Authors notes, This is my first story, punctuation is not my strong suit.
This is a story based on Naruto from Viz, written by Masashi Kishimoto I have great respect for them, and do not wish to steal from them.
A huge celebration is taking place, with fire works and all kinds of food and deserts. And it's all for one man, Aldebaran Flint. On the stage is the 3rd Hokage and Aldebaran, there is much cheering as people gather round to hear what the Hokage has to say. He raises his hand for science.
"The hidden leaf has been training young ninjas for decades, and never has there been a more amazing, strong, talented, brave, courageous, smart, likable, and handsome, ninja."
he said addressing Aldebaran. "He has defeated the ultimate evil, and for this he earns the rank of Jonin." the Hokage put a gold metal around his neck and people started shouting Baran Baran!
The shouting continued till he woke up and realized it was his sister.
"Baran, I know its none of my business how late you sleep, but your already late for class." He rolled over to look at the clock, 8:30 class starts at 8.
"Damn it" He said jumping out of bed. "why didn't you wake me." He ran to the bath room and started brushing his teeth. "It's not my job to wake you up, and the last time I did you tried to kill me" She said this all in a very monotone way. "well last time you woke me up at 4 in the morning." He said between spit and brush. "To early, to late, your never satisfied." He ran out and back into his room, closed the door and started to dress.
"By the way hope you didn't forget what day it is." He threw open the door with nothing more then boxers on exposing his well crafted muscles , frowning at his he said "I hate you." he ran through the house putting on this shirt and pants. He came to the front door and grabbed his gear a kunai holster which he strapped to his leg. He threw open the door and started running towards the academy. "What an idiot it's a surprise he graduated"
He arrived when Iruka was just starting to give out teams
" Oh there you are Baran." Every one was looking at him "I-I'm sorry sensei!" He said bowing. "go sit down." He went and sat next to his friend Joan, Sirus, they both gave me looks "Shut up I whispered." Iruka go done with a few teams Hinata with Shino and Kiba, Sakura with Saskue and Naruto, and me Joan and Sirus as expected would be together. They also gave us team leaders ours would be Bernard which I'm sure my dad had something to do with it as they are good friends. Naruto got Kakashi which I was a bit jealous of
Afterwords I went outside to see my dad, a tall Jonin, war veteran, he has buzz cut wearing normal Jonin uniform army boots and black jeans. Standing next my sister Sarah 19, and brother Jamie 9. I'm 12.
"My boy, how'ed it go?" He looked exited, more then I was at lest. "It went well, team 12 me, Sirus, Joan, and Bernard as our leader." My dad was smiling. "I'm proud of you my boy." This filled him with more joy then he could imagine.
"Baran!" It was Bernard he was waiting with Joan and Sirus." come on!" He looked back at my family. "Gotta' go." And he started running towards them.
Bernard led us to a training ground. "This shall do." He pulled out a picnic basket from behind a tree. "Y'all eaten lunch yet?" we shook our heads. He pulled out some sandwiches and laid out a large table cloth "come eat." we walked towards him. But before we could get the food he jumped up to a branch on one of the trees. He put the food on a plate and sat it down. "Now you must be thinking that this is a trick, I want you to get up there." We all look up, Baran took a stance to jump. "Without jumping." Bernard said. "How is that possible?" Joan asked. "You want us to walk up the tree?"
"Exactly." Bernard answered. "And how do you suppose we do that?" Sirus questioned. Bernard opened his mouth to speck but Baran cut him off. "We create a layer of chakra between the tree and our feet." He started towards the tree. "Then you run at it." He ran up the tree, and got to the branch with the food on it. It was quite high up. "very good Baran, your father teach you that?" He jumped down from the tree "Yes he did." they had started to try it them self's, Sirus got farther then Joan did, but still not very far. "Do you think you could teach them." Bernard asked Baran. "Sure."
After what felt like hours, Sirus had made it to the top, but Joan. "Listen, just focus lightly add chakra till you stick." She fell off again landing face first, the sun was going down. "Ok I'm done." she started to walk away. "If you can't control your chakra, how do you expect to be a ninja" Bernard said. Bernard is not that tall, but he is very menacing. Joan walked back to the tree ."You want me to get the food at the top?" She punched the tree, with enough force that the truck exploded with blue chakra. When the smoke cleared Joan was standing with a plate of food. Bernard was stunned, she walked past him and threw the plate in his hands, and walked off. Only stopping to walk back and grab the food. Baran and Sirus started to walk off. "Eh, practice tomorrow first thing in the morning!" Bernard said.
"So how did it go today son?" Said Baran's father, as he entered the house. " Fine dad." Sarah looked up from a book she scribbling in. "Really? No harsh training that if you don't complete you'll be sent back?" He shook his head. "really surprising." he walked to his room. Passing his brothers room the door was open, he looked at him, made eye contact. Then Baran walked away. Into his room and went to bed.
Ok so I think that's the end of this chapter, Leave a review if you liked it and wish to see more. Also big thanks to The Kazekage of Suna for being the first person to review my story.
