Hi, audience!
I am not a very experienced writer but please be nice! You don't of course be forcibly nice but politeness is always welcomed and appreciated! Reviews, and constructive criticism is always needed! *Finally my speech is over*
Now read, enjoy, and review! ~Rospis Tears ~~~~
It was probably past 11:00 when Kaoru awoke.
She shifted slightly, edging carefully for the door, being very cautious not to awake her parents, who were deep in slumber.
Quietly as possible, Kaoru padded outside her room and walked out from her hut. She did not even waste time closing the wooden door behind her, for she knew that the door would make an eerie creak that would startle her parents and awake them.
She had done this once every two sunsets, while she saw the golden sun slowly creep into thick wisps of clouds and leave a sparkle of silver lights to guide her people from the swallowing darkness of what her people called "night."
All the huts were dark, so her village was all sound asleep. Karou could not even see one damp ray of heat, so the sun had not even lifted a slight tip in the velvet black sky.
For the blackness served for the background, for now.
The stars were like pure-like gems that gleamed and twinkled like sparkling jewels that were dancing in the shimmering sun. Karou gawked at amazement of the beauty of the silent sky, and she took all of the vivid imagery in.
Walking in a smooth, slick pace Karou welcomed the mystic nature with open arms.
All of the village though loathed nature ways, and even sneered when they saw a delicate butterfly that had swirls of silvery texture and glowed proudly laying on a flower and sucking in sweet nectar with its black thin mouth.
Once her villagers despised the rare delicacies of butterflies so much that a butterfly laid gently on a man's knuckles, and with raging wrath the man ripped it wings, crumbling it up.
A tear threatened to spill, though Kaoru wiped it away with one thin finger. She could not see why her villagers loathed nature so much, and because of Kaoru's love and inspiration of nature Kaoru was called different, not in a good way, but bad.
She felt like if she was shunned in the village.
Karou's feet still kept moving forward as her troubled thoughts began to tangle and weave together in a mess. Yes, she was different, that Kaoru already knew, but treating her as an outsider because of that, she was very confused with.
She could never hate the lord's rare beautiful creatures. No she could not.
Her eyes now caught a thin glimpse of her favorite spot. Her thin lips quirked slightly in a weary smile. Her heart flittered, she had been here a million times, but she always felt every visit fresh and new.
There in her spot was one gray, smooth boulder smothered in soft luscious grass. The wind rippled softly through the stalks of greenery, making a peaceful view. The moon was largely white, looking like a precious pearl.
Kaoru stridden to her boulder, sitting motionless, as if just the sight of the pearly moon immobilized her muscles.
Her pale skin glistened softly in thick silver, her beautiful lapis eyes scintillated in the flickering cast, and her ebony strands wafted in the tender wind.
All of this was immensely serene; Kaoru definitely savored all of this.
Suddenly Kaoru saw a blazing, bronze beam lifting in the sky. Morning began to interrupt the night, and Kaoru slipped away in the woods with a sigh.
"Goodbye night, goodbye.."
~~~
Kaoru quickly went to her hut, her bare feet prickled in dirt.
She carefully flicked the pieces of microscopic dirt, and quickly dressed in her clothes.
A kimono, it was flimsy, and a feathery, fine bow limped at the back of the satin garment. She tied her thick hair in a ponytail with a thin blemished leather belt, tying it tightly.
She knew she would not want a frizzy tendril to pop out in front of her eyes today.
Kaoru carefully skimmed for the burnished vase that she had to fill with tasty water, and pour some for her dough, to make the dough more soft, and flexible.
She found it in a wooden table, she carefully pressed her fingers in the harsh feeling of clay, but reluctantly formed a grip in it.
She came out with the jar tucked in her hands, walking to the river. Her kimono shone brightly in the flashing silk. Suddenly Karou's eyes caught a group of tight-knit girls talking and chortling together as they held jars as well.
Her stomach felt twisted, in a thick unsatisfying feeling that garbed and snapped at her.
"Hello" Kaoru whispered unsurely with her eyes pleading for acceptation. The girls suddenly grew quiet giving her sullen stares, and brushing a scent of unwelcoming.
