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Disclaimer: as much as I want to I can't and don't own Naruto or any of its characters.

(A.N) I am now rewriting my first fan fiction. After reading it over and realizing that it was epic fail. I've decided to redo it. This is based on the 1985 movie "The breakfast club." Very loosely based might I add.

Key

Bold: Strong expression, Transitions.

Italics: Thoughts


The Breakfast Club

Chapter 1: Detention for Naruto, Sakura and Shikamaru

11 Students are sitting in a detention room; all of them belonging to a particular clique in what appeared to be a normal high school. They all had a major role when it came to being in that school. You had Naruto Uzumaki, the class clown, Shikamaru Nara, the slacker, Ino and Ten-ten the cheerleaders, Rock Lee the jock and quite a few others. They didn't know each other but that changed on this day.

"This is your fault, you lazy bum!" The blond teen screamed. Shikamaru turned to the boy and snapped back as if Naruto was involved with them getting in detention somehow.

"I'm not the one who played that joke on the sub!" He retorted. Naruto couldn't believe that his classmate was trying to turn it all around on him. Sure he played practical jokes a lot but it wasn't his joke that got them in trouble, at least not that time.

"At least I didn't bad mouth him!" Naruto snapped back. They could remember being in detention like it was just that morning. Actually, it was Just that morning.


~Flashback- First period~

Period 1: homeroom

It started out just like a normal day in Konoha ninja academy; Shikamaru staring at the clouds, Naruto playing practical jokes on all of his teachers, Sakura was obsessing over a totally emo and possibly gay Uchiha boy. What school would be complete without a hardcore principal Tsunade and some…interesting teachers? Not this school that's for sure.

It was 1st period and already there's someone looking for trouble, and by trouble- detention!

"This is gonna be the sweetest joke ever, believe it!" Naruto was really excited about his latest practical joke and most likely to get him a year's detention if not on the other hand, didn't think so. She'd rather be swooning over that Sasuke. " Naruto you're a moron if you think this joke is gonna work," sakura stepped a little closer to him- " If anything, you'll get in trouble and don't think I'm taking the fall for you again! You owe me from last time!" Now sakura was naruto's friend; whenever the blond boy got in trouble for his pranks sometimes she claimed she was part of it. Not a lot but still. "Sakura, I know what I'm doing. This joke is gonna work. He falls for all my pranks."

"On purpose, Kakashi sensei's not stupid you know." They argued about this for about five minutes; just when things couldn't go more wrong- something goes horribly wrong.

"Attention students," announced a voice over the PTA machine " Kakashi sensei is absent today due to some bizarre food poisoning. So instead, guy sensei will be covering class you."

"aaaaaaarrrrrrrrrgggggghhhhhh! This ruins everything! If that bucket falls on this sub, I'm dead!!" Thought Naruto. He turns chibi and moves to his seat. Lord, if this poor boy only knew- this was not a teacher to prank- The minute he falls under that fish bucket it's all over.

"Ah man, why me? Damn, of all the crap that could go wrong- why this if this sub gets splashed I m so dead damn it all to hell!" these thoughts ran through Naruto's head the whole time. As if his plan couldn't fail more miserably, the new teacher walks in the door and the bucket begins to topple over. As he pushed the door opened he saw the teen getting running towards him. He was perplexed about what is going on until Naruto pushed him and he fell hard to the ground."NOOOOOOOO!" The bucket falls, not on the teacher, but on Naruto. The whole class just laughed; all but sakura who just bowed her head in shame. Now as he thought before he was dead: "Did YOU put this pail on the door." Guy asked.

"um…ah…no…" the blond replied."The one who comes to scene of the crime is the guiltiest." he just looked at their sensei shocked. I'm talking seeing a snake eat a dog shocked. After a few minutes of whispering and snickering, things calmed down. Then he pulls Naruto to the side for a few minutes.

" uh… sorry about earlier; I was out of line." Naruto apologized. For a moment the blond thought he was in the clear. I guess this means I'm not in trouble.

"Don't think this means you're off the hook kid! I got my eye on you! Get back to class." This new sensei can read people's minds so it's impossible to plan a move without him knowing about it.

"class I, Might Guy will be your substitute teacher for the next week."

One boy with a short ponytail and a green jacket raised his hand and commented: " you're the sub!? You were 20 minutes late, you almost got pranked, you cursed out a kid and on top of all that, class ends in 5 minutes and you haven't taught us a thing. What a drag."


"I will not be spoken to in such a tone!" Guy scolded the boy. If it was one thing that he absolutely hated, it was having a student bad mouth him. "You'll have plenty of time to back sass the principal in detention."

"Hey, You can't give him detention for saying what's on his mind!" Naruto said. "it is true."

"Oh ok then…you go the principal too!"

"Hey!!" "you can't do that!!" The boys shouted." oh well." Guy sensei shrugged. It was over as quick as it began. Now they were all in detention. No doubt they would blame each other for their situation.

"Look what you did, now Shikamaru?!" Sakura said glaring at the other teen.

Just like that, he sent Sakura , Shikamaru, and Naruto to the principal's office to await their punishment; may the great Buddha have mercy on their poor souls.


~End flashback~

"You guys were both wrong to do what you did!" Sakura explained. She was always a problem solver despite her raging hormones. Whenever there was a problem and someone needed advice, It was just like the student body president to fix it. However, many of her classmates saw her as "" and were annoyed by how brilliant she was.

"I guess you're right." Naruto said.

"Maybe, but being here is still a drag." Shikamaru complained.

TBC

A.N: well there's the first chapter of my first fanfic. What do you guys think? Was it good? Was it bad? what can I do to make this story better? Chapter 2 rewrite will be up tomorrow. Review please, Constructive Criticism is gladly welcomed.