This is my first story so… go easy on me. It's not that I didn't like the Lion King 2, I did! But I think the ending could have been done a little better. There were a few things that didn't quite add up. Also I have to say, Kiara could have been a little better. I'm going to mainly focus on the fact that Simba got ambushed and we perfectly fine two minutes later. I also didn't like how willingly Kiara left her injured father. I'm just going to play around with it and see where it goes… hope you enjoy it! I apologize in advance for any spelling mistakes or punctuation errors etc.
I'm starting at where Simba wants to talk to Kovu.
Chapter 1: The Talk
"Kiara, I don't want you talking with him." Simba said, standing between Kiara and Kovu. His expression was serious. Kiara froze. A look of defiance crossed her face. Why was her dad acting like this? Couldn't he see that Kovu made her happy? She started to open her mouth to protest- "I want to talk with him." Simba's expression softened and he gave her mischievous wink. A feeling of relief washed over her. Finally! Kovu and her dad were going to talk. Maybe now her Dad will see that Kovu is not such a bad guy and begin to trust him! Kiara was starting to really like kovu, maybe even love him. She wanted her dad to like him too.
Kovu looked nervously at the King then back to Kiara. Kiara gave him a reassuring look. He put on an unconvincing smile as he followed Simba out of the Den. He looked really nervous. Simba lead the way down Pride Rock and out into the savanna. Kiara watched then as they went. She was feeling unbelievably happy. Everything was falling into place. Her mother, Nala, walked up behind her.
"Good morning Kiara, where is your father?" She asked while yawning, letting out a small roar. It was still pretty early in the morning.
"Mom! He and Kovu are going on a walk!" Kiara said excitedly. She had a big grin plastered to her face.
"That fantastic, honey!" Nala said. What Kiara didn't know was that Nala had been the one to convince Simba to go and have talk with Kovu. But she did want to take this moment way from Simba. "I'm so proud of him!" She really was proud of him. It made her happy to see her daughter so excited. She watched her daughter as she bounced up and down slightly, watching Simba and Kovu disappear into the distance. "You really like him don't you?"
"What?" Kiara turned around, she was lost in her own thoughts about Kovu. Nala could see that she that. Kiara began to realize her mistake. A smile crept its way across Nala's face.
"You do don't you?" Nala chuckled.
"Mom!" Kiara blushed, "Maybe a little…"
"I knew it!" Nala said, laughing at how uncomfortable Kiara was. Kiara was blushing. It was one of those awkward mom conversations. (A/N: You know what I mean)
"Mooomm!" Kiara smiled awkwardly and turned away from her mom. She could hear her mother laughing to herself. Nala came up besides Kiara and nuzzled her. Nala loved her daughter and just wanted her to be happy. She turned and headed back into the Den the gather her hunting party and begin her duties as queen. Kiara looked out over Pride Rock. Simba and Kovu could no longer be seen on the horizon. Again her thoughts wandered back over to Kovu. She couldn't hide it anymore. She was in love with Kovu.
Yup, so that's chapter one. Hope you like it. I know it's really short but the next one will be longer…hopefully. I'm not sure when the next chapter will be up, hopefully soon, but yah know. Homework. I know, I had an Authors Note in there (A/N) hopefully I won't have many of those but no promises! Please review, as I said before this is my first story so… go easy on me. Thank you!
