the boy and the lost soul
by: windalchemist001
OK people this is me tying to do another fanfic I'm not going to name the male main character for now please tell me what you guy went me to name him. this is kind of a at the moment kind of things. and if you like this please wait i have problems with fanfic for some reason (i think it hates me but the again what doesn't) so yeah now enjoy
Chapter 1
fifty- seven people were locked away. they would be forever locked away. the were nothing to the people who changed them. but exportable weapons, they were just living weapons nothing more nothing less. so they were locked away in croissants (in a deep sleep) till someone come and wakes them from their sleep. till then these people will sleep. sleep though the days and though the years.
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he and and his friend were going to the old cave. in the middle of forest were his dad fought with the Akatsuki when he was fifteen. him and his friend deiced that they should go to all the "dangers" place before he took over his father's job as hokage... some time in the near future. so here they were trying to move the gent borders with out making to munch noise. witch so far. not going so well.
"booms away!!" he looked up to see a paper boom. he curse under his lips and jump as far as he could and barley made it in time to get away from the boom. he turned towards his friend.
"you baka!! you could have got me in that blast!!" he yelled. his friend just roll his eyes.
"but it didn't know did it?" he grabbed his shirt and was about to punch his called friend in the face when.
"guy!! their dead people in here!!" the group that had been around him turn an ran to see what Jr. had meant. he let go of his friends shirt and ran to see. and when they got their what the saw was not just a cave that look like someone as strong as his father's friends had fought in. but what looked like a lab. in this clean room were people in container. filled with water with an oxygen mask over the mouth and nonce. and the counters were every where. but one was in the middle. with a beautiful girl in side. she looked to be sleeping with head phones on her head. she had dark skin like grandpa Iruka and dark brown hair that looked almost black. chain were around her wrist and ankles. as she just floated in the counter.
"hey you nonce that most of the are women?" he over herd some say.
"yeah i wounder why?" was the response.
he turn to look around him to his surprise they were right most of the people in the room were females. the was only a few guys and the look a bit famine.
"guys!!" i think we should go back and report this to my father. everyone nodded and with that they all head back to the leaf village.
thanks for read this thing and for making it to this part. please tell me how bad i am. and don't be to mad at me about spelling and what not. and if you don't review OK i like to feel love from some people thank you ya'll
oh and p.s. if some like to help me with my spelling/gramer problem i be happy thank you.
