Hey, there!
Thx for giving my story a chance. I am a bit of a Twilight hater...sorry Twi-fans=( Anyway I decided that I had no right hating on Twilight if I could not write something better. So, here it is...
MY TWILIGHT REWRITE!
I look away. Why couldn't people just leave me alone?
I like being alone and reading books! I don't see why people can not respect that! Ok, its not like I have any friends, but I don't need any.
Most kids my age are just silly and immature. They all go on about Justin Bieber and Taylor Swim and that Edwin guy. I mean who cares?
Ok, yes a lot of people care, but I really, really couldn't care less. Whats is wrong with it if I am more interested in the Harry Potter books even though I have read the whole series three times?
There is basically two types of people to me. The ones who bully me and the ones who pity me. They all see the same thing though. Poor, lonely loser, awkward shy Jayde Katchmoore, the poor girl who only has books as friends.
I keep my inner monologue going as I walk through the cafeteria. Most people don't notice me except of course Janetta Rose. I ignore her constant whispering and gesturing in my direction. I once tried to stand up to her, but it did not go well. I guess I'm just a shy person by nature. Nothing wrong with that. At least I'm not a total airhead like Jannetta.
I mean, seriously, Rose? Comon, did her 'rents change their whole family's surname just for her? Is her dad called Mr. Rose?
I giggle at the thought. Unfortunately that attracts some attention. Two girls I don't know look at me with that what-is-wrong-with-her-she-is-just-so-weird look.
I choose to ignore then and sit down at my usual table. I don't have any money as usual. My mom preferes to pack my lunch. Even though my family is just as weird and socially awkward as me. I love them to pieces and would never swap them, ever.
I once heard some girl say that I must be embarrased to find a little card with a message from my mom in my lunch box, but I'm not.
Ok, a little, but I appreciate that my mom goes through that trouble to show me she loves me. My whole family is self proclaimed nerds, geeks and fans. My parents even met at comic con when it was still new.
I sigh as I bite into my sandwhich.
My younger sister is also weird, but unlike me people seem to think that it is cute and cool. She once came to school in a Gryffindor cloak. Sure some people laughed at her, but she laughed along and most kids admired her for her bravery in doing something like that.
I guess the difference between me and my sister is that she is fun and out going. She owns her weirdness. She wears extra nerdy glasses on purpose and dyes her hair rainbow. People like her. When people make fun of her she laughs along or does looks really sad trick. Strange enough as soon as the situation goes to what looks like the bullying you see in school books everyone feels sorry for her.
I on the other hand is just weird in a shy, scaredy cat way. I talk so softly people can hardly hear me. In fact I don't talk at all if I can help it. I just like books and cats more that I like people.
Or maths, but the ones that really make you think, not the stuff we learn in school. Yea, even though I am the perfect nerd, my marks are barely above average.
I quickly finish my other sandwhich, before I eagerly grab my Doouble-Choc Crunch bar. Mhmmmm, delicious. Biting into that sticky sweetness, I quickly forget all the mean things said to me and my own popularity status of zero.
I grab the new Warrior Cats book and happily start to read. Who cares what others think?
The world is a competetion, right? Your friends or family or what ever nice people you know are on your team and and you and your team go against the world.
Seems impossible, but I sure as hell won't already back down at the first insults my opponents throw at me.
That is normal. When people are competing they try to make their opponents loose confidence by throwing insults. Why should I care what my enemy thinks?
So, there it is. Ok,ok maybe I'm not that good at writing, but I think my plot and characters will be way better that . Yea, this will be very AU.
Plz, if you are a Twilight fan don't hate on this. If you really think Twilight is better tell me in a review along with some reasons. I will ignore you completely if you just say you don't like it and give no reasons as to why.
If you like mine better...well plz tell me! =)
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