Hellow again! This time I have an adaptation of a poem. Not sure if anyone on this website is as old-fashioned as me, but in J. R. R. Tolkien's book, The Hobbit, (book, not film) the Elves of Mirkwood sing a song while sending the dwarf and hobbit laden barrels down the Laketown. If you would like to read the original, just google "down the swift dark stream you go" else, this is an adaptation starring Vader all the way from Mustafar and to the Second Death Star.


Floating, floating down the flow...

Bob, bow, cry and lough…
Floating, floating down the flow.
Scream, shriek, punch, thwack.
Use the Force to snap a neck.

Down the lava stream you go,
Leaving friends you once did know,
Leave the peaceful Temple walls,
Leave the calming, vaulted halls.
Where the Force is dull and dim
Stooped in shadows black and grim!
Drift beyond the lava falls,
Where the darkness howls and calls.
Past the Death Star, past the fleet,
Where guilt an' anger often meet.

Down the shaft you send your boy,
Though your win, yields you no joy.
Catch the hand, though it's too late
Cut it was, by your own blade.
Your son in law is frozen cold,
Your heinous act, your kids behold.
Chase your children, day and night,
Grant no rest, and no respite.

Chose when it comes down this;
Save your kid, or be remise.
Turn from darkness, back to light,
Save your son, from his grim plight!
Toss your Master, down the pit…
Let the old guy, his fate, meet!

Back to friends you lost before,
Leaving darkness, you abhor.
Drift along the flows of light,
While your children, onward fight!


I'm sort of worried about the end, but everywhere else I think I did fine.

I'd like to hear what you think too, PM or something, reviews not required :=D

Clean word count: 197 | Updated 02/01/13 US Date.