Disclaimer: I don't own 6teen sadly, BUT I DO OWN A SYAORAN PLUSHIE.
This is first 6teen story, go easy on me.
Summary: It starts out like every other day, other than the fact that there is a killer on the loose! After a two day sleep over at Caitlin's, the gang goes back to the mall like normal, except for the fact that, since they forgot to watch the news, the killer is heading to the mall! And so now they are trapped in the mall, fearing for their lives as they learn that, there isn't just one killer around…
Killer in the mall.
Jude rolled in on his favorite skateboard 'sally' and sat at his regular place with his other five friends. Jen, Jonsey, Nikki, Wyatt and Caitlin.
Jen had to work at the "big squeeze" aka 'the lemon' for a year so she could work at the Penalty box, she was also bossy but she did mean well.
Jonsey was the wise cracking guy. He could never hold a job longer than three days. He was also really, really interested in the opposite gender.
Nikki, the though one in the group. She works at the Khaki Barn, much to, her dismay, and she hates every thing girly. She hates the 'Tacky Barn' She hates pink, and most of all she hates her co-workers, the clones.
Wyatt, He was more sensible one in the group, although he had amazing singing and guitar playing talents he had an 'addiction' to coffee. He now works at burger McFlippsters. He used to work at Spin This before he was fired from his Ex because she didn't like that he couldn't get over her. And then he was fired from Underground video.
And, Caitlin, the newest member of the group. She works in the lemon and she was quite girly. That was okay though, her heart was in the right place.
And then there was Jude! The skater guy, he worked at underground, and doubled as a zamboine driver. He was laid back and thought out side the box at most times, or even out side the room.
"Dudes' what's up?" Jude asked casually.
"Not much," was most of their responses. Except Caitlin's.
"Jude, have you heard?"
"About what?" Jude leaned his head back over the back of the chair so he could see Caitlin, even if she was upside down.
"About that killer, who is supposedly in out city!"
"Oh yeah, bra?"
Nikki laughed and waved it off. "Come on Cait, you don't really believe that do you?"
"Well it could be possible!"
"Could," Nikki repeated, " Doesn't mean it IS true."
"I know but," Caitlin sighed, she wasn't getting any were with this. "Okay," she sighed, "I give."
"Good," Jen spoke up "Now you know there nothing to be afraid of."
"Don't worry, bra, I'll be there for you."
"Thanks Jude"
There was an awkward silence between the teens. Wyatt broke the silence by sipping his coffee.
"Um, so, any ideas?" Jonsey asked
"For what?" Wyatt said in a long time.
"Something to do" Jonsey replied as if it was obvious.
"We could go to the amusement park," Jen suggested "I haven't been there in a while…"
Caitlin groaned in the background, "I can't go on half the rides though…"
"Then we'll go to the movies after." Jude said, hoping to cheer her up.
x0x
"Okay, I can do this." Caitlin took a deep breath and slowly took her seat next to Jude. At the very back.
Nikki and Jonsey were in front of them and Jen and Wyatt were in front of Nikki and Jonsey.
Caitlin made a small whimper as the ride began to move an inch. Her knuckles were turning white because she was gripping the safety bars so tightly.
She calmed down when the ride stop and a man with a 'manager' badge came by.
"It's after Four o'clock, you don't mind if we change the course on you, do ya?"
"No." was their response.
"Okay, More loops twirls and your cart breaking away from the others commencing!"
Caitlin eyes went wide and her knuckles went white again.
Jude just placed a reassuring hand over hers and smiled.
"It's not that bad brah."
Caitlin forced a small smile and noticed that their cart broke away from the others.
"Hi Blondie Hi Jude!" Cried Nikki and Jonsey who were having a blast.
Jude waved happily but then his face paled.
"w-What's wrong Jude?"
"Bra…" Jude was pointing down.
Caitlin looked down and screamed, She didn't noticed they were going up a hill. And at the top you could see down to what they were going on.
"It looks like a death trap!" Caitlin hollered as she clung to Jude for dear life.
It had loop-de-loops, 16 of them, and corkscrews and more death drops that ever before.
Jude laughed nervously and rubbed the back of his head.
