AUTHOR NOTES
Hi everyone! Well, this is the first story I'm uploading. Yeah, I really don't like fanfic characters that much, but seeing as how this is about the only story I have that isn't crap and isn't just regular fiction; Behold, My Ultimate Power. -_-….
Please rate, favorite, comment, and I want critique if any of you are brave enough to face my fury XD just kidding I really want you guys's honest opinion.
So merry Christmas! Hope you all enjoy and hopefully if I'm not too busy being lazy I'll upload some other work too.
~Somewhere in Space~
"You may have killed everyone else on this planet, but you'll have to get past me to get my sisters!"
"I intend to."
"TWISTER BLAST!"
"You are most pathetic in your attacks. I almost feel like I'm fighting a child...oh, that's right..."
"AHHHH-uh-ugh..."
Two little girls watched the showdown in space from a rocky hilltop. One looked about 6, the other was around 15. Both were very nervous. "He's going to make it...he HAS to!" the younger one declared. "He's-falling..." the older one tried to fight back tears. A male of their same species, around 20, walked up to them. "I've finished" he said to them. The older one looked both relieved and anxious. "but-" "you know what he said to do if...this happened..." the alien species looked away."Fine...I want to...do as he wishes...he's older, he knows...better." she looked back once more at the blazing battle. "I wish you luck brother..." she let a sob escape her lips. No sooner did she, than ray canons from the ship nearby start to blast away at the planet. "NOW!" the older one rushed the two girls into the house nearby. A portal awaited them. "Where does it go?" the little girl asked. "I don't know...get in." he helped the two girls into the portal. "HOLD-" but the two girls slipped in without touching. "God..." the boy shook his head."...I just hope its safe..." a ray canon blasted the house. "AGH!" the house collapsed on the spot.
In space, however, the battle was about to be over. The strange creature glowed bluish silver and unleashed a fury of energy from him. The 18-year old, battered and worn, passed out and began to plummet back to his ruined planet. The silver one raced past him and landed right before he crashed to the ground. He scoffed and ran up to...the pile of rubble? "Blast! They're-" he looked around. "Gone..." he turned and walked back to the 18 year old, bruised, weak, barely alive."Well, you will just have to answer my questions until your sister's are found..." he picked up the younger male and flew back to his ship.