AN: I'm not Tara!
I just found out about My Immortal, worst fan fiction ever, and immediately want to re write it.
I'm not that good at writing either, but I'll give it a shot.
It will be done in 3rd person, to avoid copywrite annnnnd...I wish to do some hating.
No, it will not be made serious, just easier to read...
Or, at least, look at. Guh.
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A young girl walked outside of Hogwart's walls, quite pleased that the weather was fitting. Well, It's actually a bit weird, for you see, it was raining AND snowing at the same time.
Oh yes, this girl who is pleased, was named Ebony Dark'ness Dementia Raven Way, because all AMAZING people should have long names. Oh dear... She long black, ebony hair with purple steaks and red ends, that reached towards he mid back.
Honestly, her parents must be retarded, I mean, have you heard the name they gave her? Ebony! Who names there child that?
Her eyes were an icy blue, like limpid tears. I've never heard of 'limpid.' Another spelling mistake, or am I just dumb?
Some poor souls say she look's like Amy Lee, I don't know who to feel sorry for, Amy, or those idiots.
So, she's a vampire, I didn't know vampires were in Harry Potter, but whatever. Despite being one, her teeth were straight. Her reason for wandering outside of Hogwarts, was because she was a Witch, unfortunately. She's in seventh year, making her seventeen. I don't know, It's been while since I watched Harry Potter.
'I'm a Goth (in case you couldn't tell)
and I wear mostly black. I love Hot Topic and I buy all my clothes from there. For example today I was wearing a black corset with matching lace around it and a black leather miniskirt, pink fishnets and black combat boots. I was wearing black lipstick, white foundation, black eye liner and red eye shadow.' I got lazy, It's a long description about something stupid.
As she walked, these people called 'Prepz' stared at her, probably with distaste. She simply flipped them off.
"Hey, Ebony!" A voice called, she whipped around to see, Draco Malfoy.
"What's up, Draco?" She called back.
The boy frowned, why did he call for her, any ways? He hated her! Is someone controlling what he does?
"Nothing." He growled, walking back off.
It was then, some more people yelled at her from a distance, insulting her stupid look.
"Fuck off, Prepz!" She yelled once more.
AN: Forgot to mention, she will be hated through this...
Although, I haven't read the full story yet. I'm reading it as I write.
Once again, I'm not her. If you spot any spelling errors, please tell me. This is why I'm re-writing it.