"I should have told you that the back cart has the scariest rides after four…"
Caitlin, who has Jude in a death grip, had her eyes clamped shut and hoping it was all going to be over.
Then She felt it, the cart go over the edge at the top.
"AHHHHH!" Was Caitlin's scream of fear wile Jude's was more of a,
"YAHOOOO, DUDE!" Out of sheer fun.
x0x
"Your still scared?" Nikki yelled so Jonsey could hear.
"Yeah, so what's it to ya." Jonsey gulped as her went upside down on a corkscrew
Nikki laughed as they started going up a hill,
"Your such a wimp."
"Shut up."
Nikki looked over edge and waved "Hi Blondie Hi Jude!" As did Jonsey.
"You, know what? I didn't think you'd see other carts."
"Who cares about that!" Cried Jonsey as he looked over the cart, he saw what looked like a huge mess of tracks, but it was some forms of extreme ride.
"Look what we get to ride!" He yelled happily, although he knew he would be afraid.
x0x
Soon, after the 16 loop's corkscrews and drops of death, the carts joined up back together.
Jonsey looked back at Jude and laughed at him, Caitlin was still clinging to him and he had the goofiest grin on.
"Dude not funny, She's really scared."
"Jude, didn't you tell her the back one was the scariest?" Jonsey laughed again.
"I didn't think that they'd change it on us, man!"
They all slowly got off and Caitlin's first response was to run and sit some were away from the 'rollercoaster of death' as she called it.
"Sorry Cait," Jen said walking up to the traumatized friend.
"We shouldn't have made you get on that."
"It's not your fault." She wheezed "I got on myself."
Wyatt, patted her back trying to make her calm down.
Jude sat besides her feeling guilty. "Sorry," he said simply. Caitlin just smiled and replied
"It's okay Jude, I got on my self. And I'm feeling better, now…" she trailed off smirking at her friends "Who wants cotton candy!"
The friends jumped up and ran to the convention stand and bought what they wanted, while most of them ate cotton candy or something else, Jude ordered a corndog.
"Dude a corn dog?" Jonsey said, mildly surprised.
"What can I say? Old habits die hard, bro"
Jonsey just looked away muttering something under his breath about Jude.
They all soon agreed that, if they went on another ride, they would, without a doubt, throw up.
Jude had eaten thirty corn dogs and wasn't feeling all that well. Nikki had eaten more than her fair share of nachos, Jonsey had eaten way to much popcorn (five HUGE bags), Jen was close to throwing up from eating way to many bags of those salty peanuts. Wyatt, was actually more sensible and only ate two candied apples. Caitlin was not so lucky, she ate, and two bars of chocolate, one bag of popcorn, three bags of really salty peanuts and had to eat six cottons candy bags to make the salty-ness go away.
"How about –urp- we go to the movies now and just relax…" Caitlin asked hopefully.
"Good idea" Nikki replied.
The gang slowly made their way to the movies and chose the new movie :Mr. Bean. (gimme a break I can't think of a good movie)
The gang sat at the back, the normal order, from left to right, Nikki, Jonsey, Wyatt, Jen, Caitlin and Jude.
Halfway through the movie Jonsey tried putting his arm over Nikki's shoulders but she pushed them off.
"Aw, common Nik."
"I told you Jonsey, not now…" Nikki hissed while looking at her friends. Seeing Caitlin trying to steal some popcorn from Jude and Wyatt trying to ignore. Jen sat there mildly interested in watching Caitlin trying desperately to get some popcorn.
Caitlin gave up and got up to go to the washroom. She got by Jude, but forgot about his skateboard 'Sally'.
She stepped on it by accident and went flying down the isles landing on her butt at the bottom.
"Owww," She moaned.
Jude and Wyatt snuck down the isles to see if she was okay, it had to be them because it was the most convent.
"You okay Caitlin?" Wyatt asked in a hushed tone.
Jude helped her up onto her feet and got 'Sally'.
"Yeah, just I'm totally mortified."
"It's okay Cait, I bet half the people didn't even notice." Jude said.
"You think?" She asked walking up the isles.
"Totally." Wyatt told her.
The people in the seats were snickering as they walked back up to the top. Things like, 'What a klutz' and 'how clumsy can you get?' were heard though out the theater.
