Hello guys. I m back with my brand new story on Abhirika. go through it nd tell me whether I continue or not. here we go.
5: 30p.m.
At home:
"the curse of life never runs smooth. tears and laughters go side by side. man is compelled to see the sun of his joys and displeasures set before him so, man should not lose hope. As Shelly said: If winter comes, can spring be far behind." a little girl of 7 years learning her lesson nd a 7 year boy trying to distract her. while a woman after hearing the lesson thinks.
Woman's POV: kya sach main umeed rakhni chahiya. lakin meri zandagi main to asa kuch nahi. cheen liya mugh se mera pyaar. bilkul ghalat kaha hai us writer ne. i m missing u today. plz aa jao.
girl: vivan muje tang karna band kro aur apna homework kro.
vivan: bari aai muje kahne wali. main tumhari baat kyo manno?
girl: kyon k main tum se bari hon.
vivan: sirf 5 minute bari ho. ok
girl: vivan plz go warna...
vivan: (cutting her) warna kya atitude queen...
girl: (to her mother who is in deep thought): mama dekho na vivan muje tang kr raha hai...she made the most innocent face.
mother comes out of her pool of thoughts after hearing her voice.
mama: vivan kyon tang kr rahe ho riya ko.
vivan: srry mom. srry riya.
mom: thats like my good boy.
Doorbell rings:
vivan: yeah dad aa giye.
woman go nd open the door. man cums inside nd goes to sit on sofa. the two kids goes nd hug him. he too hugs them back. woman brings him water. he drinks it in one gulp.
woman: aa giya tum. pakra gya wo khooni?
man: han. us taneesha ka pati hi khooni tha taneesha ki behn ka.
riya: offo mom har waqt ap aur dad ye khooni aur khoon wagare ki batein karte rahte hain. ur in home. no more khooni nd that types of things. ok
woman/man: ok riya maharani. jo hukum.
all laugh
vivan: dad apne promise kiya tha k aaj hum dinner bahar kare ge. chalo na plz...he makes puppy eyes
man: chalo theek han. ja k ready ho jao phir hum chalen ge.
woman: mera maan nahi hai. tum sub gao. main ghar hi rahon ge.
man: o cum on tarika chalo na. dekho bacche b zidd kr rahe hain. plz
tarika: kavin nera maan nahi hai. muje nahi jana.
vivan/riya: plz mummy chalo na. plz plz plz
tarika: ok.
vivan/riya: yeah.
all leave for the restrouant
wait...one two three...bagho...lakin eik minute this story is only abhirika. not any other couple. ap ne puri story read ki neecha tak. ab thora sa neecha review likna nazar aaya ga. waha ja k saare eggs tomatoes type kr do. be fast.
Gys this is not done. 52 reviews for the 1st chapter of my story Pyaar Ki Ye Eik Kahani. nd only 17 reviesw for 2nd chapter. plz i want atleast 30 reviews for chapter 2. otherwise I m not going to post the nxt chap.
nd guys do u know I cum to know tht " Chak de's Balbir is Lady Daya in CID." nahi samjhe. read ahead.." tough cpo Daya. who is famous for breaking doos at the behast of ACP Pradyman, will have company on CID. the show is all set to introduce a lady daya in actress Tanya Abrol, she will play Jaywanti, a touch cop as Daya and will part of the show for good."
tc nd bye