author's note: yay! version 2! thanks to hikari, quirky rikku and hyper monky for reviewing! ^_^ it inspired me again! so i'll play later to continue it! i'm already in the al bhed stuff... ^_^ if no one really likes the way i edited it, i'll just put the old one again! ^_^ ehhe... enjoy! happy reading! R&R please!
disclaimer: i do not own ffx. but i own one of the merchendise. *sighs* i wish i could own square one day!
sa! kakate koi ya! - gippal
story:
-the beginning-
*main theme in backround* 7 people were sitting near a fireplace. thinking, "how can we save the summoner?". I couldnt take it. it's too sad. I like happy. so I stood up and started walking to the cliff thingi. yuna looked worried, so I put my hand on her shoulder to say that it's oki.
so I continued to walk to the cliff thingi. thinking, "whaa!!! this cliff thingi is too high!!! I cant get up!!!". but still i got up though. everyone was still looking at the fireplace. I thought, "is there something in the fire?" then I giggled at the thought. when I got on top of the cliff thingi, I thought, "oh my, it's zanarkand!! my home! whaa!! I wanna cry!". but I got hold of it so that I won't trouble anyone.
I standed up there. looking at the pretty-witty pyreflies. they were forming some kind of light thingi. oh, and this happened when we got to zanarkand. I wanna tell you the story!! of yunie's pilgrim thingi. oh ya! pilgrimage! this may be my last chance to talk since... I dont wanna spoil it. so please listen!!!!
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there were lots of people outside my house. adults and kids! like me! I think their there coz I'm the youngest in the blitzball team, zanarkand abes. everyone's ten, or eleven. I'm seven! cool, huh? oh, gotta go outside now.
then one of the people saw me come out, and then he reported to the other people that I'm there. so the people went to a place near the bridge to my house. then a kid wearing a violet hood came out of nowhere. i wanted to say, "whaa!!! help me! there's a ghost!" but I didn't coz everyone will think I crazy. (yes, i crazy...)
so I walked to the place near the bridge and waved "hi!". then all the mommies and daddies in the place near the bridge also waved hi to me. then i walked to the 3 kids holding blitzballs. they wanted me to sign it. I signed the blitzball of the orange haired kid first. he said,
"can you sign this?"
"no prob!"
my handwriting wasn't that good though. then signed the blitzball of the kid with a yellow hat coz he said,
"please?"
"alwighty."
then I signed the blitzbal of the kid with hair like tarzan. wait... who is tarzan? I remembered my mom told me stories with a man named tarzan who liked shouting and hitting his chest. so I signed his blitzball coz he said,
"me too!"
"take it easy!"
and I thought, "I AM a kid like you!". so I signed their blitzballs then talked to the other people, like the nice lady with long black hair that squeezed my cheek and said, "are you going to show us that shot tonight?"
"hmm.. i dunno. maybe..."
"you should do it, for us!" after saying that, she kinda made a little dance that no one really noticed. it was scary... then I talked to the man beside her. he was kinda scary coz his hair was kinda like an helmet. oh? it is an helmet. he just said good luck. then I talked to the kid who came out of nowhere, thinking, "whaa!! it's the kid, come on tidus! put it together, you were just imagine things.". then the kid said, "the game tonight, it's very important." i was kinda scared. but then after he spoke, i didnt anymore. then i spoke to a guy wearing grey, he was nice, he asked how i was feeling and told me i'm jecht's son, he'd be crazy if he didnt cheer for me.
then I talked to the other people. they said good luck. then I talked to the two little girls who were kinda excited to talk to me. when I went up to them, the one in pink said,
"can I have your autograph?"
"sure" then the one in blue said,
"good luck tonight."
"nothing to worry about." then I did the twist thingi with the ball but the ball fell down. too bad. so that I won't get embarassed, I said, "oh, if I score a goal, I'l... uh...l do this" I raised my hands.
"that would mean it was for you, kay?" I said. then they started giggling like crazy!!! "whaa! mommy!" I thought. then I asked, "where you seat?"
the one in pink said, "east block in the front row, fifth from the right." then I asked myself, "where's east?". then I said to them, "got it." even though I didn't.
it was time for me to go. they'll scream at me if I dont hurry. so I said to them, "well, gotta go, cheer for me." then the kid with an orange hair said, "two, three," then the three of them said, "teach us how to blitz!" then I said, "hey I gotta game to play." then the kid wearing a yellow hat said, "then teach us after."
