each other the gems will transport them to the layer?" The first voice asked.

"I hope so." The second voice side worried, "If they don't we will have no defense agents Teraguyist."


"Let's split up." Jenny said. "I want to get this done fast.

"No.." Scotty said sarcastically. "I though we are going to stick together and get this done as slow as possible.."

They all gave that "whatever" look.

They all split up searching for there rocks. Jenny looked in the first spot and she found the fossil right away, "Alright," She said. She started to fill out her packet.

Angel was looking and she felt a big gust of wind. "Ok…" She said looking around. She keep walking And she felt like she was being drawn to something. "Ok, something is not right here."

There was another gust of wind and it went right up her spine. It made her look up. She saw a yellow light shine in the tree. "What is that?" She looked confused. "Hem, maybe its' an extra credit stone." She said with a laugh.

She started to climb the tree, she was a third of the way there when she began to actually begin to think it through. "Ok… Maybe this was a bad idea."

As she started to go down she started to feel something. "I feel as if I should keep trying no matter what." So she kept going.

She made it a couple feet away from the stone as she slipped on a branch. She screamed and clenched the tree. "This is so not worth the extra credit."

She looked down and it was a long way down. But she still kept going for that stone.

As she reached out for the stone, she slipped and started to fall to the ground. She screamed as loud as she could, hoping that some one would here and catch her.

As she fell, the shaking of the tree shook the stone out of place and it fell with her. As she was wailing her arms she grabbed the stone.

The stone glowed yellow as she fell to the ground. The wind went around her to make her softly fall to the ground softly.

She landed on the ground safe and sound. She stood up confused, "Mum, I have changed my mind that was so worth the extra credit." She said smiling.

She ran all the way back to the school to tell her group what just happened to her.


Jessie was walking a part of the woods as it got intently hot. "Few, last I checked, we weren't dew for a heat wave. Well, what ever." He wiped his forehead.

He wanted to go back, but he felt like something was calling out to him. "I feel as if I need to do something."

He looked around and there was an intense heat wave to one side of him. He looked over in that direction and he saw a red flash of light shining in a field that was on the other side of the woods. "What is that?"

He walked over to it slowly. "Wow, I probably shouldn't be here." He said with a laugh. He walked over to the wood and he had that feeling that he should go get it again.

He walked back over to the stone and it got unbearably hot. "I would not want to be inFloridaif it is this hot here." He kept going and it got so hot, the plants around the stone started to shrivel up like it was by fire.

"Wow. Why am I doing this?" Jessie said. He got a couple feet away from the stone and every thing around him and the stone caught on fire.

"What is going on here?" He started to sound a little scared. He kept crawling for the stone for no reason. The fire started to creep closer to Jessie like it was alive.

As his hand got closer to the stone the fire crept on to his legs. He was so focused on the stone that he didn't feel it.

He grabbed the stone and the fire creped all over him. He started to wail around on his back.

The stone glowed and the fire disappeared like it was never there. All the grass was back to normal, and Jessie cloths looked like fire was never there.

"Umm," He looked around then looked at the stone. "That was the weirdest thing that has every happened to me." Hew ran back in to the woods to find his group.


Scotty was still in the wood looking for his rock.

"Where are you?" He asked as he looked under a branch. He kept walking and ended up at the river in the woods.

"I didn't know there was a river in the woods." He said with a grin. He dipped his hand in to the water and he saw a blue light in the water. "Cool." He said reaching for it.

As he reached for it, it started to float down stream. Just like the others he had a feeling that he should go get it.

He ran down the stream fallowing the stone. As he kept going he ended up at a waterfall.

"What the?" He looked around the whole water fall. "When did this get here?"

He looked in the bottom of the waterfall and he saw the blue light climb up the water fall. It stopped in the middle. "Ok, I should probably start going back." As he started back, He felt a shiver up his back, almost like he jumped in a pool of water.

"Ok, I need to get that rock." He said. He had no idea why, he felt like he was completely drawn to it.

He started to look around the waterfall trying to look for a way to get the stone. "This is going to be impassible."

As he walked closer to the falls, he saw that the only way to get up there was to rock climb. "Ok, I can do this."

He started to go up the side of the waterfall. It was really dangerous. Tiny rocks from above fell on his head. "Why am I doing this?" He said as he carefully whipped the rocks out of his hair.

As he was climbing, a student found the stream. Her name was Erica. "Hem, I don't remember a stream being here." She looked down the stream.

"Hey, maybe the water erosion rock is down there." She said walking down stream.

As she walked down the stream, she saw the waterfall as well. "When did the school install this?" She said with a giggle.

She was looking around and automatically she saw Scotty climbing. "Wow, he must really want an A."

As Scotty climbs his way to the top, Erica just stood there.

"I will do this" Scotty said to him self. As he got to the same height as the stone he noticed how hard the water was coming down.

He started to climb over to the stone. As he went in, the water splashed down on him.

"What is he doing?" Erica started, "If he falls he could get seriously hurt." She pointed out. She was speaking so softly that Scotty couldn't here her.

He kept going for the stone. As get got a couple feet away of the stone the water started to come down even harder. "I've almost got it." Scotty said.

As he grabbed the stone He slipped and fell with the water.

"No!" Erica yelled. She saw the rocks at the bottom and started to almost cry. She knew he was done for so she started to run back to the teacher to tell her the tragic news.

As she left the stone in Scotty's hand glowed blue. As he fell the water going with him from the water fall carried him to the land.

"Ok, I have got to tell the group what just happened to me." He said with a big grin.

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