When they sat down Caitlin cradled her head in her hands. Jen and Wyatt switched spots. And Jen put a comforting hand on her shoulder.
"It's okay Cait. You don't even know half those people."
"Yeah," Caitlin sniffed "Your right."
After the movie, and after Caitlin's embarrassment, they went to the lemon. It was almost 6:00pm, all the stores were closing and preparing to close the mall for the day.
"All in all today was good right?" Jen said hopefully.
"I guess," Jonsey said "But I didn't see any hot chicks." Nikki slapped him in the head.
"Yeah," Caitlin said, "It was good, even though I was scared, about to puke, and totally embarrassed my self."
Just then the gicantoplex screen came on with the newscaster
"Hello, I just want to you remember to be extra safe on the way home, please try to stay in large groups. There is a killer on the loose. That's all."
The screen shut off and the group was silent.
"Um, Guys…" Caitlin said softly.
"Do you think we could have a sleep over? All of us?"
"Why?" Jude asked.
"Well, You all think I'm kind of, well, a scaredy-cat, and my parents are out of town today…" Caitlin looked pleading them with her eyes.
"Couldn't hurt bro."
"Sounds fun."
"Couldn't hurt."
"We'd all have to ask…"
"a night with Blondie wouldn't kill me."
Caitlin smiled happily.
"Thanks guys."
"No, problem." Jonsey said.
x0x
"So, you guys got every thing?" Caitlin asked.
"You know it."
"Okay." Caitlin opened the double glass doors to her mansion.
"Whoa."
The gang had forgotten one thing about Caitlin, she's loaded.
"It's not much…" She started "But…"
"DUUUUDE!" Jude ran in and looked around the house.
It had spotless dark wood flooring, and a long hall leading to the living room, kitchen and various other rooms. To the left they had a huge winding plexy-glass staircase with a dark wood railing.
"This is SUH-WEET" Cried Jude.
"Jude this isn't even the formal entrance."
"What?!" The gang asked. Caitlin blushed.
"Yeah, this is one of the less fancy entrances." She shrugged it off, ignoring the looks on her friend's faces.
"My room is on the third floor."
"But, Cait, I wanna see all of your house." Jude pouted.
Cait, rolled her eyes and sighed,
"Tomorrow, after the mall closes so we don't get fired."
The all agreed. They walked up the staircase and they all gasped. The second floor was even more fancy than the 'less fancy' entrance.
More spotless dark hardwood floors and a big chandlers hanging in the center of the spiral staircase. Exquisite painting on the wall, and a nice medium beige paint.
The staircase was made of more plexy-glass and spiraled up to the next floor.
"So, what's this floor for?" Jude asked after he ran back down the stairs to retrieve it, because he dropped it.
"Oh, just guest rooms, and the library…" Caitlin thought for a second. "Oh! And the theater… the baloney as well as a greenhouse thing." she blushed.
"Whoa." Was their response.
"Come on, we are almost there." Caitlin led them up the stairs again. The third floor was normal. It was still more than your average home, but it wasn't over the top like the rest of the house.
"Okay," Caitlin said, "Here is my room." She opened the door to
A very...pink room, with a beautiful and elaborate bed. Huge windows with graceful curtains; that covered the door to the other baloney, from there you can see over the city.
She had posters, mostly Dog Toy, but the biggest one was of her friends.
Caitlin blushed. As she realized they were all staring, not only at the room, but also at the poster of them.
"What?" she said as if it was nothing. "It gets lonely."
"Dude, Were is the washroom anyway?" Jude asked.
"Down this hall take a right and it the sixth door on your left."
Jude just blinked in bewilderment. Caitlin rolled her eyes and started dragging him along.
"Bra, this feeling funky, you taking me to the washroom…"
"You know your way back right? I don't need to stand out here like your mom or something."
"No, I'm good."
Caitlin got back to her room; every one was unpacked well except for Jude who was in the washroom…
"Yo Cait, were is the food?"
"Downstairs In the kitchen, we'll all go so we don't have to make as many trips up the stairs."
The gang all headed down stairs to get some snackage.
A/N: GASP they gang for got Jude in the washroom…soooo, what do you people think? Longer, shorter? More detail? Do you think they are all in character? Please no flames.
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