"maybe tonight... um... well..."
then the kid that came out of nowhere said, "you can't tonight"
then looked at the kid then I said, "I mean, tommorrow." the kid with a hair like tarzan made me promise then I did. then the three kids made like some sign. oh ya! a prayer. I dunno how it was called a prayer though.
then I left. i was walking in this long long bridge to the stage... i mean stadium. there were lots of water in the buildings in zanarkand. it's a good thing people dont drown. oh ya! the story. I was walking in a long long bridge then I saw the billboard thingi with my dad in it. I looked at it then looked away. disappointed. then I looked at it again, angrily. "hmph!" I said to the billboard, then started to run away from it. then i heard the PA thingi saying,
"I was in a coffee shop running away from home when i heard the news. our hero, jecht, gone. vanished into thin air! hm! my dad and I must have been his biggest fan. I knew how sad he'd be. heck, we all were that day. 'zanar,' I says to myself, 'what are you thinking?', I went running straight back home. we sat up talking about jecht all night. my dad and I never talked so much, whoa... didn't mean to reminisce, folks." then I wondered, "what's reminisce?".
then the PA worked again, it said, "anyway... five years later, the jecht memorial cup tournament is today! the two teams that have won through the finals are of course, the abes from a-east, and the duggles from c-south. i know there's a lot of people out there today to see the star of the abes. in just one year, he's become the team's number one player! he's jecht's blood, and the new hope of blitzball!" then I wondered, "I'm not my dad's blood! I'm my dad's son! whoa! I regret saying that!" then the PA started again, "what kind of super play will he show us today? will we see his father's legendary shot? I don't think I'm the only one excited here, folks!"
then I talked to myself, "hmph! legendary shot! it's just a shot! hmph!" then I ran to the stadium.
when I got to the stadium... uh oh... trouble... a lot of people! whaa!!! mommy!!! so I tried to run through or crawl through. but instead I said, "make way! make way!" didn't work, "coming through, sorry." didn't work either, "hey! I'm gonna be late!" didnt work either. "then I said, let go of me!" it worked! why? I was very near the stage already! hehe... then it's blitzball time!!
there was a electric ball!!! then everyone came in. I stood up and the people cheered. yay! they love me! they really do love me! ahem! back to da stowi! the electric thingi exploded. almost got hit! what I didn't know is! auron was somewhere in the city. near a big ball of water. back to blitzball we were having a hard time. and I managed to KO a member of the enemy! bwahaha!! we got a goal! whoa! intense battle! sphere shot time! I was gonna hit the ball already! but the big ball of water striked us! I hung on the stadium and I fell! whaa!!! the stadium!!!
everyone was running and running! i didn't know what to do! whaa!!! mommy!!!! then I saw... "auron!" I called to the person in a cool red cloak. he had his bottle of apple juice as usual. I went up to him and asked,
"what are you doing here?" i said as I put my hands on my hips,
"I was waiting for you."
"what are you talking about!?" i said as i waved my arms. then he walked away. I tried talking to the people but no one answered. and whenever i come up to them they pass through. whaa!!! ghosts!!!
when I was chasing auron, the kid who came out of no where, came out of no where again. there was a white flash then he appeared. I walked up to him and smiled then I noticed as I look everywhere... everyone froze. "it begins." he said as I looked at him again. I was thinking I wanted to cry and call my mommy.
"wha?"
"don't cry."
I walked up to him again then a white flash again. I looked everywhere then where the kid that appeared out of no where standed. he was gone again. I looked for the kid again, but he really was gone. "what the...?" I said. then I saw auron. i ran up to him and said, "hey wait!"
"hey, not this way." I said as I breathed, oh wait... gasping for breath? okay.
"look!" he said, as he pointed his face to a big ball of water. I looked. wow! what is that thing!?
"we called it sin."
