Okay guys so here is a little story I wrote that you can read to your friends around Halloween. It is based on the book Divergent, by Veronica Roth. This is a creepy story that crawls up your spine... Or whatever... and it's going to be epic. I hope you like it!r
Info you need to know: in this story, Tobias isn't very popular, and He does not know Tris. This is around the time when Tobias is 16 and it is before he chooses dauntless as his faction. Also, this is in 3rd person POV. Enjoy!
It was a normal day in abnegation, Tobias was moving from class to class, trying to ignore the dauntless bullies around him.
"Hey Tobias!" Shouted a dauntless named Zeke, "or should I call you Four-eyes?" He continued. Tobias was often made fun of for wearing his dorky glasses, but he needed them to be able to see as well as the other kids. Zeke ran up to him, grabbed Tobias's glasses, and began to run away with them.
"Hey, give those back!" Tobias demanded trying to chase after him. He tripped over the other kids wondering the hallways, and hit his nose on the floor. Tobias's nose started to bleed, so he hovered his hands over it in pain.
"Aw," Zeke teased, "is the stiff going to cry?" Zeke and his friends began to laugh, and Tobias clenched his teeth. As soon as Tobias's face became Red with anger, a candor teacher named Mrs. Brown saw him on the floor and instantly looked towards Zeke. Zeke threw Tobias's glasses on the floor, causing them to shatter. He set out running and motioned his hand towards his friends. They ran behind him and out the door. Jumping into the passing train, Zeke and his friends glared back at Tobias. Surely, they would get revenge.
Mrs. Brown held her hand out for Tobias to grasp. She helped him up and gave him a tissue pouch that she had in her pocket.
"I'm sorry those delinquents keep bullying you," she apologized, "but if you want them to stop, I suggest you man up and tell someone." Mrs. Brown thought she was giving out good advice, not knowing that her words only made Tobias feel worse about himself. In response, Tobias just sniffled and wiped the blood from his nose with a tissue. "Do you want to go home for the rest of the day?" She asked, waiting for the response she knew was going to be, "Yes".
Just as she expected, Tobias answered, "Yes please." Mrs. Brown started towards the principals office, when Tobias stopped her. "Wait, Mrs. Brown, do you mind not telling the principal about this? I don't want my dad to know..." He asked. Mrs. Brown looked back with her eyebrows lifted in confusion. She shrugged her shoulders, as if agreeing she wouldn't tell the principal about the incident. Of course, Tobias knew she couldn't keep a promise, she was candor after all. But he knew it would still buy him time from being beaten.
"Tobias?" She began, "do you need a ride?" Asked Mrs. brown. Tobias shook his head no. She nodded her head, still looking confused. As Tobias started to walk out the door, Mrs. Brown interrupted.
"Tobias, is everything alright at home?" She questioned him. Tobias froze. This could be his only opportunity to tell someone about him being beaten, but he decided not to tell her.
"Everything's fine," he assured her, and then he walked out the door. As Tobias walked home, he was scared that she knew he was lying. He had been told many times before that he was a terrible liar by people from every faction. Those who were from candor were the first to know when he was lying. Mrs. Brown was candor, so she must have known he lied about his home, he thought to himself. Tobias tried clearing his head. He looked around the streets, not recognizing where he was. Tobias didn't see anyone anywhere. There weren't even any faction less people where ever he was, so where was he?
okay so there was part one, this was supposed to be a one shot but it was was too long... If you want more, please review!
with hugs,
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