Kaoru drifted off the group of girls, the edges of her eyes rimmed in liquid. She swallowed hard, tears fighting roughly to spill. I. will. not. cry. Kaoru repeated vigorously in her head. She was not a baby that needed every minute of comfort, she had an unyielding will to knowledge and in her characteristics there wasn't in there a crier.
Slowly the day dissolved leaving not one wisp of cloud leaving the moon to carry its job.
~~~~~~
It was a very good blessing that night finally cracked in the sky, and Kauro was in dear gratitude for it. A soft breeze lifted an unruly tendril and Kaoru rolled it to her ear.
She needed to see her spot today, to soothe her burning nerves, and calm herself.
She ran quickly through the thick brownish trunks that had dark, thin, sharp shadows. Leaving her hut she slipped into her spot, she so dearly held close to her.
She saw her boulder, there, but this time Kaoru sensed an awkward feeling, in a way that you could say she felt a stare. A stare that a stalker could only form from their hawking eyes.
There even in the night she saw claw scratches graved deeply in her rock. It was a bit amusing hat first she thought it was a bloodthirsty monster, but Kaoru only mused herself, feeling the sharp scratches but ignoring it.
Never did she know she should savor her tranquil moments of life because a new life would come and she could never return to this one. The flesh- ripping blades of time will strip it to small particles, easily as if it was glass. She never knew that the time would come to face it. Even as hard as Kauro stressed and pleaded she could never have life like it was before.
Suddenly Kauro heard a crippling sound slurp to her ear. Kauro peered hard, seeing a dark shape humanoid, but this one had a impervious cloak wrapped around it abundantly.
Kaoru flopped out to the ground, and the creature, beast, hands grabbed her.
Kauro screamed at the very top of her lungs, her neck heaving all of its voice in this quailing moment, but she knew no one heard her.
~~~~~~~~
Like it? Love it? Hate it? Despise it?
Tell me what you think of it so far? Should I continue it? Please, review!!
~Rospis Tears
I am not a very experienced writer but please be nice! You don't of course be forcibly nice but politeness is always welcomed and appreciated! Reviews, and constructive criticism is always needed! *Finally my speech is over*
Now read, enjoy, and review! ~Rospis Tears ~~~~
It was probably past 11:00 when Kaoru awoke.
She shifted slightly, edging carefully for the door, being very cautious not to awake her parents, who were deep in slumber.
Quietly as possible, Kaoru padded outside her room and walked out from her hut. She did not even waste time closing the wooden door behind her, for she knew that the door would make an eerie creak that would startle her parents and awake them.
She had done this once every two sunsets, while she saw the golden sun slowly creep into thick wisps of clouds and leave a sparkle of silver lights to guide her people from the swallowing darkness of what her people called "night."
All the huts were dark, so her village was all sound asleep. Karou could not even see one damp ray of heat, so the sun had not even lifted a slight tip in the velvet black sky.
For the blackness served for the background, for now.
The stars were like pure-like gems that gleamed and twinkled like sparkling jewels that were dancing in the shimmering sun. Karou gawked at amazement of the beauty of the silent sky, and she took all of the vivid imagery in.
Walking in a smooth, slick pace Karou welcomed the mystic nature with open arms.
All of the village though loathed nature ways, and even sneered when they saw a delicate butterfly that had swirls of silvery texture and glowed proudly laying on a flower and sucking in sweet nectar with its black thin mouth.
Once her villagers despised the rare delicacies of butterflies so much that a butterfly laid gently on a man's knuckles, and with raging wrath the man ripped it wings, crumbling it up.
A tear threatened to spill, though Kaoru wiped it away with one thin finger. She could not see why her villagers loathed nature so much, and because of Kaoru's love and inspiration of nature Kaoru was called different, not in a good way, but bad.
She felt like if she was shunned in the village.
Karou's feet still kept moving forward as her troubled thoughts began to tangle and weave together in a mess. Yes, she was different, that Kaoru already knew, but treating her as an outsider because of that, she was very confused with.
