So I have been building this story for a while and finally decided to publish it. I have changed some of the details in JJ's life, from the TV show. for one, River.
Also she has 3 kids, not 2, I also changed their names
Conner-14
Jacob-9
Elijah-4
Her husband is a lawyer, (not actually sure what he is in the show but, I don't think he is a lawyer.)
This is one of my first Fanfics so, instructive criticism is appreciated but please no hate.
also would love to hear ideas, I have my main plan in mind but I would love to hear some ideas (and of course credit will be given if used)
I know this first one is also a little short I just wanted to get it started!
Enjoy!
All her problems washed away by the sound of blaring music and strobing lights, but that's the way she likes it. Her dead mother, father stationed in Iraq, her abusive caretaker, all washed away. 3 months ago, River Stevens, age 14 ran away from her caretaker. She always was a troublemaker when her dad wasn't around. But she had met this guy who spiked an interest in her.
"Devon!" River yells from a back room of an abandoned house.
"Yeah? Beautiful?" The 23-year-old drug dealer replies.
"COPS!" River rushes to him.
At that moment a team of cops burst through the door, River seeks protection behind Devon. Suddenly, her friend Asher pops his head in the window in the room across the hall and signals her to come. She waits a few seconds and at the right moment she makes a beeline for the window. Asher's brother is already there with the car as she escapes. They drive to an old coffee shop, and through a secret back door enter an apartment.
"How the hell did they find us?" River yells
"I don't know, someone must have tipped them off." Dylan, Asher's brother replies
"Damnit! How is Dev supposed to carry out the exchange tomorrow if he is in jail!" She's pissed
"We'll have to do it." Asher says
"And how do you think we are supposed to pull it off?" River asks angrily.
"you know they are picky about the people they see, lil bro" Dylan reminds
Suddenly police sirens start to get louder and louder until they stop outside the shop.
"How do they know we are here?" Asher asks
"You don't know they do" Dylan says
"You two go out the back window I will make sure they are off your trail" he continues
"And what do you think will happen if they find you?" River asked
"yeah, you think they will just let you go? No charges? You work with a damn drug lord!" Asher exclaimed
Loud noises sound from the front of the shop, Dylan rushes the younger two out the window and makes the room look messy. He then pretends to sleep on the couch, the cops come in loud and aggressive and shake him until he pretends to wake up.
"Hey! WAKE UP! HAVE YOU SEEN A GIRL, ABOUT 15?" They yell at him while pointing their guns.
"What uh, yeah, she left a few minutes ago, why?"
"Where is she? We think she might be in trouble." A pretty blond asks him.
"I don't know, she didn't mention where she was going" he played dumb.
"ok, if you find out, I'm agent Jareau with the BAU, here is my card, call me" she hands him her card.
"oh, ok, I will, I hope she is okay, they only come to me when they have no place else." He added
The police leave him there, but they left a few security guards out front, so he texted the others to stay hidden.
River and Asher
They run far away into the allies of New York. Suddenly they stop at an old bus station.
"Hey, I need two tickets to north biker colonial" River whispers to a man in a black shirt and cap, a sleeve of tattoos.
"K, what pop u got?" he replies
"well I could show you but…" she traces her fingers along his face to his neck. "It wouldn't be the right place. Please, just this once" she gives him an innocent, yet not so, look.
"alright, I suppose for you beautiful" he winks and gives her the tickets
They board the bus, sitting towards the middle-back of the bus.
"Hey, nice going" Asher raises his fist up for a bump
"thanks" River fist bumps him then digs her shoulder into his ribs. "Don't be jealous!" she smirks.
He lays his head on her shoulder, she leans into him, they fall asleep, but the thought lingers in both of their minds "Is Dylan ok? The cops surely wouldn't have let him go. He was a drug dealer. I mean that's what they wanted right? To get them off the street?
