Hi!!! InsaneNarutard0111 here! This is my first fan fiction, and I think it's pretty awesome, but only 'cuz it's inspired by 'You're My Best Enemy: Freshman Year' by Who. Is. It. The. Devil. Prod. I'm super sorry this story disappeared, but I accidentally deleted it while managing my account! Yes, I know, I'm a total dweeb. *sigh* Uh... some points about this story... this:
'What's up?' is my split personality Kin. This:
'Hi...' is my other split Kira. They show up throughout the series. Kin is the more boy crazy one, while Kira is somewhat "innocent". Anyway, here it is, my first fan fiction ever's prologue:


'They're Here…'

16 years old, alone in the house-

'With the exception of your favorite fan fictions to keep you company'

for approximately 90 days is... interesting. Going to a public Japanese school is not as interesting, but it does have it's…

'Points'

about it. If being practically hated by everyone there qualifies as a "point".

Even if you're the "prized foreigner".

Yeah, right, "prized"… since when has "prized" meant "totally ignored and shot venomous glares every 2 seconds"?

In what galaxy is that legal? The Ewoks on Endor would never ratify that statement, or at least, I don't think they would… moving on.

There's a group of-

'Excuse my English'

'Sluts'

there that seem to despise me, probably because they caught the supposed "heartthrob" of the school looking at me.

I don't know what they see in that guy.

I'd sooner tease Zetsu then hang around the not even close to real-life version of Sasuke.

Not that there's anything wrong with Zetsu, he's just kind of… different.

Anyway… I had come home from another insanely boring day of school, tired, hungry, and had homework. It was summer, and for a change, the weather was sunny with a few clouds, and a slight breeze, instead of sweltering hot and humid like it normally was in July.

After changing out of my uniform and into shorts and a T-shirt, I took a sketchbook outside to the empty lot in the backyard, along with a volume of Naruto Shippuden manga, a bottle of Mitsuya Cider, and a box of crackers.

Settling myself under a huge tree, I proceeded to draw random characters from the best anime of all time-

'Naruto'

'If you didn't catch that'

pausing occasionally to eat a cracker or drink some soda.

It was peaceful… unnaturally peaceful… that was odd.

Normally, there were cicadas buzzing, or crows cawing in their bizarre human-like voices, or a car driving on the mountain I lived on.

Not today, though.

It was almost completely silent; the creek running close by was the only sound to be heard.

I was almost wishing for something to happen, when all of a sudden-

CRACK.


Well? What do you think? Please review it, 'review' meaning, "tell me what you like, don't like, what it needs, doesn't need" and stuff like that. I don't accept flames. You give me flames, I give you Sasuke's modified version of Amaterasu.
Sasuke: which hasn't be completed yet, but it's still pretty nasty...
... my point. Anyway, yes, hit that lovely green button right there, and do what they call 'review'.
-InsaneNarutard0111