Jewel: DISCLAIMER: I DONT OWN ANYTHING RELATED TO HETALIA!!! And this story was from someone else. She just told me to update this. Ray is an OC along with Wenry. I just changed the story a bit so if you want to read something which also includes Ray and Roy you can type to this link: .net/s/5794388/1/5_Days_of_a_Living_Hell#

the story is from my friend .Negative =D PLease do enjoy the story below. C=(^-^)=D Yeah it's true, I own Ray and Wenry in a 'I made the OC's' way.


The Day I Return - The Incident begins

It was a golden evening nearing dark, everything was perfect. The summer breeze flew pass with a pleasant smell. Everyone was having a good time. Roy was having a pleasant dream of being Fuhrer, Riza was taking a break from military work, and Ed was practicing happily. Ray, A black haired girl who was a coronel, also known as Roy's little sister or Black Flame Alchemist was trotting along the sidewalk. Wenry, Ray's lieutenant was green haired and wore red glasses was walking along beside Ray. Everything went well until......

"Something feels different" Ray narrowed her eyes.

"Is it the summer air you have never felt?" Wenry said.

"Yes that but another thing." Ray placed her hands in her pocket.

"What is it Ma'am?" Wenry asked to Ray.

"I.... Don't know. But I can feel an unpleasant presence..." Ray paused and looked down.

"Remember me, Raiyan Mustang?" A shadow said from afar.

"That voice.... Pride?!" Ray looked at Pride in shock.

"So you do remember me." Pride appeared infront of Ray and Wenry.

"Well, Duh. Of course I do." Ray started teasing Pride's statement.

"Hah. Spoiled as can be." Pride gave out a fact at Ray. Ray breathed heavily.

"Let's stop this useless talk, what do you want?" Ray asked Pride.

"Keh. Ray, I suggest that you have to take it easy until the promised day." Pride answered Ray.

"What Do you mean?" Ray asked. "I just came back from Xing."

Pride took no answer and black tentacles started coming towards Ray. In a split second, Ray was paralyzed, not able to move a single body part along with Wenry. " What!? Pride Let go of me and Wenry no-" Ray couldn't finish her sentence after being knocked out. " Ray!" Wenry panicked but soon got knocked out as well.


-------Roy's POV-------

"Hey Ed" Roy waved his hand at Ed.

"Yeah" Ed said.

"Have you seen Ray?" Roy asked.

"No." Ed answered kicking the tree.

"Do you think-" Roy said curiously.

"That can't be." Ed narrowed his eyes.

"Maybe but maybe it is so." Roy said.

"That will mean bad news then." Ed said shivering.

Roy shivered as he heard his sister's name being called. "Wasn't that Wenry?" Roy turned towards the source.

" is." Ed said.

Roy and Ed looked at each other and then the source then each other and then the source once more. ".Buddha." they both said. Roy nodded at Ed. Roy started running towards the source of the scream. "Are you sure this is right?" Ed asked Roy. Roy kept quiet. They reached the area, Pride was standing there infront of the collapsed Ray and Wenry .

"Pride!!! ..Sister!" Roy screamed.

"I'm afraid you're too late." Pride smiled a bit.

"What did you do to Al!" Ed screamed angrily.

"That is a secret, Edward. Don't worry, It will be your time soon." Pride laughed and disappeared.

"NONONONONO!!!" Roy swayed his head, tears on his eyes.

"Sorry we didn't make it Roy." Ed looked at Roy.

"T-That's ok" Roy hugged Ed crying. Ed closed his eyes.


Jewel: Thank you for all your efforts. =D