AN/ Hey guys I have decided to give fanfiction writing another chance. I'm going to write yet another alternate ending to allegiant just because I hated that thy killed Tris. This fanfiction starts with Tris saving her brother by taking his place to deploy the memory serum let's see what happens will she die or will she live.

Disclaimer: I do not own allegiant I wish I do though.

Tris POV.

I'm standing here after I hear the gunshot go off waiting for death to come but it never does. I slowly open my eyes to see that David is slumped over in his chair, with Cara standing over him with the gun smoking in her hand. My eyes widen in shock I never thought that I would be saved by the girl whose brother I had killed. As I begin to realize what happened I stammer our "why did you save me," Cara just looks at me and says "I did what I thought was right for the good of humanity." I am stunned that she would say that "but what's saving me do for the good of humanity I'm just one person" Cara grins at me and says "well for would tear us all a new asshole if we didn't do something to save you," I start to smile like a maniac because now that I realize that I'm not going to die anymore and that im going to get to see him again. I stand up and look to see where the death serum used to be the one that I survived and no one else can I am the strongest divergent they will ever know.

I walk out to the front of the building to see Tobias and the group just arriving, when they walk through the door when Tobias sees me he immediately starts running towards me. When he gets within reach he wraps me in a tight hug and says "I'm so glad to still have you I thought you would do something to save your brother by going in yourself." I pull back with a mischievous look on my face and say "well I kind of did save my brother" he just looks at me then says "what did you do." I give him a sly smile and say "well I went into the armory instead of Caleb and survived the death serum" he just looks at me shocked "did anything else happen," this is when I take a step back and look him directly in the eye and say "yes David was there waiting for me, I had no gun but he did and almost shot me until Cara shot him and saved my life." He looks at me tears forming in his eyes " you almost died I almost lost you" he looks over at Cara " "thank you so much Cara I don't know what I would have done without her thank you for saving her life while I was gone." Cara looks at Tobias and smiles "you are very welcome I know you would have done the same for me if I was in your situation." Tobias looks to me and says "well Tris it seems we have both had an eventful day how about we head to the dorms and rest up for the night I feel that would be best for all of us to get a good night sleep and start with our work in the morning"