"sin?"
then a squid thingi crashed through a building then landed in front of us! whaa!!! they're attacking me!!! auron!!! "take it." auron said, as he gave me a shiny red long sword. then he standed me up. and let me go. the sword was heavy! of course! i'm a kid! auron said,
"a gift from jecht."
"my daddy?" ewww... I sound like a girl! eeww... then I striked the monster thingi. auron said they were called fiends. when I stroked the longsword, I fell down. then auron posed in his battle form, then he said, "you know how to use it." then I nodded and prepared for battle. auron said, "these ones don't matter, we cut through." yay! i killed all of them! haha!!!
then auron said, don't bother about going after all of them, just hit the ones that matter and run!" oh... auron got an overkill!!! whaa!!!! what does that mean? then the squid looking fiend went in front of us. battle time! i said,
"get out of my town!"
then auron said, "some can't wait to die!" then auron used his overdrive and overkilled the little fiends! hmph! i could've done that! then i did my overdrive. haha!!! more damage than auron!!!! then we defeated the monster! bwahahaha!!!!!!
after the battle, we ran through and then we passed by the billboard with the pic of my dad. the lights were going on and out. it was like he was laughing. then I said,
"what are you laughing at old man!?!"
"auron! let's get out of here!"
"we're expected."
"huh?"
then he ran, and i said, "gimme a break man! i'm just a kid!" and I ran after him. while we were running. more little fiends which auron told me are sinspawns. more sinspawns were behind us. I guess we really were expected.
then, battle time again! whaa!!! I'm getting tired! after killing sinspawns and sinspawns replacing it... we were getting tired. auron said,
"hmph, this could be bad." then he saw an electrical thingi near me.
and said, "that--knock it down."
"what?"
"trust me, you'll see."
then I used my overdrive on it, and it fell to the water which was gasoline! then it exploded! the building with my dad's pic fell, then we jumped on it so that we could get to the other side. sigh, barely made it. i was hanging! whaa!! I yelled, "auron! auron!" then auron talked to the monster thingi, saying "you are sure?"
then he picked me up, "this is it. this is your story. it all begins here." and we were engulfed by shiny white light. it hurt my eyes... whaa!!! but what did auron say? why did he say that it... my story... begins here?
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liked it? hope ya did! i followed what quirky rikku and hikari said. ^_^ i'm a good girl! ^_^ hehe... please... R&R
disclaimer: i do not own ffx. but i own one of the merchendise. *sighs* i wish i could own square one day!
sa! kakate koi ya! - gippal
story:
-the beginning-
*main theme in backround* 7 people were sitting near a fireplace. thinking, "how can we save the summoner?". I couldnt take it. it's too sad. I like happy. so I stood up and started walking to the cliff thingi. yuna looked worried, so I put my hand on her shoulder to say that it's oki.
so I continued to walk to the cliff thingi. thinking, "whaa!!! this cliff thingi is too high!!! I cant get up!!!". but still i got up though. everyone was still looking at the fireplace. I thought, "is there something in the fire?" then I giggled at the thought. when I got on top of the cliff thingi, I thought, "oh my, it's zanarkand!! my home! whaa!! I wanna cry!". but I got hold of it so that I won't trouble anyone.
I standed up there. looking at the pretty-witty pyreflies. they were forming some kind of light thingi. oh, and this happened when we got to zanarkand. I wanna tell you the story!! of yunie's pilgrim thingi. oh ya! pilgrimage! this may be my last chance to talk since... I dont wanna spoil it. so please listen!!!!
-------
there were lots of people outside my house. adults and kids! like me! I think their there coz I'm the youngest in the blitzball team, zanarkand abes. everyone's ten, or eleven. I'm seven! cool, huh? oh, gotta go outside now.
then one of the people saw me come out, and then he reported to the other people that I'm there. so the people went to a place near the bridge to my house. then a kid wearing a violet hood came out of nowhere. i wanted to say, "whaa!!! help me! there's a ghost!" but I didn't coz everyone will think I crazy. (yes, i crazy...)
so I walked to the place near the bridge and waved "hi!". then all the mommies and daddies in the place near the bridge also waved hi to me. then i walked to the 3 kids holding blitzballs. they wanted me to sign it. I signed the blitzball of the orange haired kid first. he said,
"can you sign this?"