She could never hate the lord's rare beautiful creatures. No she could not.
Her eyes now caught a thin glimpse of her favorite spot. Her thin lips quirked slightly in a weary smile. Her heart flittered, she had been here a million times, but she always felt every visit fresh and new.
There in her spot was one gray, smooth boulder smothered in soft luscious grass. The wind rippled softly through the stalks of greenery, making a peaceful view. The moon was largely white, looking like a precious pearl.
Kaoru stridden to her boulder, sitting motionless, as if just the sight of the pearly moon immobilized her muscles.
Her pale skin glistened softly in thick silver, her beautiful lapis eyes scintillated in the flickering cast, and her ebony strands wafted in the tender wind.
All of this was immensely serene; Kaoru definitely savored all of this.
Suddenly Kaoru saw a blazing, bronze beam lifting in the sky. Morning began to interrupt the night, and Kaoru slipped away in the woods with a sigh.
"Goodbye night, goodbye.."
~~~
Kaoru quickly went to her hut, her bare feet prickled in dirt.
She carefully flicked the pieces of microscopic dirt, and quickly dressed in her clothes.
A kimono, it was flimsy, and a feathery, fine bow limped at the back of the satin garment. She tied her thick hair in a ponytail with a thin blemished leather belt, tying it tightly.
She knew she would not want a frizzy tendril to pop out in front of her eyes today.
Kaoru carefully skimmed for the burnished vase that she had to fill with tasty water, and pour some for her dough, to make the dough more soft, and flexible.
She found it in a wooden table, she carefully pressed her fingers in the harsh feeling of clay, but reluctantly formed a grip in it.
She came out with the jar tucked in her hands, walking to the river. Her kimono shone brightly in the flashing silk. Suddenly Karou's eyes caught a group of tight-knit girls talking and chortling together as they held jars as well.
Her stomach felt twisted, in a thick unsatisfying feeling that garbed and snapped at her.
"Hello" Kaoru whispered unsurely with her eyes pleading for acceptation. The girls suddenly grew quiet giving her sullen stares, and brushing a scent of unwelcoming.
Kaoru drifted off the group of girls, the edges of her eyes rimmed in liquid. She swallowed hard, tears fighting roughly to spill. I. will. not. cry. Kaoru repeated vigorously in her head. She was not a baby that needed every minute of comfort, she had an unyielding will to knowledge and in her characteristics there wasn't in there a crier.
Slowly the day dissolved leaving not one wisp of cloud leaving the moon to carry its job.
~~~~~~
It was a very good blessing that night finally cracked in the sky, and Kauro was in dear gratitude for it. A soft breeze lifted an unruly tendril and Kaoru rolled it to her ear.
She needed to see her spot today, to soothe her burning nerves, and calm herself.
She ran quickly through the thick brownish trunks that had dark, thin, sharp shadows. Leaving her hut she slipped into her spot, she so dearly held close to her.
She saw her boulder, there, but this time Kaoru sensed an awkward feeling, in a way that you could say she felt a stare. A stare that a stalker could only form from their hawking eyes.
There even in the night she saw claw scratches graved deeply in her rock. It was a bit amusing hat first she thought it was a bloodthirsty monster, but Kaoru only mused herself, feeling the sharp scratches but ignoring it.
Never did she know she should savor her tranquil moments of life because a new life would come and she could never return to this one. The flesh- ripping blades of time will strip it to small particles, easily as if it was glass. She never knew that the time would come to face it. Even as hard as Kauro stressed and pleaded she could never have life like it was before.
Suddenly Kauro heard a crippling sound slurp to her ear. Kauro peered hard, seeing a dark shape humanoid, but this one had a impervious cloak wrapped around it abundantly.
Kaoru flopped out to the ground, and the creature, beast, hands grabbed her.
Kauro screamed at the very top of her lungs, her neck heaving all of its voice in this quailing moment, but she knew no one heard her.
~~~~~~~~
Like it? Love it? Hate it? Despise it?
Tell me what you think of it so far? Should I continue it? Please, review!!
~Rospis Tears
