Burned

Ok people this is my first ever fanfiction so be nic please. I don't know if it is any good so I would love some feed back.

Luv ya all…

Chapter 1:

There was blackness. I felt like the blackness was trying to swallow me up. Was I dead? I considered this for a moment but I didn't think I was. i wasn't sure on anything apart from the fact that Heath was now dead and I was all alone in this darkness. What was it that Heath had tried to tell me before? Something about Neferet and Kalona. Kalona. As I thought of Kalona everything became bright and I could see him standing there in the grounds of the palace talking intently to Neferet.i then saw Heath standing there intently listening to their conversation in which he shouldn't have been doing so. Heath then came out of where he was standing.

When Neferet left Kalona he turned to stare at Heath "So, little human you now have a story to tell my Zoey" Kalona didn't look to happy as he stared at Heath.

"She's not your Zoey" Heath yelled back at Kalona.

"Ah, but she is" Kalona answered.

I could see that Heath was trying to concentrate even from here it shocked me when he said "Nah, you don't know my girl".

"Your girl's soul belongs to me and I will not allow Neferet or you or anyone to change that" I could see Kalona walking towards Heath. "What is the expression the Vampyres use?" he paused. "I believe it is 'curiosity killed the cat' it seems perfectly applicable to this situation" he laughed.

I could then see a girl that looked familiar run out. That was when the 'battle' started I could see her summoning spirit and throwing it at Kalona in attempt to save Heath but it didn't work because Kalona snapped Heaths neck. From up here she could see the look on the girls face as she crumpled to the ground and looked vacant. Stark ran up to her not caring about anything else in the world.

After that everything went black again

I thought of everything that I had just witnessed and then something hit me. I hadn't just witnessed it I was the girl that had run out to Heath and tried to fight against Kalona with the ball of spirit. It had all happened before I went into the other world. "Remember" I heard a voice whisper to me. It sounded like it was moving around so I looked around from where it had come from but no one was there. The voice then flashed by me again "Remember" what does that even mean. I realised that the idea had been in me the whole time but instead I asked myself "why am I here" hadn't Heath told me that I didn't belong in the other world so didn't that mean that I don't belong here either. It hit me that I had to think of all the good things but forget all the bad things.

I wondered if that would work and so I tried thinking of all the good things that had happened in my life and especially at the House of Night. I remembered my friends and how easy it was to talk to them, be myself and smile around them all the time. I remembered Grandma Redbird and how she had looked after me all those times that had been tough at home and made sure that I was happy in my life. I also remember her for the times that I had gone to her house and she had shown me her ancestry background, including rituals. But mainly because the house of night had become a home and a getaway place for me to stay in. ii had become so high and as the first fledgling to have a body covered in tattoos and a coloured in crescent on my forehead and a high priestess. Things are certainly looking up for me. "Apart from now" I thought sourly to myself. But I am in my goddesses hands.

The darkness was slowly disappearing into what looked like a bright and colourful dream. There were men bowing to the women in their suits, women curtsying in their very pretty eighteen century dresses. They were shopping in the small area of shops. They looked like they lived in ina time when fathers were looking for good men to marry their daughters and they had balls every week. It looked so very nice here and I would have loved it here… whilst in these thoughts someone or something was shaking me and calling my name. I wanted to answer them but I couldn't move and couldn't speak. It was… I looked around and everything was changing. Someone was there. They walked up to me and saluted me with their fist of their chest. Where was I? I wondered silently to myself.

"Priestess you must awaken now to your friends. They are terribly and upset and do not know what to do with their selves or you". She spoke to me with high respect that I was slowly getting used to by everyone else. I took a look around before I started to feel my eyes open. The place was white and very clean; it looked like what everyone would describe heaven to be like.

My eyes flew open and with a start I heard my breathing. It sounded like I could not breathe although I could breath fine. I wanted to jump up and make sure everything was ok but I couldn't even move a morsel, I ached too much. I wanted to run to Heaths body and see that nothing had happened and that it was all my overactive imagination. I looked around the area and I knew it wasn't. I first saw Stark and he gave me a sad look, then I looked around at all my friends faces but within them I could see Heath but it didn't take me long to find it on the dirt. Two people though although I was glad not to see were Kalona and Neferet

Stark came over and put his arms around me and kissed my fore head. The next thing I knew I was asleep. Well I was half asleep because I could here people talking.

"We need to get Zoey to the infirmary" I could hear Aphrodite say to everyone. I could also hear people agreeing with her as I was dreaming of a happy time.

"Where are they?" I mumbled not sure if anyone could hear me.

I knew that I didn't have to open my eyes to know that without saying anything stark knew what I meant by it. He just knew.

"Neferet went before hand and when you hit Kalona with the spirit he fled from you."

"Zoey sweetie, we need to get you cleaned up and changed into some fresh clothes". I grunted at him not wanting to move from this position in Starks hands. The place that I had just entered felt like home.

I don't know whether this is any good so feedback would be real good so that I know whether or not to continue. But I may not be able to type back quickly because I have exams..

Thanks for reading it.