"no prob!"
my handwriting wasn't that good though. then signed the blitzball of the kid with a yellow hat coz he said,
"please?"
"alwighty."
then I signed the blitzbal of the kid with hair like tarzan. wait... who is tarzan? I remembered my mom told me stories with a man named tarzan who liked shouting and hitting his chest. so I signed his blitzball coz he said,
"me too!"
"take it easy!"
and I thought, "I AM a kid like you!". so I signed their blitzballs then talked to the other people, like the nice lady with long black hair that squeezed my cheek and said, "are you going to show us that shot tonight?"
"hmm.. i dunno. maybe..."
"you should do it, for us!" after saying that, she kinda made a little dance that no one really noticed. it was scary... then I talked to the man beside her. he was kinda scary coz his hair was kinda like an helmet. oh? it is an helmet. he just said good luck. then I talked to the kid who came out of nowhere, thinking, "whaa!! it's the kid, come on tidus! put it together, you were just imagine things.". then the kid said, "the game tonight, it's very important." i was kinda scared. but then after he spoke, i didnt anymore. then i spoke to a guy wearing grey, he was nice, he asked how i was feeling and told me i'm jecht's son, he'd be crazy if he didnt cheer for me.
then I talked to the other people. they said good luck. then I talked to the two little girls who were kinda excited to talk to me. when I went up to them, the one in pink said,
"can I have your autograph?"
"sure" then the one in blue said,
"good luck tonight."
"nothing to worry about." then I did the twist thingi with the ball but the ball fell down. too bad. so that I won't get embarassed, I said, "oh, if I score a goal, I'l... uh...l do this" I raised my hands.
"that would mean it was for you, kay?" I said. then they started giggling like crazy!!! "whaa! mommy!" I thought. then I asked, "where you seat?"
the one in pink said, "east block in the front row, fifth from the right." then I asked myself, "where's east?". then I said to them, "got it." even though I didn't.
it was time for me to go. they'll scream at me if I dont hurry. so I said to them, "well, gotta go, cheer for me." then the kid with an orange hair said, "two, three," then the three of them said, "teach us how to blitz!" then I said, "hey I gotta game to play." then the kid wearing a yellow hat said, "then teach us after."
"maybe tonight... um... well..."
then the kid that came out of nowhere said, "you can't tonight"
then looked at the kid then I said, "I mean, tommorrow." the kid with a hair like tarzan made me promise then I did. then the three kids made like some sign. oh ya! a prayer. I dunno how it was called a prayer though.
then I left. i was walking in this long long bridge to the stage... i mean stadium. there were lots of water in the buildings in zanarkand. it's a good thing people dont drown. oh ya! the story. I was walking in a long long bridge then I saw the billboard thingi with my dad in it. I looked at it then looked away. disappointed. then I looked at it again, angrily. "hmph!" I said to the billboard, then started to run away from it. then i heard the PA thingi saying,
"I was in a coffee shop running away from home when i heard the news. our hero, jecht, gone. vanished into thin air! hm! my dad and I must have been his biggest fan. I knew how sad he'd be. heck, we all were that day. 'zanar,' I says to myself, 'what are you thinking?', I went running straight back home. we sat up talking about jecht all night. my dad and I never talked so much, whoa... didn't mean to reminisce, folks." then I wondered, "what's reminisce?".
then the PA worked again, it said, "anyway... five years later, the jecht memorial cup tournament is today! the two teams that have won through the finals are of course, the abes from a-east, and the duggles from c-south. i know there's a lot of people out there today to see the star of the abes. in just one year, he's become the team's number one player! he's jecht's blood, and the new hope of blitzball!" then I wondered, "I'm not my dad's blood! I'm my dad's son! whoa! I regret saying that!" then the PA started again, "what kind of super play will he show us today? will we see his father's legendary shot? I don't think I'm the only one excited here, folks!"
then I talked to myself, "hmph! legendary shot! it's just a shot! hmph!" then I ran to the stadium.
when I got to the stadium... uh oh... trouble... a lot of people! whaa!!! mommy!!! so I tried to run through or crawl through. but instead I said, "make way! make way!" didn't work, "coming through, sorry." didn't work either, "hey! I'm gonna be late!" didnt work either. "then I said, let go of me!" it worked! why? I was very near the stage already! hehe... then it's blitzball time!!
there was a electric ball!!! then everyone came in. I stood up and the people cheered. yay! they love me! they really do love me! ahem! back to da stowi! the electric thingi exploded. almost got hit! what I didn't know is! auron was somewhere in the city. near a big ball of water. back to blitzball we were having a hard time. and I managed to KO a member of the enemy! bwahaha!! we got a goal! whoa! intense battle! sphere shot time! I was gonna hit the ball already! but the big ball of water striked us! I hung on the stadium and I fell! whaa!!! the stadium!!!
everyone was running and running! i didn't know what to do! whaa!!! mommy!!!! then I saw... "auron!" I called to the person in a cool red cloak. he had his bottle of apple juice as usual. I went up to him and asked,
"what are you doing here?" i said as I put my hands on my hips,
"I was waiting for you."
"what are you talking about!?" i said as i waved my arms. then he walked away. I tried talking to the people but no one answered. and whenever i come up to them they pass through. whaa!!! ghosts!!!
when I was chasing auron, the kid who came out of no where, came out of no where again. there was a white flash then he appeared. I walked up to him and smiled then I noticed as I look everywhere... everyone froze. "it begins." he said as I looked at him again. I was thinking I wanted to cry and call my mommy.
"wha?"
"don't cry."
I walked up to him again then a white flash again. I looked everywhere then where the kid that appeared out of no where standed. he was gone again. I looked for the kid again, but he really was gone. "what the...?" I said. then I saw auron. i ran up to him and said, "hey wait!"
"hey, not this way." I said as I breathed, oh wait... gasping for breath? okay.
"look!" he said, as he pointed his face to a big ball of water. I looked. wow! what is that thing!?
"we called it sin."
"sin?"
then a squid thingi crashed through a building then landed in front of us! whaa!!! they're attacking me!!! auron!!! "take it." auron said, as he gave me a shiny red long sword. then he standed me up. and let me go. the sword was heavy! of course! i'm a kid! auron said,
"a gift from jecht."
"my daddy?" ewww... I sound like a girl! eeww... then I striked the monster thingi. auron said they were called fiends. when I stroked the longsword, I fell down. then auron posed in his battle form, then he said, "you know how to use it." then I nodded and prepared for battle. auron said, "these ones don't matter, we cut through." yay! i killed all of them! haha!!!
then auron said, don't bother about going after all of them, just hit the ones that matter and run!" oh... auron got an overkill!!! whaa!!!! what does that mean? then the squid looking fiend went in front of us. battle time! i said,
"get out of my town!"
then auron said, "some can't wait to die!" then auron used his overdrive and overkilled the little fiends! hmph! i could've done that! then i did my overdrive. haha!!! more damage than auron!!!! then we defeated the monster! bwahahaha!!!!!!
after the battle, we ran through and then we passed by the billboard with the pic of my dad. the lights were going on and out. it was like he was laughing. then I said,
"what are you laughing at old man!?!"
"auron! let's get out of here!"
"we're expected."
"huh?"
then he ran, and i said, "gimme a break man! i'm just a kid!" and I ran after him. while we were running. more little fiends which auron told me are sinspawns. more sinspawns were behind us. I guess we really were expected.
then, battle time again! whaa!!! I'm getting tired! after killing sinspawns and sinspawns replacing it... we were getting tired. auron said,
"hmph, this could be bad." then he saw an electrical thingi near me.
and said, "that--knock it down."
"what?"
"trust me, you'll see."
then I used my overdrive on it, and it fell to the water which was gasoline! then it exploded! the building with my dad's pic fell, then we jumped on it so that we could get to the other side. sigh, barely made it. i was hanging! whaa!! I yelled, "auron! auron!" then auron talked to the monster thingi, saying "you are sure?"
then he picked me up, "this is it. this is your story. it all begins here." and we were engulfed by shiny white light. it hurt my eyes... whaa!!! but what did auron say? why did he say that it... my story... begins here?
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liked it? hope ya did! i followed what quirky rikku and hikari said. ^_^ i'm a good girl! ^_^ hehe... please... R&R
